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Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 08/04/07 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 7

OMG Dean turns out just like John!!



Author's Response: You got that right, but even more so. I wanted Dean to become this dark, angry person since he didn't have Sam. I think it could be a very real possibility for him if he didn't have Sam.

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 08/04/07 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 7

Dean without Sam is so lost, broken. Can't wait to know what'll be Dean's future and who'll be the guide for this one. Loved the last scene, Sam with Jess, very poignant. Captivating and so emotional story so far. Can't wait to know what'll happen next. Happy Easter.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Oceane.

Your reviews mean so much to me because they are so beautiful. You always say the kindest words to me and they really make my day.

I am so happy that I can keep giving you these emotional scenes and have them play off as believable.

Again thank you so much and Happy Easter!

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 08/04/07 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 7

Oh, absolutely fabulous! You have made me one very happy veggie - thank the easter bunny for me! Such a touching update, and great to see Bobby again - methinks we both have a bit of a soft spot for the crusty old demon hunter...

Can't wait to see who the future guide and what he/she/it shows Sam - think it's going to be even messier than what he's just seen. And don't forget the mushy emo scene you promised me (laughs).



Author's Response:

Glad I could make you happy, Jules! :D

The future guide will be revealed next chapter if it all goes according to the plan in my head. And yes, I will give you the emotional scene that I promised you!

What can I say? I really love Bobby...the man just has a way of touching my heart!

Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 07/04/07 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 7

Another awesome chapter!  This is just a great story.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Laura!

But I think you're a little biased at this point...lol!

Seriously, you have been a tremendous help and I appreciate everything!

Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 07/04/07 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 7

Ah! What an awesome gift. I am laying here with the flu and the Easter Bunny saw it fit for you to post yet another chapter. I tell you SNsam, that Easter Bunny is one stand up citizen.

 

“No one’s trying to put the weight of the world on your shoulders, Sam. You do a good enough job of that on your own.”

 

Loved that line. Loved the "vision" of Dean. Really enjoyed this chapter. Thanks for posting this today! :) 

 


Author's Response:

Ah, Sojourner...I hate that you're sick, but I hope that I made you feel better. :)

I'm glad that you liked that line...I thought Sam just needed that spelled out for him. I like that you loved this vision of Dean...I wanted to make him dark and depressing.

You are so welcome for posting this today! Hope it was a bright spot in your day!

~Stephanie

Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 07/04/07 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 7

This story is really great!  I like the whole Chistmas Carol format, its awesome!  Can't wait until the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much d6l2j7!

I am really happy you are enjoying this story!

Next update will be coming soon!

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 07/04/07 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 7

Thank you for the Easter present! I was sooo happy to see another chapter up. Poor Dean! I can hardly wait for the future showdown - although I'm pretty sure that without Sam it will go to .... "hell"? lol. I'm dying to know who will be the ghost of Christmas future - John maybe?

Author's Response:

You are very welcome, lam!

The future is coming very soon so keep on the lookout for it! And it just may go all to hell...we'll have to wait and see...

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 07/04/07 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 7

This is the BEST part of being an admin - getting to a new chapter first. Sorry I've been a slacker for leaving reviews for the previous chapters -  I AM reading them - but - well I've been a tad busy ( figure you know why - LOL)


Anyway- absolutely loved this chapter. I think most of us agree that if something happened to Sam and John-  this is one of the possible Deans we'd see, assuming the guy didn't eat a bullet the minute he lost Sam anyway.

 Beautifully written, and I can't imagine what Sam's next guide is gonna show him.

 



Author's Response:

Awww, Tree...I think I may cry!

You are so sweet and yes, I know you have been a busy bee...loved the first eppy of the VS by the way! You and Dawn totally rocked it!

I am so grateful to you and your kinds words...you gave this author and chance and it is something I will remember!

 

Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 07/04/07 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 6

Another great chapter. I love how Dean got to see Sam in that way. :)


Author's Response:

Thanks, sojourner!

Glad that you enjoyed that chapter! I am on my way to post a new one!

Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 07/04/07 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 5

Guh, I have been so busy lately that I have been neglecting my favorite stories. I was happy to come back to two chapters of this one!

“Sam, you have me,” Dean said softly, but firmly. “You’ve always had me. I know we haven’t been there for each other much over the past two years, but I have always been here. So, don’t you sit there and tell me you have nothing left.”

*smile* Such a great scene you wrote there. Great work. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Sojourner!

I am glad I could give you such a great update! That scene between Sam and Dean was one of my favorites to write and I am happy that you liked it.

Your kind words mean so much to me and I am so thankful for them!

Reviewer: michellerose (Signed) · Date: 05/04/07 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 6

this series is awesome!!

bravo!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much michellerose!

