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Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 04:03 PM · On: December 1985

How cute!  So many times we go aobut our daily chores unaware that we are being watched, studied.  I like that you captured this moment and introduced Dean to what would become one of his future responsibilities.

Author's Response: Thanks, I really like how the gun cleaning seems to be an act of meditation on the show, rather than violence.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 04:01 PM · On: December 1984

Interesting.  I wish I understood moire about what drove John to travel.  I like the fact that he remembered driving in darkness both times.

Author's Response:

John has always been my favorite character. I feel I understand him so well, and not at all at the same time...

 

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 03:59 PM · On: December 1983

What a clever idea!  I'm glad you thought of chronicling their lives using the same month every year.

The memory is so vivid.  I love how you've described them just as one would remember them.  The scents were especially entrancing!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm so glad you like it. To be honest, I chickened out of writing from a four year old's perspective and figured the closest I could get with any grace was writing remembering being four. Huh, does that sentence make any sense?

Reviewer: rahne (Signed) · Date: 01/02/09 09:34 PM · On: December 2018

As I have said in other reviews, Inever read a piece until it's completed, so I haven't reviewed earlier chapters. But I just wanted you to know how much your hard work and perserverence means to all the readers out here. thank you for a journey through sweetness and sadness (and for the happy ending!). I love these characters, and find it amazing that that love can be shared by so many others. Thank you, and good luck in your next endeavors.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, and for leaving a comment :) I really enjoyed writing it, although, the whole posting every day idea? Definitely the kind that crazy people get :)

But yeah, they really are characters you can fall in love with :)

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 28/12/08 04:00 AM · On: December 2018

aw - maybe that's as close to a happy ending as they'll ever get! sat on the steps, so in-tune with each other, beers in hand, watching the world go by... lovely end to a lovely calendar!

now go get workig on Told! heehee

thanks for a great read, hun. have a great holiday!



Author's Response:

Hell, I'd love that ending for myself. 'Cept Dean wouldn't be my brother...

As for Told, I am currently searching for Dean, have no idea where the guy's scampered off to...

Thanks so much for all your comments and your support on this little -big series, truly needed and appreciated :)

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 28/12/08 03:57 AM · On: December 2008

well, merry christmas then! couple of days late, sorry ,but love that one! scary K-Mart angels, gotta watch out for them. and wouldn't that be a lovely picture? Castiel and Uriel, perched on top of the store... heehee

Author's Response:

EVERYTHING about KMart is scary!

Happy holidays to you, too :)

Reviewer: 0kieD0kie (Signed) · Date: 27/12/08 11:05 PM · On: December 2018

That was great!!! Perfect ending! Loved these stories!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading along, I'm glad you enjoyed them :) I wasn't actually planning on writing a 2018, but then I couldn't just leave the with this year's gloom and doom...

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 27/12/08 12:39 AM · On: December 2018

Thanks for the nearly-happy ending!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! We aim to almost-please :)

Reviewer: 0kieD0kie (Signed) · Date: 22/12/08 08:44 PM · On: December 2007

These are awsome! Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

Yay, thanks :)Next one tomorrow...

Cool pen name btw :)

Reviewer: 0kieD0kie (Signed) · Date: 22/12/08 08:34 PM · On: December 1988

Awwwww, too cute. Loving this so far!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you're liking them... Writing kids kinda had me tremblin' in my boots :)

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/12/08 07:28 AM · On: December 2006

eva.

Too true not Dean's finest year.  These have been superbly insightful little vigettes Eva, Thanks so much for sharing. Bev x



Author's Response: Thanks very much for reading and commenting...makes my day :)

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/12/08 07:26 AM · On: December 2005

Eva.

damn those choc chip cookies...gonna eat this one before it can wreak destruction on the land...bev x



Author's Response: I expect every woman to do her duty... :)

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/12/08 07:24 AM · On: December 2004

Eva

Bad girl...I'm gonna miss you torturing him too.You do it well bev x



Author's Response: Hm, writing's about the only scenario in which that's a compliment... gotta love writing :) Thanks so much for leaving a comment :)

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/12/08 07:23 AM · On: December 2003

Eva.

