Reviews For breaking the promise , sealing the deal .
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 14/12/08 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 5 sealing the deal
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 04/12/08 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 4 breaking the promise
John's story was a well thought out.
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 04/12/08 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 4 breaking the promise
Great chapter, God don't you just hate that Alister b**ch. Poor Dean, I can't stand to see him so tortured, Please update soon.
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 04/12/08 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 4 breaking the promise
It's frightening how you're revealing what I feared the most, that they would in this insidious way use first John and then Sam to finally break Dean (it never could have been the physical pain, no way, but this makes sense and it's worse tenfold); I won't forget these scenes - "...to kiss the one he would sacrifice...like a true Judas"/"Sam forgot all about you in just a couple of months", overwhelming, grand! And I have to say it again, I admire Dean even more now, thank you for this!
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 01/12/08 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 3 Being a hero
That's truly hell, Dean's encounter with little Lucy (what a tragic story, this poor child) expressing it in a horrifying way, showing us - even in hell - the kind and caring Dean we know, always trying to help and protect (I just cracked when Dean told Lucy he would be her Batman) and then he couldn't help and this little child was literally ripped apart in his arms, they couldn't torture him in a worse way (but how he tries to hold on makes him even more a hero in my view!). Haunting, another marvellous chapter!
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 01/12/08 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 3 Being a hero
For ch.2&3, I really don't like Dean being tortured down in hell, why did he forget his name so quickly? How long had he been down there in your story timeline? Update soon.
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 01/12/08 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 2 biting down
Think you so hit the mark with this, Alastair would use Sam as leverage, for Dean the only one he couldn't bear to lose and worse to forget; more than ever I stand in awe for this amazing man, holding out for 30 years! And it is a painful read (you are catching the surroundings in a scary good way - "...passing every tortured soul, feeling the fear and hate in their blood as they turned into monsters", wow!), but it's getting worse, isn't it?; we will see Dean break, God this poor man. Great chapter and good job, kid!
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 29/11/08 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 1 Who are you.....
Short maybe, but very intense, as always I just admire the power of the images you're creating; it's gonna be a tough and painful ride ("So...another Winchester finally trapped in these fiery pits of hell...two down...one to go." - scary), grand beginning and a perfect title!
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 29/11/08 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 1 Who are you.....
I'm a huge Dean fan and I hated that you made him break so quickly. I'm not sure how much of his suffering I could read about, you've started it so early, but I'll continue to read, Update soon.
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