I am very happy that you are enjoying this and I hope you continue to do so!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 03/04/07 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 6

Mary visiting Dean  was a beautiful, and so poignant moment. Awesome work so far. I'm looking forward for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Hi, Oceane!

I am so happy that you loved that moment. I wanted to give Dean a chance with his mom and I figured now was as good a time as any. I am glad that it moved you.

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 03/04/07 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 6

The "I love you mom" brought a sniffle....

Still want to see what Dean's life would have been like with out Sam..."that can't have been good."



Author's Response:

I would like to say that I'm glad I made you sniffle, but I'm not sure if that's a good thing. I really love doing the emotional stuff and I'm glad that it is coming through like it is.

We will catch a glimpse of Dean's life in the next chapter!

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 03/04/07 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 6

This is just great, Stephanie. What a wonderful chapter. This story just keeps getting better and better.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Jules!

I am so happy that you are liking this! It really means a lot to me!

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 03/04/07 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 6

This is such a great concept for a story - I'm loving it! Never apologize for a Dean-centric chapter... I don't think it gets any better than that lone tear. Can't wait for the next chapter - and I'm assuming we won't find our who the ghost of Christmas future is until the one after that? Yikes!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, lam!

I'm glad Dean's one lone tear got to you. I wanted him to be emotional, but not sappy since we all know he is a tough cookie. And yes, you won't find out the next ghost until at least two more chapters.

I hope you continue to enjoy this!

Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 03/04/07 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 6

I love the bus scene, and the interaction between Dean and Mary.  Great work!

Author's Response:

Thanks, Bayre.

I really loved the bus scene, too. And really, if it wasn't for your nudging, it wouldn't have been in there.

I loved writing the mushy stuff between Mary and Dean. Dean needs a little mushiness in his life!

Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 02/04/07 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 5

That first line still gives me a giggle.  Great job!

 

Laura



Author's Response:

Oh, Laura!

I'm gonna say I did that line just for you!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 01/04/07 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 5

What a lovely scene between Sam and Jess, beautifully done. The brotherly moment, awesome. Amazing story so far. I so can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Oceane!

I figured Sam and Jess needed to talk things out and I couldn't think of a better time.

Thank you so much for your kind words. They mean so much to me!

 

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 31/03/07 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 5

You felt good about leaving it there? Arrrrgh! I don't feel good about you leaving it there!

Darn it - I want to know what happens next!

I love this story. Please, please update soon, okay?



Author's Response:

*Ducks*

Yes, I felt good about leaving it there...I'm taking it you didn't? Sorry for that, Mizpah...I'll try to be better next time...   :)

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 31/03/07 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 5

Love to see Sam and Jess back together even if it is obly for a moment.

Can't wait to see what happens to Dean...really CAN'T wait..post soon.



Author's Response: Ok, I can take a hint...you want a fast update! Good news...I'm writing it right this minute so out should be out in a few days!

Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 30/03/07 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 5

This is so sweet, and that first line just makes me laugh!

Great job.

 

Laura



Author's Response:

I think that line is my favorite out of everything that I have written!

Thank you so much Laura...your support means so much to me!

Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 26/03/07 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 4

Well a life without Sam was not very good for the poor boy. Aw, so Mary is leaving and Jess is guiding. Wonder what he'll do now that he can be with her again, even if this is brief. Great work. More please. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks, sojourner!

I do have something cooked up for Jess and we will see what it is in the next chapter. And yeah, Dean's life kinda sucks without a little brother to look out for.

Another update coming at ya soon!

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 25/03/07 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 4

Snsam - wow- what a great chapter. Poor Dean- such a bad life without Sammy. And now Jess showing up to guide Sam along. I can't wait to see what she shows him.

Kudos!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Tree!

I always thought Dean's life wouldn't be good without Sam. After all, Sam was Dean's reason to make the world a better place and stay on the right path. I really am happy that you are enjoying this.

By the way, I am soooo excited about the second season of VS!!

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 25/03/07 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 4

ohhh...very good!! i am so enjoying this story!! keep up the awesome job!!bmabers;)

Author's Response:

Thanks again, Bambers!

I am so happy that you are enjoying this; it truly means a lot to me as do your kind words.

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 25/03/07 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 4

I'm so loving this story. Emotional and poignant chapter. Poor Dean, didn't have a great life without Sam. Wow!Jess'll be Sam's guide for the second part of the journey, can't wait to know what happened to Dean after John's death. Terrific work so far.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Oceane.!

I really am happy that you are enjoying this story. You're going to have to wait a bit before we can see what will happen to Dean, but it is coming soon!

Thanks again!

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