Supernaturalville
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 03/07/09 01:55 PM · On: Little sisters are not burdens

Very interesting start. But Dean at 6 feet tall is quite a bit taller than someone who is 5 foot 8 inches (he's 4 inches taller than her, and Sam is 4 inches taller than Dean). I'm really enjoying your story, just please watch out for run on sentences. It's kinda confusing to read.

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 20/01/09 02:25 PM · On: Can i drive?

nice update:)

Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 01/01/09 10:50 AM · On: Dean Winchester: scared of Jess

as always this is really great , keep it up and update soon , love copycat666

Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 30/12/08 03:08 PM · On: a Girl does it just as good

short but sweet , this story is turning out just fine !

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 29/12/08 01:53 PM · On: a friendship formed

awww loved it Sarah!! update soon please!

Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 22/12/08 03:23 PM · On: i guess

fine work , I'm watching out for the next one .

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 22/12/08 12:26 PM · On: i guess

nice update:)

Reviewer: naturalbornwinchester (Signed) · Date: 22/12/08 12:12 PM · On: i guess

freaking rocks Sarah and u did all the work i just told u it was good

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 18/12/08 02:46 PM · On: Little sisters are not burdens

well done on your first story:)

cheers^_^jess



Author's Response: thanks jess and thanks for the support you have given for this :D

Reviewer: naturalbornwinchester (Signed) · Date: 18/12/08 10:53 AM · On: Little sisters are not burdens

amazing well done on your first story

Author's Response: thanks Dave i thought the idea was bad to be honest

Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 18/12/08 08:30 AM · On: Little sisters are not burdens

So as I promised I have taken the time to check out your first story , I have to say.......its just great !! so update soon and congratulations

Author's Response: thanks i found out how to reply to these things now

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