Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 26/01/09 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 12
Oh my holy sweet freaking GAWD! I am laughing so hard I'm crying -- literally! There are tears sneaking out the corner of my eyes as I type. Grace is freaking HILARIOUS! Funniest Dean OFC I have ever read! I am in love with her in ways I cannot describe. Her sweetness, her sex appeal, and her shameless sense of humour, are so perfect for Dean. Give him a run for his money, that's for sure. Man alive -- my cheeks hurt from grinning after reading this. I swear, that was the funniest chapter in fan fiction that I have ever read. Brava!!
Author's Response: Please, you're making me blush. So glad you liked it.
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 24/01/09 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 11
My feeling about this whole romance is more and more that I'm just happy for Dean he could experience this even for a short time, to love and be loved like this...and I just love the way you write it!! The end though indicates this happy time won't last for them, so sad (but nevertheless always worth the try!). Great chap!
Author's Response: Now S., remember this is Supernatural and there are always Crossroad Demons to bribe and Angels to cajole or beg.
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 24/01/09 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 11
Oh amazing! And that creepy little upset at the very end -- you're such a hideous tease!!!! This is when I bang my knife and fork on the table and demand "more, more, more!" like a petulent child. Please?
Author's Response: I always write out of sequence so there are many chapters ahead already done. Another is on the way. Hope you enjoy
Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 24/01/09 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 11
GIRL, YOU GOT ME HOOKED FROM THE FIRST CHAPTER, AGAIN! AND AGAIN I'VE BEEN READING FOR FREE! **HANGS HEAD AND PLEADS FOR FORGIVENESS**. GREAT WRITING AS ALWAYS. POOK
Author's Response: Pook!!!! You know you'll always get a pass from me. Thanks for reviewing again. I appreciate all the reviews on this site because if it wasn't for the read count, it would just be me and the crickets at ff.net.
Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 15/01/09 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 10
Aww! -- What a wonderful last line! Nice read;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I usually save the last line for something horrific.
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 14/01/09 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 10
So "weeping Wanda" (great!) finally did the trick and Dean could really talk to Grace, glad he managed (oh, and how he did, in such a kind way), don't like to see him in this distress. Have to admit though that I kind of enjoy Sam and Bobby having a good time pulling his chain a bit (Dean wouldn't waste such an opportunity himself, right?) and I try to savor this rather light time and not to think about what will happen to them later. More please!!
Author's Response: I think for all of his bravado, Dean Winchester is just a big a softie. I don't know any guys who would recite a line from It's a Wonderful Life, even if they knew one.
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 14/01/09 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 10
Ok, that last line was just positively adorable. lol.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks.
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 12/01/09 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 9
Fun one, god I enjoyed those phone calls, you can tell Dean really likes Grace, he usually doesn't act that clumsy and Sam's comments were just smashing, so great!
Author's Response: I always felt Dean would totally loose it when he found that certain someone. No more 'stud in training' but a man in love.
Reviewer: smd (Signed) · Date: 12/01/09 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 9
Such a great chapter. Very humerous! I love it. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: I so appreciate your reviews. Thank you.
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 12/01/09 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 9
Oh. My. God. That was so cute I'm grinning from ear to ear. Absolutely adorable. Dean likes her. He so has a crush on her. Calling her on the phone and leaving her messages like a school boy. And Sam's reaction to it is just priceless! MORE!!!! Must have more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much and more is on the way. I have just begun letting Sam torment Dean.
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 11/01/09 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 8
Grace sure has scars of her own, the part she spoke about killing the pets really was tough, this poor poor girl and I suffer vicariously with her (that's what you always do, you make these people so real, it's impossible not to care about them!). Dean and Grace however are a match, they won't be able to stay away from each other for too long, looking forward to this!!
Author's Response: Grace has more than just mental scars from her time with Azazel and I hope it doesn't distress you too much. I'd hate for you to stop reading.
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 10/01/09 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 8
M-hmmm.... So I wonder what's going to happen to bring Grace back into the picture, huh? I still hate you for killing off Jewels. Seriously, that was an act of purest evil. I love how sort of easy and natural this thing with Dean and Grace is. Not forced. Subtle, easy, painful, but natural. It's a great set-up for sex and babies later on. And you being evil, I already know you've killed her too (because you said so in the first chapter, didn't you?) You're trying to kill me by ripping my heart out, aren't you? lol.
Author's Response: Remember the Winchester curse. Again none of this is my fault, honest.
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 09/01/09 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 7
So loved that Grace could show Dean a way back from hell - finally!!!
Author's Response: It's easier for someone who's 'been there' to show thw way.
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 09/01/09 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 6
Grace asking Dean "tell me what you did" (it's my favorite line here, it tells so much) makes me love this girl even more, she's strong and caring in a great way and Dean so desperately needs such a person in his life. Wonderful!
