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Reviews For Down By The Bay
Reviewer: Samcentric Chick (Signed) · Date: 15/03/09 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

ooh, i liked this. lol. i'm not good with well rounded reviews, but i've read some of your stuff and i so far i like it. so i guess get used to reviews that mostly say: this was great! ...

poor 6 yr old sam having dreams of yellow eyes, and poor 9 yr old 'daddy' dean having to hear that. *goes off to read more of your stuff*

Reviewer: Mickie28 (Signed) · Date: 18/06/08 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

clever

Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 1

I like Dean's POV more than i like Sam's in Blue Crayon's... But that's just because, when I think of Dean's emotions, I think; hearwrentching, mindblowing, nuclear reaction, a-bomb, fantasticmegamonsterfragilistic...something something etc. etc. and I think you are very good at capturing his feelings. You respect the chracter, but at the same time you make them your own and that is unique and amazing to read...

I think I have used the word: amazing A LOT when reviewing your stories, but every one is true... keep up the great work...

Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

wow, off to the next one...

Dix 

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 1

Aw gee that's heartbreaking and filled with portents of horrors to come. Clever you, check your eyes there's some devil in you somewhere!  Birdie x

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/09/07 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is amazing!  It starts out so happy then changes very unexpectedly.  You lead us to believe that Sam's just had a nightmare and then you drop the bomb by revealing the nightmare actually predicts the future.  sneaky!

Reviewer: TheBypassed (Signed) · Date: 03/07/07 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

Ok, I totally loved the foreshadowing. I can see why the boys would have forgotten this occurrence; not because it was by any means forgettable, but because they wouldn't want to remember it.

Reviewer: kiara_ratterjmouse (Signed) · Date: 05/06/07 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

WOW! i loved that! it's very clever. I have a younger sister at home but she never inspires anything like that! That was fantastic!

Reviewer: akumabarai (Signed) · Date: 09/05/07 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was great.  Nice foreshadowing.

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 12/04/07 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

"No matter how many times I ask." good pre-ep to Playthings.

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 20/03/07 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great - absolutely great. Sets up the future events very well.

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 18/03/07 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 1

You are an excellent author and very creative for coming up with all of this in 30 minutes. Great job!

Reviewer: stanfordchick (Signed) · Date: 17/03/07 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great job that was a great strory..... Sam already knowing what was going to happen to him cooool

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