Reviewer: Destra (Signed) · Date: 26/09/09 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 25: The Loophole
I've loved this story from start to finish. Really happy that we'll be hearing more from Dean and Asher...can't wait. Great work, thanks.
Author's Response: Awww! Your review makes me smile! I'm thrilled you liked the story and Dean and Asher being together. More coming soon, I hope. *crosses fingers*
Reviewer: Synera (Signed) · Date: 28/07/09 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Loophole
AH MAN! What a twist, I didn't see it coming, but then again I didn't think you'd have the wedding in this chapter either. Great chapter, Now I can't wait for september. Syn
Author's Response: Thanks for the wonderful review! I'm delighted that I was able to surprise you. I hope my muse returns soon so the next story doesn't disappoint.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 23/07/09 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Loophole
Yay, married at last but happy ever after,no way,LOL. Another great story,i can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: *laughing* Yeah, married but not happily ever after. I'm happy that I have you on my hook.
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 23/07/09 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 25: The Loophole
"It could be Sam"---"Not if he wants to live." (I LOVE these lines!) Girl, your sneak peak was all hot and heavy then you lup and eave us hanging. Bring on the sequel and spare no details, really, spare no details *wink*.
Author's Response: Hee! Hee! So glad you liked!
Reviewer: Supernaturalfan15 (Signed) · Date: 21/07/09 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Loophole
Aw poor dean kill lilith kill lilith kill lilith
Author's Response: Tee! Hee! Love your comment!
Reviewer: Synera (Signed) · Date: 17/07/09 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 24: The Final Decision
Yea!! He's not being an idiot. He's not, right? Great part.
Author's Response: I guess that all depends on if marrying Asher is being an idiot? I hope nothing happens to keep them from getting married. Thanks for reading Shae! Just one more chapter to go.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 16/07/09 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 24: The Final Decision
A wonderfuly romantic chapter,i can't wait for them to get married at last, but i'm not sure if you will let them, i know what you writers are like LOL
Author's Response: Hmmm...? Marriage? But then all the sexual tension would be over. I guess you'll just have to read my next story. *evil laugh* Thanks for the review Lindsay! I love hearing from you!!
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 16/07/09 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 24: The Final Decision
Ok, call me naive, but----"he never" what?????
Author's Response: Ooops! Sorry. I guess it wasn't as obvious as I thought it would be. He never felt for any other woman what he felt for her. Not even during sexual encounters. Thanks for pointing that out. I'll have to go back and revise it a little.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 16/07/09 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 23: Imagined Transgressions
A great update, glad Drap's got the message at last, now we just need Dean to come to his senses.
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed it! Some men just don't learn the easy way. Case in point...Dean. Maybe he'll learn someday. Thanks for reading, Lindsay! Your reviews brighten my day!
Reviewer: Synera (Signed) · Date: 15/07/09 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 23: Imagined Transgressions
Great new part. Little brother may understand, and Asher may think that everythings okay now, but someone is still gonna have to smack Dean upside the head to stop him from walking away. I definitely will stay closer. *holds right hand up* I promise.
Author's Response: Thanks for keeping up with the story Shae! I love hearing from "the regulars!" Be my guest to slap Dean silly, if you think that will help. Maybe that will bring him to his senses? Doubt it. You'd better stay close! I missed you! If you don't, I'll hunt you down. I got skills I learned from Supernatural. ;)
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 14/07/09 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 23: Imagined Transgressions
Love Sam's text message! Poor Dean, always willing to sacrifice himself for others and never realizing he makes things worse. Oh, and I really don't like Drap. I'm just saying...
Author's Response: Thanks for the fun review Kathy! It made me smile! Glad you liked Sam's text. I'll bet Dean did, too. ;) It seems that the Winchesters are forever doomed to throw themselves under the bus, even when they don't need to. Maybe someday they'll learn to govern their personal lives as wisely as they prepare for a hunt? Naw. The latest poll shows that Drap isn't winning any popularity contests. Kind of makes you wonder why Asher loves him so much?
Reviewer: Synera (Signed) · Date: 12/07/09 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 22: Taking Care of Business
AHHHHH!!!! You can't leave it there? Please tell me you'll be updating soon? Pretty please with a cherry on top? Okay, enough with the begging. That was a great story, and I can't wait to see how and who knock some sense into Dean's head that Asher really, REALLY loves him. Thanks for the email about my name, it reminded me that I hadn't been on in awhile.
Author's Response: Hee! Hee! I update on Tuesdays and Thursdays. Only a few chapters left. I'm glad you like the story. Yep, someone needs to get through to Dean. He just won't let himself be happy. Thanks for letting me know the reason for your penname. I like to see why people choose them. A family computer is one I didn't expect. It sounds so soft and beautiful. I'm glad that my inquiry brought you back to UnGen for another look around! Now don't stray away again young lady! :)
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 22: Taking Care of Business
Well that served Drap right, you did a great job with this chapter, i wanted to climb into the pc and slap Drap my self lol.
