Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed)
12/12/08 07:46 AM · On:
Ahahahaha! This was hilarious, and sexy. Hot, lathered up Dean. Mmmm....
I actually really enjoy just watching the boys interact. They're so funny on their downtime.
Author's Response: Mmmmm, I'm with you - hot, lathered Dean...what were you saying? Oh, right - the review. Yes, I like the boys just being the boys occasionally. It's a nice change of pace seeing them relax once all the danger is past. More to come - oh, and not quite another shower scene, but they're shirtless - sometimes I just can't help myself....Jules
Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed)
12/12/08 07:35 AM · On:
I loved this, it was funny. Dean covered in stinking slime, Sam being scared of clowns, it was funny, can't wait for the next chapter. Hugs, Vonnie
Author's Response: Thanks Vonnie. By the way, just read your Round Robin story you did with the other three girls, and absolutely loved it! So intense, it kept me on the edge of my seat. So pleased you got a kick out of this one. More mischief coming up in the next few chapters....Jules
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed)
12/12/08 07:14 AM · On:
That was, without a doubt, one of the BEST shower scenes I've ever read. Dean's shiver "when a line of bubbles slid down his back and tickled his butt" put the absolute, most fantastic image in my head. (((sigh)))
Wonderful first chapter, Jules.
Author's Response: Awww, thanks, Vanessa. I'm so happy that you got a kick out of that lovely little scene. Lol - if it put a wonderful image in your head, imagine how much fun it was to write it! I thought, right, it's about time I had a treat - I've given the Sammy girls enough shower scenes and shirtless scenes - it's my turn. And I just let my head go a little. Of course, dumping him face first into a stagnant pond helped prime the little episode - ROFL!....Jules
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed)
12/12/08 06:01 AM · On:
A great start, some very funny lines in this chapter. Poor Sam a clown convention lol. Great shower scene.
Author's Response: Thanks for that. And what makes it sort of funnier is that not only is Sam scared of clowns, but so is Fredo, and this is her story! I'm waiting for her to kill me via email for that little twist. Poor Sammy! Oh, glad you liked the shower scene. I had a lot of fun writing that. Especially the visual that played out in my head while I typed - LOL...Jules
Reviewer: seamonkey (Signed)
12/12/08 05:42 AM · On:
thx that was fun .. too many dark fanfiction out at moment.. like your writing style
Author's Response: Thanks very much for that. I agree, it's a wee bit too dark out there at the moment, so I thought I'd toss this one into the mix. I've been working on it for a while, keeping it on the back burner until it was ready. Hope you enjoy the next few chapters....Jules
Reviewer: kiara_ratterjmouse (Signed)
12/12/08 03:09 AM · On:
oh gee its not you is it jules?
may i out line some favourite lines of mine so far? i had to laugh when i saw them because i'm officialluy convinved your obsessed with Dean Arse.
he scrubbed his palms over his butt
a line of bubbles slid down his back and tickled his butt
a sweet smelling trail of bubbles over his pecs and abs
and if Dean has a shower scene surely Sammy gets one later on in another story right? btw love the clowns
Author's Response: Oh, stone the crows, it is me! And yes, you could say I am obsessed with Dean's arse....and his legs....and his arms....and his chest...and his face...and his back (especially after eppy 4:10)....and that other bit...ahem - where was I? As for a Sammy shower scene - I've done a few of them already. Time I treated myself to a Deany-babe one. LOL...Jules
Reviewer: calUK (Signed)
12/12/08 02:56 AM · On:
hee hee - there's just something about Winchesters and goats, ain't there? love Sammy's payback, and the detail you crammed in - to the whole chapter! not just that one particular scene...! can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks for that, Cal. This is a lighter one, I must admit. Not quite out-and-out humour, but it has its moments. We get a wee bit more on the goat in an upcoming chapter. Chuffed that you're liking this one....Jules
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed)
12/12/08 02:55 AM · On:
absolutely fantastic start. poor Sammy, clowns really are scary.
Great shower scene anytime you want to indulge feel free.Think I need a cigaret....
Author's Response: Thanks for that. They are sort of creepy, aren't they? I'm not scared of them, but I have never seen the appeal either. Oh - LOL! I've done a few Sam shower scenes for different stories, much to my beta's delight (she's a Sammy girl), but I haven't indulged in my own fantasy of Dean very often. As I said, it was about time I treated myself - oh, and the other Dean girls, of course - lol....Jules