So I don't need friends I need Zepplin? okaaaaaay! bev x



Author's Response: Yup, who needs love when you've got classic rock? :)

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/12/08 07:22 AM · On: December 2002

eva.

Awh sweet!

bev x



Author's Response: *grins*

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/12/08 07:20 AM · On: December 2001

Eva.

Poor John, we forget what he's endured. I know sometimes he's less than a perfect dad but boy he's had more than his share of fear.  bev x



Author's Response:

I've always found it one of the most challenging things about him, reconciling the fierce protectiveness with the willingness to leave the boys alone for days at a time. It makes sense in a very warped way... and warped always intrigues me :)

Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/12/08 07:19 AM · On: December 2000

eva,

yes that was so worth the wait. Their anger rocks his very foundations...how apt an image. You're good you know? bev x



Author's Response: Gosh, thanks *blushes*

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/12/08 07:17 AM · On: December 1999

eva.

Gee, you Icelanders will drink anything! heehee. bev x



Author's Response: I'd worry more about what we eat. Want some ammonia-marinated sheep testicle paté? Nope, not kidding.

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/12/08 07:16 AM · On: December 1998

Eva

as the flashes from the approaching ambulance danced over them, shimmering Christmas lights for his battered family.
“... okay... Dean? It's okay...”

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as the flashes from the approaching ambulance danced over them, shimmering Christmas lights for his battered family.
“... okay... Dean? It's okay...”

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Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/12/08 07:13 AM · On: December 1997

Eva.

Ahh! That essential Sam/Dean connection...beautifully phrased.  bev x



Author's Response: Thanx muchly :)

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/12/08 07:12 AM · On: December1996

Eva,

See now I'm hooked in!  I wanna know why is he there? How badly is he hurt?  A good writer hooks a reader with few words...Well done you. bev xx



Author's Response: Hihi thanks... How does Dean gets hurt? Ah, the possibilities....

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/12/08 07:10 AM · On: December 1995

Eva.

Ahh that's nice, just when i was beginning to think you were a dark and tortured soul you give us a taste of unconditional love. Sweet! Bev x



Author's Response: Hihi, I'm actually sweet as a basket full of kittens. Thank god for the small wicked part that occasionally picks the damn basket up and chucks it in the river.... :P

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/12/08 07:08 AM · On: December 1994

hey eva.

whoa just read your boig...Icelandic huh?  I've been to your land...very different, very magnificent.

You convey depth of meaning very well with your small number of chosen words, I should learn to be so elegant with few words!

This one conveys courage and fear and duty very nicely.

reading on  bev xx



Author's Response:

Yeah, I love my land... now if I could only bring myself to stay in it for more than a few months at a time... ah hell, one of these days when I'm old....

Elegant? *preens doubly* well gosh, thanks...

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/12/08 07:04 AM · On: December 1993

Hey hunny

me again, I'm back to read the rest.  i like this one you have captured a darkness in Sam so well, and John intrinsic fear of that darkness.  See i have this theory that John could always see |sam capacity for evil but Dean is blinded ot it.  Nicew use of few precious words.   bev xx



Author's Response:

Heya, welcome back and thanks for reading : )

Yeah, Sa and the darkness- terribly intriguing material...

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 22/12/08 02:25 AM · On: December 2006

ooooh, ick! and nice - love the idea of him seeing himself as a walking corpse long-overdue for decay, and the way it's a shotgun that pulls him out of it.

And hey, who doesn't need a bit of morbid of christmas...? lol



Author's Response:

Yeah, there's got to be a little antidote to all this cheer and good humor... it's just not natural! : /

I think Croatoan is supposed to happen somewhere around this time, so I figured yeah, a deathwish is probably in order....

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