Reviewer: Renate (Signed) · Date: 17/01/09 12:04 AM · On: And her eyes would go all sort of far away
Great job! I was very surprised by the twist at the end & a little disappointed that "normal" Dean was just a dream! But it rocked anyway!
Author's Response: Thank you! This story literally wrote itself over the course of two days and it was something I've really wanted to explore. I always considered it "complete" until someone asked me about the other main character in question, so there's a remix out there that I'm currently posting here. ;) Gah, I'm so shameless when it comes to talking about my stories...
Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 20/12/08 03:55 PM · On: And her eyes would go all sort of far away
great twist and turn , didn't expect that at all , I loved reading it and I'm kinda sad its over but thanks a lot for making me smile three times in a row
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it, as I am absurdly fond of this story. (If you asked me to choose my favorite of all the SPN stories I've written, it would be this one - despite all the 'writing' flaws I see in it now.) There is a remix of this story written from Charlotte's POV for a very good friend, but I won't be posting that for a bit. I'm trying to space out all of my stories. ;-P
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 18/12/08 07:11 PM · On: And her eyes would go all sort of far away
Oh, so sad. Dean so totally does want the wife and kids, somewhere deep, deep down. He's just too lost and too damaged to ever admit it, even to himself.
Author's Response: That was the premise of the entire story, actually - that he wants the normal life as much as Sam, but it's so deeply buried by choices and duty. Thanks for sticking around during this one, too. ;)
Author's Response: Not sure if this is coming up twice but here goes... That was the premise of the entire story, actually - that he wants the normal life as much as Sam, but it's so deeply buried by choices and duty. Thanks for sticking around during this one, too. ;) I should add that I've done a remix of this story...but it probably won't go up for awhile. I'm trying to pace myself between stories.
Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 18/12/08 08:56 AM · On: I used to sometimes try to catch her
Okey.........now I want a hot and steaming Christmas present to !!!!!!! This story now go's unto my favorite list so I can read it over and over again !
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I can't say I'd mind that Christmas present much myself. ;)
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 18/12/08 07:35 AM · On: I used to sometimes try to catch her
This is a very vivid imagery again can I borrow his knife to gouge my eyes out to void the imagery. Secondly, I like the way you placed vividly Dean that he could to find someone and he doesn't have to be a jerk.
Thirdly, the character of CW . . . how she was also loved by the family and SAMMY. It also showed how Dean could be a jelous Bitch. It was worth reading thanks.
Author's Response: You're very welcome! Writing this was a weird experience for me because the character differed from Dean on the show...but he also acted the way I would have expected Dean to act in a world without demons - still protecting Sam, a reason for all of the girls. Finding that balance and keeping him Dean was a challenge for me.
I'm glad that you liked it.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 18/12/08 04:05 AM · On: She used to fall down a lot
This is a story that can go down in the books of royaltiy. Thanks , but could I borrow Deans knife bow that he leaves under his pillow to goue my eyes something that Ishould not have even imagened. What whould Sammy state.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm sorry about the thing you didn't want to imagine, though...
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 17/12/08 07:51 PM · On: I used to sometimes try to catch her
Oh wow, what a great chapter! It's like the summer of love! lol. That fight was... painful and then steameh!
Author's Response: Thank you! I did my best to make the fight realistic, so I tried not to hold back on the emotions. I'm glad it worked for you. ;-P
Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 16/12/08 03:18 PM · On: She used to fall down a lot
Sweet Jesus !!!!!! That was so goddamn fine ! ( Sorry for the bad languish )
Author's Response: No worries. I swear like a sailor! ;) I'm thrilled that you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 16/12/08 02:37 PM · On: She used to fall down a lot
Awwwww.... I just love this! What an interesting glimpse of another reality. So different, but still so true to character. Very interested to see where you're going with this.
Author's Response: Thank you! Keeping Dean in character was the hardest part about writing this, but the idea was too compelling for me not to try... Between you and me, if I had to choose the story I've written for Supernatural that I love the most, it would be this one. ;-P Dude, I write you novels in comments...
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 16/12/08 12:37 PM · On: She used to fall down a lot
Nice start.
Author's Response: Thank you!
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