Supernaturalville
Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 25/11/08 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 1

Love the Hendrickson POV!!!  Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you!  I've been wanting to write something from his POV for awhile now but wasn"t sure how well I could write him, and then I tried my hand at it.  I'm glad you enjoyed and thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: catchme21 (Signed) · Date: 25/11/08 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 1

Ooooo...I have noticed a crap load of stories suddenly pop up about Henrickson vs the Winchesters.  I loved this, the thought that he was absolutely obsessed with tracking down Dean and "stopping" the monster.  :)

You should extend this into the episode. *wink wink*



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your feedback!  It's very much appreciated! 

I've been wanting to write a story on Henricksen for some time now and decided to do it.  I actually extended the story into the events of "Jus in Bello" on my hard drive but decided not to include those sections.  Perhaps I'll reconsider.  I just really like the way I ended this one and figured it would be more impacting than what had been written after.

Thanks again for reading and taking time to send feedback!  Take care!

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 25/11/08 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is realy good -- except I think you've got your cities mixed up.  The shapeshifter  thing in "Skin" happened in St. Louis (where Dean was "caught" torturing little Becky).  The slit throats in "The Usual Suspects" were in Baltimore.  And the bank robbery in "Nightshifter," was in Milwaukee.

Mostly pretty sure.

Anyway, I have always found Henrickson to be such an intriguing and interesting character.  I wish they hadn't killed him off.  :( 



Author's Response:

Oops! Thanks so much for catching those errors. I just fixed them.  I guess that's what happens when one decides to watch all the episodes with Henricksen at once to make sure they're writing his character well.  : )

I'm glad you enjoyed it despite the mistakes and would like to thank you again for bringing my attention to the errors contained within.  It's much appreciated!  : )

Oh and the victims with slit throats? I was referring to the two killed in the bank robbery, um the girl and the man.  I assume that if Henricksen had found those bodies those would be the ones pinned on Dean, didn't think about those in "Usual Suspects". Anyways thank you again for you help! Take care!

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