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Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 14/12/08 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 5 sealing the deal

This end truly was "sealing the deal", giving Dean his memory and his Sam back!! Grand exchange between the angel and Dean. The whole story is round, a breathtaking ride, EXCELLENT!
So it seems you didn't receive one of my messages, well I'll keep trying, maybe I can think of something! Take care!!

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 04/12/08 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 4 breaking the promise

John's story was a well thought out.

Author's Response: Thanks It took a long and sleepless night to make it all work . Thank you also for the lovely stars !

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 04/12/08 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 4 breaking the promise

Great chapter, God don't you just hate that Alister b**ch. Poor Dean, I can't stand to see him so tortured, Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for reviewing and reading this story and for the lovely stars !

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 04/12/08 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 4 breaking the promise

It's frightening how you're revealing what I feared the most, that they would in this insidious way use first John and then Sam to finally break Dean (it never could have been the physical pain, no way, but this makes sense and it's worse tenfold); I won't forget these scenes - "...to kiss the one he would sacrifice...like a true Judas"/"Sam forgot all about you in just a couple of months", overwhelming, grand! And I have to say it again, I admire Dean even more now, thank you for this!

Author's Response: No.........thank you !

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 01/12/08 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 3 Being a hero

That's truly hell, Dean's encounter with little Lucy (what a tragic story, this poor child) expressing it in a horrifying way, showing us - even in hell - the kind and caring Dean we know, always trying to help and protect (I just cracked when Dean told Lucy he would be her Batman) and then he couldn't help and this little child was literally ripped apart in his arms, they couldn't torture him in a worse way (but how he tries to hold on makes him even more a hero in my view!). Haunting, another marvellous chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks Hun ! There is more to come in a little wile I'm just thinking things over because this story can go either way . Keep reviewing I love it !

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 01/12/08 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 3 Being a hero

For ch.2&3, I really don't like Dean being tortured down in hell, why did he forget his name so quickly? How long had he been down there in your story timeline? Update soon.

Author's Response: oke let me explain something......hell is not a walk in the park , not even for Dean Winchester. He forgot is name so fast because he's learned to never put himself in front of others he never was allowed to care for himself if you know what I mean . The chapters are always a little flash in his time in hell telling you the worst things that made him into the thing he's going to become.......thanks for reviewing at least you take the time to do so . Love copycat666

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 01/12/08 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 2 biting down

Think you so hit the mark with this, Alastair would use Sam as leverage, for Dean the only one he couldn't bear to lose and worse to forget; more than ever I stand in awe for this amazing man, holding out for 30 years! And it is a painful read (you are catching the surroundings in a scary good way - "...passing every tortured soul, feeling the fear and hate in their blood as they turned into monsters", wow!), but it's getting worse, isn't it?; we will see Dean break, God this poor man. Great chapter and good job, kid!

Author's Response: girl....you are just amazing ! you know the story behind the words and have the ability to lift the one that wrote it ! thanks for taking the time and thanks for the stars . It takes time and effort to write down the things I have in my mind being unfamiliar with the languish and the thousand words it holds so I never know if it is any good and fear that no one likes it . So...........xxxxx thanks again for being the one to chair ! love copycat666 PS Dean is a strong soldier and time in hell doesn't pass by quickly........

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 29/11/08 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 1 Who are you.....

Short maybe, but very intense, as always I just admire the power of the images you're creating; it's gonna be a tough and painful ride ("So...another Winchester finally trapped in these fiery pits of hell...two down...one to go." - scary), grand beginning and a perfect title!

Author's Response: Hey you , I knew I could count on you to write me a review and as always you give me such confidence ! Thanks for the stars and taking the time to read ALL my story's and poems and stuff , you're the one to deserve a galaxy of twinkling lights !!!!

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 29/11/08 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 1 Who are you.....

I'm a huge Dean fan and I hated that you made him break so quickly. I'm not sure how much of his suffering I could read about, you've started it so early, but I'll continue to read, Update soon.

Author's Response: I understand your concerns but in hell there's no time to spend on taking things slowly , after all ......ITS HELL. This story needs to begin with pain and suffering because....well just wait and see . Thanks anyway for your review

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