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Reviews For Good Intentions Paved the Way

Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 06:47 PM · On: Epilogue

A.W.E.S.O.M.E.
I can't believe it's finished :( *is sad* ... I was SO happy every time I saw the banner with the black eyes when there was a new chapter and now... :( *is still sad*
But I absolutely LOVED this story, which surprises me because, as I said before, I don't usually read stories about romance or OCs, but this one just grabbed me and wouldn't let go... and I'm sad that it's over...
But, really, ThAnKs for this! I loved how it all turned out, and HOT!Demon!Dean (yeah, I thought he was the hottest demon ever) got the girl (love Demon Sage by the way) yay! Although I'm, like Sage, a little sad about Demon Sam, because I just loved how you wrote him. He was so cool and evil and badass! I'm gonna miss him...
Anyway, GREAT story, PLEASE write some more! I enjoyed every single second of this, and I love Sage... she's totally a Winchester for me now, and I'm really really really going to miss her. A lot.
100/100 :) :D

Author's Response:
W.O.W.
*blushes*
Thank you so much for all the praise! and like you, i am sorta sad, albeit a little relieved.
I'm so glad you liked Sage. I know lots of people don't like OCs, so i was a little worried about that. and i'm totally stoked that you liked how i wrote the demon!winchesters.
I'm not sure if I'm gonna write anymore right now though. I have thought about possibly writing more for this story, like things that weren't fully talked about in the story, lost time and stuff. so since you liked Sage so much, perhaps i could be persuaded to write something else if you have any ideas.
Again, thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: BriaICHS (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 05:39 PM · On: Epilogue

loved every single chapter

Author's Response: thank you for reading! i'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Irish eyes for Dean (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 03:21 PM · On: Epilogue

ok so WOW!! what more to say - well the ''good'' guy got his girl at the end which i'm super happy about...lol
the last chapter was brilliantly written. I loved that Sage remembered Dean and I loved the way she ended up being the one to kill him.
I'm really sad that this story is finished. You need to write some more a.s.a.p..

Author's Response: lol. i knew you'd be happy about that!...i'm glad you liked! not sure i'll be writing more though. it all depends.

Reviewer: BriaICHS (Signed) · Date: 16/03/09 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 22

yeah!!cant wait

Author's Response: thanks for reading! glad you like it.

Reviewer: Irish eyes for Dean (Signed) · Date: 16/03/09 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 22

i cannot wait for Dean to crawl out of hell and get his revenge on Sam. I just hope he doesnt come after Sage too.. I want my happy ending.

Author's Response: um... ok. *hides face* and is there really such a thing as a happy ending? *runs away*

Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed) · Date: 15/03/09 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 22

Waaaaa, Demon Dean!!! I'm so looking forward to that.
Is it wrong that I love demon Sage and demon Sam and I think demon Dean will be the hottest demon ever?
I'm liking demons now... great. See what you've done? :P
I love this, and I'm really really looking forward to the rest!

Author's Response:
i'm ecstatic that you are liking this so much, i just hope i dont disappoint in the end :(
lol at demon dean being hot and your love of demons in general. however, i cannot be held responsible for any new found obsessions resulting from the characters in my story... it's all them:P lol. jk.
thanks once again for reading!

Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed) · Date: 15/03/09 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 21

This is so cool!! Sam and Sage make such a good demon couple! huh... I never thought I'd say that...
Awesome chapter... moving on to the next one...

Author's Response:
hehe. i like them together too. that was another one of those things that just happened:)
thanks for reading.

Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed) · Date: 15/03/09 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 20

I actually REALLY LOVE this... Sam, Sage and Dean becoming demons was definitely NOT what I was expecting... but for some strange reason it made total sense, and this story absolutely fascinates me. I'm really curious as to how it will all end up, and you have me astonished and totally hooked.
Awesome description of hell and Sage's transformation... Dean's torture broke my heart, but it was awesomely written and vivid.
Simply amazing. 10/10 :)

Author's Response:
thank you so much. i'm glad you're still reading! the three of them becoming demons was a surprise to me too actually, but that's where they went with it. lol.
i'm glad you liked my description of hell. i really wanted to make it dark, i thought dean's torture helped with that. this i think is one of my fav chapters.

Reviewer: BriaICHS (Signed) · Date: 05/03/09 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 21

update plz ur killing with the long breaks lolz

Reviewer: Irish eyes for Dean (Signed) · Date: 25/02/09 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 21

OMG Sage is one evil lady! She's a real bad ass.
I'm surprised she can remember anything but I'm hoping she wont be long figuring out that it was Dean she remembers and not Sam.
LOL at the fight and then the 'fling of ecstacy'....

Author's Response:
yay! she's evil.
and yea, i really tried to figure out a diff way to say 'fling of ecstacy' but once it popped into my head i couldn't think of anything else. oh well.

Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 25/02/09 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 14

Oh dear. I think now is a good time for a little break. And I see now that the complexity WAS in fact the inten. Very nice job. Good writing.

Author's Response:
*blushes*
thank you very much!

Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 25/02/09 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 13

Oh Dean....

Author's Response:
yes, oh dean...
i'm glad you are still reading and seemingly enjoying the story.

Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 25/02/09 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 12

Ok so either Sage is really really REALLY complicated which testifies to amazing writer capabilites on your part, or she is as plain as the character would like to think she is. And it frustrates the hell outta me because I don't have any previous writing of yours to compare with.... ahr shuks...

Author's Response: uh oh. i'd like to think it's your first assumption, but i'm not so sure that's true:(

Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 25/02/09 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 11

It's so sad that she can be so convinced of how insignificant she is, when the exact opposite is true.
Ok so at first I of course thought that Sam was in fact possessed, but the way you've explained it with Azazel's power "infecting" him, it would seem logical if he stopped being evil now that the demon is dead. This story is wreaking havoc with my nerves, I tell you...

Author's Response: yay me for actually being logical. that's something i struggle with on a daily basis. lol.

Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 25/02/09 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 10

I have a knot in my stomach the size of Road Island... Seriously.... Emotional torture takes on a whole new meaning with this story.

Author's Response: thank you! i achieved my goal then.

Reviewer: Irish eyes for Dean (Signed) · Date: 23/02/09 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 20

wow...really vivid description of hell. it spooked me a bit..
cruel twist of fate having her torture Dean's soul at the end.
excellent as always..

Reviewer: BriaICHS (Signed) · Date: 22/02/09 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 20

awesome chapter cant wait to read more

Reviewer: Irish eyes for Dean (Signed) · Date: 21/02/09 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 19

wow.. Evil Sam is creepy as hell !! he's a little on the obsessed side with Sage isn't he.
Bring Dean back please. Poor Sage needs someone by her side. I can't wait to read some more and see where this is going!...

Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed) · Date: 13/02/09 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 18

:O
You did not just kill Dean Winchester! :O
OMG YOU DID!
!!!!!!!!
And now Sam's probably evil... How on earth are you gonna get them out of this????
Sage! That poor girl! She's lost EVERYONE! And right when she had something going on with Dean! How could you? *looks to the side in feigned indignation*
But I'm still totally on board with this :) Awesome chapter, really intense... I'm still in shock. Surprise after surprise... I guess I should have seen it coming. But I didn't!
Loved it, want more! ... soon? :)
Ps: Bring Dean back!

Reviewer: BriaICHS (Signed) · Date: 13/02/09 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 18

thanks for the daily adds

Reviewer: Irish eyes for Dean (Signed) · Date: 13/02/09 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 18

Yeah...I hate you...lol.. How could you kill Dean just when he and Sage were finally going to sort things out...:( It's not fair I tell you ..Its not fair..

Author's Response: noooooooo...say it ain't so!! you can't hate me. the story's not finished yet!

Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed) · Date: 12/02/09 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 17

nonononononononononononononono!!
It's not true! Can't be! RIGHT?? please!! *sobs uncontrollably* NO!
Sam.... Don't kill Sammy PLEASEEEEE!
Dean's gonna FREAK!! Hell, I'm freaking out! I love Sam!!
Ok... *calms herself...a little*
I want Sammy alive. But awesome chapter! Dean says I love you! I'm feeling somehow identified with Sage, because my heart stopped a beat when I read that! Really looking forward to the next chapter (where you reveal the phone call is just a HUGE mistake and we see Sam alive and breathing... right?? ... purdy please??)

Author's Response:
should i call 9-1-1? just try and breath. lol.
i love sam too. he's actually my fav, but it was necessary. i'm sorry! don't hate me. *hugs*
and yes, dean finally revealed his feelings and said 'i love you' - i thought it was about time!

Reviewer: Irish eyes for Dean (Signed) · Date: 12/02/09 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 17

OMG...you didnt just kill off Sam did you? WOW....i did not see that one coming...you cannot leave us hanging another day for the next chapter...Seriously
Oh and Yay for Dean and Sage. That was a pretty deep conversation for Dean but it was sweet.

Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 16

Missouri died!!? *weeps* I really liked her!
You're right, there's a lot going on in this chapter... Sammy had been hiding that little secret! I was as surprised as Sage... But it kind of made sense... And what's up with Dean? That man and his fear of emotions... well, that's just how Dean is...
A year has passed already? wow... I'm glad Sage is starting to move on but I'm kind of sad she doesn't see the boys often... "We both turned and walked away, separated by our different lives again" --> sad!
Loved the chapter! Really looking forward to the next one!! :)

Author's Response:
yes, missouri. but i wanted the boys to go back to lawrence and see sage, but not bc they were there to visit her. so the plot to kill her was born. but i love her too!
i'm glad that sam's secret made some sense. i tried to hint throughout the story. maybe i didnt hint enough?
she will see them soon! and yea, dean is emotionally disfunctional.
thanks again! the next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow:)

Reviewer: Irish eyes for Dean (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 15

wow. great chapter. i'm loving this tension between Dean and Sage. it's so exciting. i'm really dying to see what becomes of all of this.

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