Reviewer: BriaICHS (Signed) · Date: 10/02/09 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 15
that was and awesome story but you have to finish it please im begging you your story like a drug i just can't get enough your and awesome writer
Author's Response: thank you so much! i'm glad to feed your addiction. lol. i hope to post the rest pretty quick. so don't worry, i won't leave you hangin for long.
Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed) · Date: 08/02/09 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 14
So, I read the whole thing today and this review is for all 14 chapters: This is SUCH a GREAT story! I usually don't read stories involving an oc, but this one had me hooked right from the start, and then it just kept getting better and better... I'm kind of sad that the boys are leaving, Sage has grown on me and I really feel for her, she's an AWESOME character. And you've written her beautifully. Well, I'm looking forward to more, and I can't for the life of me guess what will happen next! But I hope to find out soon :) 10/10!!
Author's Response: yay! i'm so glad you like it. esp since you don't usually like oc stories. this is my first story so i thought it'd be better to write it in the pov of a character that wasn't already established...i hope you continue to enjoy what i do with the story. the pressure is on!
Reviewer: Irish eyes for Dean (Signed) · Date: 08/02/09 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 13
Ooooo...I think Dean likes her more than he's letting on. Poor Sage. I felt so bad for her. The emptiness and feeling of abandonment she's experiencing is very touching. Great chapter.
Author's Response: possibly...and yea, poor sage! will she ever get to be happy? you'll see.
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 05/02/09 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 12
You handled the conversation well, I think it worked because it was sweey but brief. This chapter was good, I was worried about how Sam would be once he'd woken up. lol, thank God he's okay, he is okay isn't he? I liked! x
Author's Response: yay me again. i think there's something i'm worried about in every chapter! well, really just the whole story. lol. but i'm glad you liked the convo. i just thought that even though there'd been all that time lost between them that she'd still make it brief, ex: home. and shame on you. you think i'd actually tell you if sam was ok!?! i can't do that. however, you could prolly figure it out if you read my response (in my email) to the kind of stories and endings you like.
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 05/02/09 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 11
Good chapter, I hate to love that yellow eyed bitch. lol, good plan with Dean pretending he was going to shoot Sage. I do wonder though, why the paramedics didn't tend to the dead body. After the demon died it left the meat suit but they kinda forgot he was there at all. All in all I liked the chappy:D
Author's Response: *wipes brow* i'm so glad you liked how he killed the yed. that was another thing i was worried about. i thought maybe it'd come across as sorta unbelievable. and again, i didn't think about the dead body. just assume they knew he was dead bc sage and dean didn't say anything about it and then the paramedics called the coroner. lol. obviously i don't always think of everything.
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 05/02/09 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 10
Damn! Sam's evil. Sage hasn't got anything to lose cause Sammy plans to kill her and Dean anyway, I wish she woulda told Dean what happened. I'm a little surprised Dean isn't just a little suspicious, after a demon came and didn't even try to kill or snatch them. A demon could have easily ran through the bathroom door, Dean should be more eager to know exactly what happened while his was gone. Then after they're both attacked he lets them walk to the restaurant without the security of a car no questions asked. I'm eager to know of Sam's evil plan :D
Author's Response: evil sam is awesome so i had to have him in the story. i'm not sure my evil sam is awesome, but i had to try. and she didn't tell dean straight away bc she was just trying to stay alive as long as she could. sure, dean should've asked more questions and probably should've picked up on something being weird by the way sage was acting. however, he trusts sam over everything so he took it for what he said and just got them out of there. but i do agree dean should've said something about them walking to the restaurant. honestly, i really didn't think about that.
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 05/02/09 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 9
Good chapter, I like the whole salt around the car, never would have thought of that and I'm pretty sure I haven't seen it done on the show. Good idea! Poor Ketner, those bastard demons showed no mercy. I like the scratched initals in the chair, clever!
Author's Response: yay! i'm always so nervous about your reviews. lol. i'm glad you liked the initials thing. i was sorta worried about that. and the salt around the car just made sense.
Reviewer: Irish eyes for Dean (Signed) · Date: 22/01/09 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 11
*Red Tape - it'll drive you nuts* ..lol. good ol yellow eyes. looking forward to seeing if Sam is gonna wake up evil or not... looking forward even more to the blossoming feelings between Sage and Dean and how their going to overcome the whole 'mary's spirit' thing. great reading as usual.
Reviewer: Irish eyes for Dean (Signed) · Date: 17/01/09 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 10
wow..evil sam is a scary s.o.b.. That was a riveting read. I can't wait to see where this is going especially what he's gonna do with Sage. Great chapter again.
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 14/01/09 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 9
Hey I just read your three last chapters in one take so I didn't review, sorry. I just got caught up. Great story so far. I'm starting to get a really scary and heartbroken feeling about Sage. It almost feels like she's deluding herself in thinking that she's fine and everything. I almost feel a little sad when reading her thoughts. Oh, and I got completely breathless when she started crying at the bar. I love that she's more like a sister to the brothers, but again- the vibe I get from reading your story is that she really doesn't think of them as brothers... It's a little weird and I'm probably WAY off, but it's just this little thorn gnawing in my side. GREAT job! Completely wonderful! I'm gonna leave you some well deserved stars for the chapters I didn't review :)
Author's Response: thank you for the reivew and the stars! i'm so glad you like it. sage is damaged and probably a little too comfortable with everything. however, she is in for a rude awakening, and it's just around the corner. and yes, it appears that so far she's like a sister. but i wouldn't say WAY off. lol.