Author's Response: I thought it very intuitive and bold of Grace to cut to the chase and just ask but then, like me, she always says just what's on her mind and doesn't mind the taste of a foot now and then.
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 09/01/09 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 7
Oh thank you thank you thank you!!!! I've been waiting for someone to point out that just about everyone else in Hell had earned his/her trip there! Dean only ever went to Hell to save Sam and certainly didn't belong there -- had never earned his place there. But the people he tortured? They must have been seriously evil SOBs when they were topside. It's the fact that he was the one doing the torture that hurts Dean the most. I hope they can make a similar point on the show, because I so miss Dean and hate seeing him look so freakin' lost.
Author's Response: You're welcome! If you were schooled by incredibly scary nuns as I was, you’d know a little about heaven and a whole lot about hell.
Reviewer: smd (Signed) · Date: 07/01/09 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 6
Another great chapter. You write emotions well and I can feel Dean's despair and Grace's compassion. Great job! Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 07/01/09 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 6
Yay!! I was hoping we'd be getting an update soon! On the other hand, not so much 'yay' for the whole PTSD thing. Poor freakin' Dean! Doesn't all this hell stuff make you miss our pretty boy from season 1? I feel like crying every time I think of season 1 Dean. He was such a happy-go-lucky guy, even though he was damaged even then. I really, really like Grace a lot. But then that's no surprise, because I adored Jewels. I still don't think I can forgive you for killing her off-stage like that. Shame on you!
Author's Response: Hopefully Grace can bring back some of that old season 1 Dean. And don't blame me for what happened to Jewels, it's the Winchester curse.
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 23/12/08 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 5
God, I knew it was bound to happen, can't tell how much I like Grace, she's simply wonderful (like her mother, caring, witty, she has everything, love how you write her) and for Dean she's a blessing in every sense, just amazing! Even if I wanted (and I don't) I couldn't stop reading, have to know how this "dreaded romance" develops. Grand chap!! And - happy holidays to you!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review and the holiday wishes. I hope Santa was good to you and left Dean Winchester under your tree.
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 21/12/08 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 5
Ok, Grace gets serious points for using the word "boobage." That just spells cool. :)
Reviewer: smd (Signed) · Date: 07/12/08 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 4
Another great chapter. I love the depth that you are writing the characters with and again I am looking forward to more. And of course I love the "dreaded romance deal" lol!
Author's Response: Thanks again. I've always been a fan of the 'R' word but I know there are some folks who refuse to even take a peek.
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 06/12/08 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 4
I hesitated to start reading this one, cause I strongly believe Dean wouldn't have risked any long term relationship with a girl, not with the legacy he and Sam have to carry and even more (as wonderful he always is with children) Dean wouldn't dare to have a baby he probably couldn't protect and lose to evil (he already was a dad in so many ways for Sam, more than John ever was, that's one of the things that makes this bond so special), BUT - and it really is a big "but", you know how much I adore your writing and it's Jewels' Grace (and I loved Jewels so much!), so if you want me with my doubts, I'm in I guess - it's marvellous so far!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're here, doubts and all! Hopefully I can put them to rest because as much as Dean may like to have complete control over any given situation, sometimes shit happens, and it isn't always bad.
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 05/12/08 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 4
Wonderful!!!! I honestly wonder how in the heck Kripke and company are going to believably write Dean through his hell PTSD. I mean seriously? I love how you're handling it here, though. The set-up is perfect because you've already established Jewels as being like family to Dean, and Grace as a childhood dreamgirl. So meeting her now, when he needs her most...? It's just perfect!
Author's Response: Thanks again. Hopefully he'll trust her enough to tell all.
Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 04/12/08 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 3
A good start-- Had been hoping we'd get to meet Grace!
Author's Response: Thank you. I hope I don't disappoint.
Reviewer: smd (Signed) · Date: 04/12/08 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 3
I love this story :) I am looking forward to the next chapter. I am very interested in learning more about Grace and seeing more interaction between her and Dean.
Author's Response: Thanks. It's nice to know some fans enjoy the dreaded romance stories.
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 04/12/08 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 3
You're killin' me with these tiny teasers! Each one is deliciously perfect, like a tiny, heavenly bite of chocolate. But seriously, dude, where's the beef? Need more! Much, much more! And I can't believe Jewel is dead!?! NOOOOO!!!! I wanted her to get to see Dean and Sammy all grown up!
Author's Response: Wow! If you like chocolate as much as I do, then this is high praise indeed!
Author's Response: ps When I read your review I had second thoughts about Jewels' fate but what's done is done.I don't get a 'do over' but maybe Dean will.
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