Very good story. You seem to be very much in control. Everythig is set and you seem to  have a lot of extra energy to still keep the linguistics of the story beautiful and alluring. Yes, alluring. It kinda' drew you in and kept you focused as you ventured along into the personal universe of this completely strange person. Very nice job with the character. You manage to create an almost complete picture of a strange girl with so few words.

The ability to say so much with so few words have always intrigued me. Probably because it takes me forever to say one thing :)

Great job.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it!

To be fair, I've been writing the character in an AU for a year and a half, so it was fairly easy to get into her head at the very beginning of the story.  I don't think I would have been able to pull off something like this with an original character I didn't know as well as I know Penny. ;-P