Reviewer: Medusa (Signed) · Date: 31/07/10 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
What a wonderful fractured fairy tale!! I loved it. Thank you for such an enjoyable read!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for leaving a few words. It has taken a long time to complete this but it was fun to do. Yes I guess you could say it was fractured, the story seemed to develop a life of its own after a while, Very much an UnRuly Muse story. :) Thank you Jacq
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 31/01/10 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 9
A very good chapter, i enjoyed it, looking forward to the grand final.
Author's Response: I didnt put a reply!! Gosh sorry about that *6months later!* Thank you I hope you are able to read the last part. I have missed you being around, and I hope all is well with you. Jacq x
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 29/12/09 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 8
A very good chapter, looking forward to finding out what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you... So sorry to have missd these - I think it must have been the bad weather at the time, addled the brain, all that white stuff. sorry. Jacq xx
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 26/12/09 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 7
I'm glad Belladonna got what she deserved,nasty woman, looking forward to all of the dilemmas and decisions in the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you, i do have the nect chapter done, will post soon Jacq x
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 23/08/09 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 6
An action packed chapter, i'm glad Rupert's seen the error of his ways, i hope he gets his chance for a new start,looking forward to the next part.
Author's Response: Thank you, I hadn't realised how long this one had got, so now only one to do... Jacq
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 23/08/09 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 6
An action packed chapter, i'm glad Rupert's seen the error of his ways, i hope he gets his chance for a new start,looking forward to the next part.
Author's Response: oops lol Jacq
Reviewer: saddlebag (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 5
This is getting better in terms of detail and tension, and have I told how much I love the addition of Sarah and Cassie? - I adore your muse for thinking outside the box and using a fairytale theme only to bring a nightmare, I'm hoping for a happy ending. It isn't saying much, but at least alive. Great cliffie and always, thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you yes it is Cassie, As for the ending...sorry - err just kidding! Lol And thank you for the stars Jacq
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 18/05/09 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 5
Oh no a nasty cliffhanger lol, Sam and Dean are starting to get lot's of flashbacks now,fantastic chapter, i'm really enjoying this story,looking forward to more.
Author's Response: I'm getting the hang of cliffhangers! lol..thank you, its fun to write this, but I never realised how hard it was to keep up with the chapter writing. Jacq
Reviewer: aripagetx_uk (Signed) · Date: 27/03/09 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 4
Just wanted to say, I just started reading and I have to go to work but will save to doc so I can read it later. I am loving what I am reading.. always loved the cinderalla stories.... love your take on it and you brought one of my favorites back SARAH... I think they had chemistry & it was always fun to see the outakes from that episode.... anyway got to run....
Author's Response: Many thanks for the review and star rating, very much appreciated, I had always hoped Sam would go back to Sarah one day...I am starting the next chapter soon. Thank you...Jacq
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 21/03/09 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 4
Another excellent update to this wonderful story, i'll be waiting for more.
Author's Response: Thank you. Well at least its differant, sorry for the long wait, I'll try to start the next part soon...Jacq
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 30/01/09 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 3
An exciting chapter, i can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Oh good, glad you liked it, chapter 4 is started but may be a little while yet, thank you...Jacq
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 30/01/09 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 3
This is my favourite chapter, I couldn't tear my eyes away from the page. It had some very sweet and touching moments, and the detail to the ball was amazing because it created images. I just wish Dean had got the chance to tell Sam they were brothers. Nice touch with the sandal, but poor Sam is starting to suffer! Can't wait until Dean finds them. Great writing! Schelz x
Author's Response: Its all down to that unruly imagination and your much appreciated support, thank you...Jacq x
Reviewer: saddlebag (Signed) · Date: 28/01/09 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 2
I'm just getting warmed and ready for another chapter, very good detail and scene building. I like that this story and your imagination is rebellious as far as our standard supernatural goes. It's nice to see something more than just the standard hunt, with hurt Dean and rescue Sam, everyones doing it which makes it boring very quickly. Thanks for sharing something different. Kelis
Author's Response: Hello again, thank you again. Yes I do like to go a differant way, never anything nasty, Chapter3 just needs adjusting, will be ready soon...Jacq
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 10/01/09 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 2
Just brilliant, this story just keeps getting better.
Author's Response: Many thanks, Cinders shall go to the ball...Jacq
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 10/01/09 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 2
This chapter is very entertaining, I love Sam Cinders, poor thing, I just wanna hug him or kidnap him...kidnap him and then hug him?LOL Loving the frog too *wink* and Prince Dean, he's still a handsome devil. I can't wait for the ball to begin, will there be a showdown? Oh go on, tell me. lol
Author's Response: Nah sorry not giving any thing away just yet for chapter3, You'll find out soon enough Thank you again and for the rating Jacq x
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 10/01/09 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 1
There are very few writers who have an unruly imagination like you and I, if they do exist I haven't come across them yet, oh and BJ. I love stories that are not your standard formula for a supernatural story but read as one just the same. I think you are awesome and this chapter is great ;)
Author's Response: Oh you...you made me shed a tear, that is such a nice review*sniffs* well UnGen do have a request for something differant - to make the reader think! Thats always been my aim. Thank you so much...and for the 5stars Jacq x
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 31/12/08 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is a wonderful story, what a clever idea, i love it,i can't wait for more. Happy new year.
Author's Response: That is so nice of you, thank you for the review, Happy New Year to you to...Jacq x
Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 30/12/08 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is wonderful and original ! great job ans I like the thought of Dean being the prince ! Update soon !
Author's Response: Thank you for the rating and the review, i wasnt going to post this, but glad i did now, will update soon, hopefully will complete in four chapters...Jacq
Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 29/12/08 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 1
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
Author's Response: Thank you for the rating and comment, 2nd chapter is done but needs looking at for the 20th time lol then will be ready, many thanks Jacq
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