Author's Response: Thanks! The credit goes to my fabulous beta GottheShining. It was her idea for the confrontation between the two men. I'm so glad she suggested it. It spiced up the chapter wonderfully! Wanting to climb into the pc and slap Drap is quite a compliment! I'm thrilled that you were drawn in so much! I can't thank you enough for your continued support!! Knowing I have readers out there who are following along makes me put an extra effort into making my stories exciting and consistent. Sometimes I stop and ask myself, "what will the readers want to see?"
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 09/07/09 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 22: Taking Care of Business
WooHoo...It turned out as well as I hoped it would:) The 'waitress down the street' line was perfect! poor, poor Dean.
Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked it! Your suggestions were just what it needed! I couldn't use the Doublemint Twins because in my story arc that didn't really happen so I substituted the waitress. I'm glad it worked for you! Yep, poor Dean. At least he has a loyal brother who has his six. Thanks for the review and especially all your fabulous advice!
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 09/07/09 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 21: Crossing the Line
Love the revisions!
Author's Response: Thanks! I have a marvelous beta! ;)
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 08/07/09 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 21: Crossing the Line
Awww, poor Dean always thinks he's worthless,great update, i can't wait to see Drap get his.
Author's Response: Yep, poor Dean. Lucky for him he has a good woman who sees what a hottie he is and won't let him forget it!
Reviewer: Destra (Signed) · Date: 04/07/09 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 20: The Lines That Should Never Be Crossed
LOVED your descriptions of Dean. I think I fell a little bit in love with him again. What's up with Drap? You know, that man's just not right. Can Dean kill him yet? Kate
Author's Response: What's not to love about Dean? Can you imagine coming out of anesthesia and seeing him by your bed? Ahhh! You'd think you'd died and gone to heaven. Drap definitely has some issues. Being Asher's best friend he's going to be part of Dean's life for a while (unless he leaves Asher). No, Dean can't kill him. Ha! Nice try! But we'll see who clocks him first. Thanks for reading Kate! I always love your comments!
Reviewer: Destra (Signed) · Date: 04/07/09 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 19: Meet Dean Winchester
I got my Dean door kicking - what more could I ask. He shot it too. Hee! I don't like the way Dean's thinking that Asher is better off without him. If he decides to leave her, I'm holding you personally responsible!! Kate
Author's Response: It doesn't get much better than Dean shotting and kicking in doors. That ones dead now. Ooops! I hope Dean doesn't leave Asher then if you're going to be all up in my face babout it. Maybe I should hide, just in case. We know Dean has no true idea of his value. Thanks for the review Kate! I'mthrilled you still like it.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 20: The Lines That Should Never Be Crossed
A beautiful chapter,you described Dean perfectly, is it hot in here lol.
Author's Response: Thanks! I think we're both experiencing heat waves 'cause I had to cool down with a shower. Hmmm...?
Reviewer: Supernaturalfan15 (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 20: The Lines That Should Never Be Crossed
i knew you wouldnt kill asher :D
Author's Response: I couldn't kill off Dean's soulmate. She's got some ass-kickin' to do in the future.
Reviewer: Supernaturalfan15 (Signed) · Date: 01/07/09 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 19: Meet Dean Winchester
oh come on she can't die surely don't be mean shannon :'(
Author's Response: Die? Would I do something like that, Jen? Check back on Thursday to find out. Same Bat time, same Bat channe. Thanks for keeping up with my story!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 01/07/09 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 19: Meet Dean Winchester
Another brilliant update, thought it was a bit to easy when they killed the Volkshik,and who can blame poor Dean for going off it, he's got a good right lol.
Author's Response: Yeah, the life of a Winchester is never gumdrops and lollipops. Just because they killed the bad guy doesn't mean they're done. Dean is pissed that all the horny devils slinking around in the world are after his woman. The immediate threat may be over but the hornets nest has been stirred and even more crap is gonna hit the fan. Stay tuned for Thursday. Thanks for sticking with me Lindsay!
Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 26/06/09 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 3: Useful Sam
Hmm!! - Looks like a very interesting story -- I intend to check it out - on my list of things to read further here, once I get the chance again -- Like the way you write, btw...!
Author's Response: Thanks Ash! I'm always delighted to be added to a reading list! (I have one of my own) Thanks for reading and dropping me a line. Reviews ar yummy and zero calories!
Reviewer: Destra (Signed) · Date: 24/06/09 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 18: The Volkshik's Revenge
Chapters like this are the reason you’re still my favorite author. Top quality writing.
Author's Response: Awww Kate. Thanks! Reviews like this are why I try so hard. *giggle* You said favorite author. Tee! Hee! I like that!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 18: The Volkshik's Revenge
Hurry up Sam. A very exciting chapter, roll on Thursday.
Author's Response: Thanks for the r&r, girl! I'm glad you're excited.
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