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Reviewer: riquitv (Signed) · Date: 05/12/08 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 5 : Secrets Still Hidden

thanks for the update, i'm waiting for the moment when Daniel, Sam and Teal'c discovered that supernatural things are real and that the Winchester fight them. Until another chapter :)

Author's Response: I don't want them to find out about what "really" goes on in the world, but we shall see where this story takes me. ;). :D. Thank you, for the wonderful review. :). That made my day. ;). :D :D

Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 05/12/08 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 5 : Secrets Still Hidden

LOVE IT more and more as i continue to read and I can't wait for the next update. Please please hurry *begging on my knees*

Author's Response: Thank you very much, for the rating and the review. ;). No worries. The next chapter is already in the making and should appear sometime later today. ;). I'm just stoked about the response for this story! Thank you. :)

Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 04/12/08 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Hiding Secrets

Oh F.Y.I. sometimes when someone is lying they glance to the left. It has to do with the right hemosphere controlling the left part of your body and the other way around, so when using your right hemosphere (the imaginative or creative part of your brain) you tend to look to the left :D

In short: when you lie you tend to glance left and when you're telling the truth you tend to glance right.

Don't know if that helped, but figured it wouldn't hurt to put it out there :)

(Not in any means a correction, but more of a suggestion because you seem to be painting a very vivid picture of Daniel - which I completely agree with by the way - that he's very attentative. So the fact about him glancing up and right would indicate that he's telling the truth.

Just tell me if I'm being too pushy. Great job with this one too. Loving the story :D :D :D



Author's Response:

lol!! I actually knew that and in my mind I had typed in "down and to the left". :P. Must have been a mixture of no caffeine and staying up too late. lol. I'll go back and fix it, thanks for pointing that out for me!

 

Thank you, for the review and rating! I'm glad that you are liking it so far. ;). Awesome!!

Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) · Date: 04/12/08 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Hiding Secrets

"wished he could speak Winchester"!!! *laughs in delight* That is wonderful! I love it!!!

Okay, so where is chapter 5, hmm? I wants it!!!!



Author's Response: I think that you are going to really like chapter five. It's almost finished. :D. Glad that you are liking this so far. ;). I loved writing that line, btw!! :D. 

Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) · Date: 04/12/08 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 3: Introductions Made

Aw... poor Dean got all left out! ^^

Great chap. LOL



Author's Response: lol. Dean will have his time, no worries. lol. Maybe even with one Major/Colonel Carter. :P. lol. ;). Maybe...

Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 03/12/08 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 3: Introductions Made

Loved it and waiting impatiently for another update :D

Author's Response: lol. I am writing it this very second. ;). The "real conversation" between the three is coming fast. :D. Glad you've enjoyed it so far! :D. Thank you, for the rating and review!

Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 03/12/08 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Normal Lives

Love this story so far and I've followed SG1 a few years ago too. Daniel was my favorite on that show :P Can't wait to see how Dean and Daniel react when they actually have a real conversation. Oh and the: "He'd seen men make love with less gusto..." Not sure if I liked it or was a bit desturbed by it :? Yeiks!

Author's Response:

lol. Sorry, if I squicked you with the love-making comment. I've just read a lot of SG-1 crack!fics and I was poking some fun at them. :P. Glad you liked it and good to see another SG-1 fan over here! wOOt! 

Daniel was my favorite too! :D :D Thank you, for the review and rating. ;). Awesome!! 

Reviewer: TuckerCat (Signed) · Date: 03/12/08 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Normal Lives

I am enjoying the story.  Everyone is true to form.  Thanks!

Author's Response: Thank you, very much for your kind review and rating. :D. I'm glad that you like it so far! I will be adding more soon. ;). :D :D

Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) · Date: 01/12/08 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Normal Lives

Another great chap! I love how Daniel keeps getting bits of info on Dean. Now, Dean needs to get bits of info on Daniel. 

What an interesting shore leave for all, I'm sure...



Author's Response:

Heehee. Daniel's the 'ninja' remember. ;). lol! Actually *Scratches head* Dean's a 'ninja' too. Hmph. AWESOME!

Thanks, for reviewing!! *Hugs*. :).

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 01/12/08 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 1: Pie and Planets

"He had seen men make love with less gusto."

What kind of doctor is Daniel Jackson, anyway?  lol.



Author's Response:

lol. He's an archeologist and I was high on insomnia when I wrote that line. ;) Thank you, for reviewing!!

Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 01/12/08 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Normal Lives

Interesting, I'm curious how you are going to get the boys and Daniel to actually meet!

Wouldn't Dean love to go through the Stargate!  And fire a zat!



Author's Response: lol!! Every time I watch SG-1, I think of what kind of mischeviousness Dean would conjure up if he ever got his hands on a zat! lol. Thank you, for the review! :). 

Reviewer: dorothy (Signed) · Date: 01/12/08 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 1: Pie and Planets

You said pie... *counts* 25 times!

 *flails of happy*



Author's Response: lol. Just wait for the next chapter. :P. I'm beginning to think this whole story is about pies! lol. ;). My muse directs me...and I think it's hungry. lol. I'm glad that you enjoyed it! :D. Thank you, for the review!!!

Reviewer: Lbdba (Signed) · Date: 01/12/08 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 1: Pie and Planets

Interesting so far.  Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. More on the way! :D

Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) · Date: 30/11/08 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 1: Pie and Planets

Oh, wow.

Ebbs, I demand you get back here and continue this!

Great start, my friend! A few errors, though nothing major. Lemme know if you want me to do a bit of beta work for you.

^^



Author's Response: Hugs, thank you!!! :D. 

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