Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 19/03/07 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hey, a great first fic. It's always interesting to see the brothers from an outsiders point of view, like the "haunter" in your story, and I like the way you left it up to the reader to interpret the final  moments. Well done, I enjoyed it!

Author's Response:

Thanks, heaps :D

I got highly tempted to write more outsider point of views.  It was an interesting challenge.

Thankyou for reading and posting feedback, you feed my pen :D

Nutty
(who wants to write more)

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 11/03/07 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 1

Gumnut

Nothing to be unhappy with here! I really like this. Too often, writers think they need to go into great detail (often too much detail) and explain every little thing. I like that you left me something that I could think about  and thats pretty awesome.

Welcome to UnGen and congrats on your first fic!

Author's Response:

Hi, Tree :D

I'm so glad you liked it.  As for leaving things out, that could be just laziness on my part :D  This fic seems to skim across the surface of a much deeper story that part of me says I really should write.  Dunno if I will though.  I'm tempted to try something else first. 

Thanks for posting feedback and thanks for the welcome.  I admit to approaching with great trepidation since there are some fantastic writers here...I think I'll have to push myself and try to keep up to the standard... if I can :D 

Nutty
(who is thoroughly enjoying herself in  Supernatural fandom at the moment :D)