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 12/01/09 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 8
Dum dum dum dum...are you scared? I think you do really really well in the dialogue department, I liked chapter six a lot, like the cheap shots between Dean and Sage. One little thing...oh no, she's at it again...I promise it's one small thing. The trio sharing the room is plausible because they would want her safe but Sam sharing a bed with her...I kinda see him as the guy to take the floor so she can have it. Nice touch, with Dean and Sage winding each other up in the bar, me liked! HA, Sam wants to stay neutral yet he fills Sage in on Dean's usual routine. (Chicks) bad boy. I am honestly, looking forward to the next update hon. You're doing a great job! Schelz
Author's Response: yay! only one bad thing! however, there was reasoning behind it. i just thought that they would be comfortable with each other, so why should he have to sleep on the floor every night? the floor of a motel room - i think - would be very uncomfortable. but my sis said the same thing, but i fought her on it:) and yes, i agree with your "ha" about sam wanting to stay neutral. and that's all i'm going to say. anyway, i'm glad you are liking it. now that only intensifies my nervousness. i hope i don't disappoint.
Reviewer: dangermouse00 (Signed) · Date: 11/01/09 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 8
Ooooh me likey.....
Author's Response: thank you!!
Reviewer: Irish eyes for Dean (Signed) · Date: 11/01/09 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 8
This chapter was so funny. Great writing. I love the interactions between Sage and Dean. Hilarious!
Author's Response: YAY ME!!
Reviewer: Supernaturalfan15 (Signed) · Date: 11/01/09 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 8
this is freaking amazing for a first fanfic my hat is off to you
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That calms my nerves... a little. I just hope you enjoy the rest of it.
Reviewer: Irish eyes for Dean (Signed) · Date: 08/01/09 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 6
I really liked this chapter. I like the soft side of Dean and his cheekiness too...'princess' lol... keep posting...I can't wait to read more..:)
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 08/01/09 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 6
Oh god I have a very omnious feeling about the three people's relationship. On one hand I can see Dean and Sage learning to get along and even care for each other. And on the other hand I can see Dean pushing her away and making the story title a fact :o Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: you're looking into the future. lol...i'm so glad you are liking it! *hugs*
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 08/01/09 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 5
Love it. I love how you're delving into the aspect of ghost possession. A lot of writers on this site (me included :P) usually stick to demonic possession, but to see a ghost, and a friendly one at that, trying to take over is really something. And you do a wonderful job writing it :)
Author's Response: thank you! i'm not sure the way i'm going about it is how any other person would ever think it would be, but creative liberty i guess.
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 08/01/09 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 4
Ahh,.... "I'm a lesbian!" Hilarious!
Author's Response: i certainly thought it was drastic. lol.
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 07/01/09 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 5
Hey J, I'm sorry it's taken so long to come on here, last time we spoke it was chap 2 I was on and now all these, what a treat ;) I wrote out a whole review and lost it, so here it goes again. lol I love the addition of Missouri, I like to get my Missouri fix anywhere I can find it. (awesome) one thing though, and I could be totally wrong but I'm not sure Missouri would just walk up to Sage and say she's a psychic, but I did like her mentioning she was drawn to her. After inviting her to dinner with the excuse of welcoming her to town, would have been a good time to reveal what she does. =D I like the twist with Mary and I laughed out loud when Dean shut Sam up from telling their whole lief story. Though I think Dean was quite harsh and heavy with Sage over something she almost said. Also Sam going into depth about their past so soon, especially about him being 'boy king' and crying with her, I felt it a bit rushed hon. There wasn't anything to set him off that way, unless it was because he was overwhelmed with his mother's spirit. There I was thinking Dean woulda been more skeptical and Sam woulda been all over Sage to contact Mary, but then again Sam has had time to talk with her in depth about their lives. I think Sage is being sooo brave and I like her determination to help. After all she's been through others would either be an emotional mess or completely shut out emotion but Sage has found a balance. Me likes! Overall I am really liking where this going, so please keep up the good work ;) Schelz x
Reviewer: Irish eyes for Dean (Signed) · Date: 06/01/09 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 5
excellent chapter....I like the idea of the possesion and the thought of the boys getting to talk to their mom...can't wait to read some more..
Reviewer: Irish eyes for Dean (Signed) · Date: 03/01/09 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 4
Great Job. keep up the good work...drunken Sammy he he.....i can just picture him with the puppy dog eyes..too cute...
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 03/01/09 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oooohh wonderful! Can't wait to see how this story evolves :) Great job, Don't keep us waiting too long.
Reviewer: Irish eyes for Dean (Signed) · Date: 01/01/09 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 1
Congrats on your first fanfic. It's addictive reading. Sage sounds like a really interesting character. And thanks for re-introducing us to Missouri again. She's great!..
Author's Response: thanks! and yea, i love missouri!
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 31/12/08 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 2
Ok I'm hooked. Keep tha chappies coming because I can already feel myself jonsing after another :D :D :D Great job, hun. Cheers, Andi
Author's Response: YAY! I'm so glad you like it so far. Thanks for the encouraging words!
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 31/12/08 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
I love this story. No one can argue that you're not a good writer. Lovely work. I love your very clean way of "breaking the lid of a story" - sorta' speaking- I like how you've already created the base for a character to explore and develope. Very nice job. If you hadn't told in the notes that this was your first story I wouldn't have guessed. Nice, very nice ;) Gonna keep reading now...
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