Supernaturalville
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 03/05/09 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

I haven't watched this episode, but I like your story.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!  Sorry it's taken me so long to respond...real life has been a bitch.

Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed) · Date: 13/12/07 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 1

Nice, simple, but powerful story of Sam's fear of becoming evil. Good writing skills!



Author's Response: Thanks!  I take pretty seriously the "mission statement" of the site to generate some higher-quality fiction, so I work hard on my writing.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/09/07 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very good piece.  I love Dean's determination.  I especially like when he tells Sam to trust him to know when there's no hope.  That's a wonderful point.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  It was bugging me that Sam more or less just accepted that he was going to go darkside.  And it's something I thought *someone* needed to say to Sam: if he was going to ask his brother to promise, then he had to trust the promise all the way.

Reviewer: maria noel (Signed) · Date: 26/05/07 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love this !!! excellent tag to this epi.


Author's Response: Thank you!  Reviews are *so*  peanut M&Ms for me!!

Reviewer: Gumnut (Signed) · Date: 05/05/07 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oooh, I really like this and that is one hell of a killer last line.  A nice little tag.

Thanks heaps for writing and sharing.

Nutty
(who should be writing, but is bludging instead)



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for the review!  I live for feedback.  :)  I'm glad you liked it. 

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 25/04/07 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

good job!! i really enjoyed the story...bambers;)

Author's Response:

Hey, thanks a lot!!  I was really nnervous since this was my absolute first fanfic.

Reviewer: Darkfire (Signed) · Date: 10/04/07 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

Nicely done.



Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: maria noel (Signed) · Date: 25/03/07 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

AWWWW it was a cute oneshot!!!

I love this small piece of my heroes brothership....

Great work hun! 



Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Reviews are golden!  :) 

Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 17/03/07 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hey nice first start.  I wouldn't have known you didn't see it all either, so I guess you saw the important parts....lol

Laura



Author's Response: Thanks!  I didn't miss much of the  episode, but one of the things about the show is that important things happen at unexpected times.  I nearly missed the last scene in CSPWDT - my local CW had already shown "this next on the  10 o'clock news" and gone to commercial - AND I nearly missed "the promise" in Playthings whilst answering the phone ("Um, can I call you back at 10?"), I'm a little paranoid.  :)

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 15/03/07 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

What an awesome job you've done on this. Thanks for sharing it. I have seen the entire episode, and this plays out very well as an extra scene - good job with the boys.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it!  I had missed part of the episode (though not much) , so I figured I needed to make a full disclosure since it was important to me that the story was true to the moment.

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