Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 06/03/09 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 13

You do an AMAZING job of answering things, and filling voids, did I ever tell you that? I got a stupid air headed question though. When Sam finally got it in his head what he had to do, and is now determined and nothing's gonna stop him, at the end..was it..the demon powers he was gonna pursue? Or was he gonna try to sell his soul or something?

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 03/12/08 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 5

Poor Bobby. Trying so hard to do the right thing, to look out for Sam, but Sam doesn't seem to want the help, he's just too lost.

Great writing by the way.

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 03/12/08 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 3

I'd forgotten the family were stil in the house. Well done you for remembering.

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 01/12/08 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 6

the chapter was wonderfully dramatic. I love how the motel room was one they had repeatedly visited and the brief glimpse into their past truly brought it to life.  It gave the feeling of visiting a place as an adult that you vacationed each year as a child.

And the part where Bobby left and Sam was surprised to discover he didn't care.....well done.

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 30/11/08 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 4

OMG. Keys. Something so small and everyday and easily overlooked..... it made it all so REAL. I mean he had to get them, and the way you described it as Sam reached in the blankets and felt the jut of bones and denim and them pulling them free and falling back on the grass, kicking the door shut---I almost couldn't breathe. it was very intense!

I LOVE it when a writer transforms the mundane to the significant. The story just comes to life!