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Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 28/02/09 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 26

"Castiel smiled" and I smiled with him, loved this final chapter; GREAT STORY, once more an unbelievable intense and amazing ride!! Hope you will write a sequel, would love to see dad Dean, uncle Sam and Bobby train little John!

So looking forward to new chapters of Season of the witch now!

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 27/02/09 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 26

OH yes, yes please!  Continue this one with the adventures of Papa Dean! This was truly spectacular!  I loved every inch of it, though it made me cry.

 

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 26/02/09 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 25

Aahh Dean, he really tried to bargain with fate and it backfired in the most brutal way on him ("I'll remember the pain and then I'll remember her. This way, I can never forget."), your descriptions couldn't be more intense and painful! I'd say Dean learned his lesson, Castiel should give him back his real life with all memories of Grace and the seal of this love, his son (by the way, uncle Sam really did a good job with the baby, so no worries here, they will be fine!). Brilliant chapter!

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 25/02/09 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 25

Ouch!  So Dean's learning his lesson the hard way, of the major "be careful what you wish for"  variety.  Bet he doesn't want to forget the pain of Grace's loss anymore, huh?

I hope Castiel can bring Dean back to the crappy present a la "It's A Wonderful Life."  And I hope Dean names the freakin'  baby!

MORE PLEASE!!! 

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 24/02/09 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 24

As much as I want Castiel to take Dean's pain away (and I know he feels like he has nothing left to lose right now and never felt so alone), I don't want Dean to lose his memory of Grace and their love, cause that's what will last and stand the test of time and really makes Grace permanent!! Please!!!


Author's Response: Well, since you asked so nicely...

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 24/02/09 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 23

Oh no!  No no no no no!  Sam's not supposed to go to the dark place NOW!

And holy Jesus, woman!  Am trying so hard not to BAWL now! 



Author's Response: I even got a little misty...and I killed her.

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 24/02/09 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 23

It's sad and beautiful beyond belief and even though reading it ripped me apart, I loved every line!!! One to treasure!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. Just a little more to hopefully give Dean some closure.

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 23/02/09 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 22

Oh no, so Dean is losing his Grace now (so hoped for a little while longer!) and it is even more brutal because it is such a "normal" cause - and what a shock this very lovely Dean/Grace moment involved this sudden into such horror.

Sam's decision however to give his brother the chance to stay with Grace until the last moment ("...but Dean, your face was the last thing I saw. I remember it, you holding me and I wasn't afraid anymore"; simply wonderful) and then not to make the deal for Dean cause he just couldn't take away Grace's faith in God and her salvation, was such and incredible special gift Sam made to both Dean and Grace (who I know couldn't have lived with Dean making the deal), stunning!!!; that's once more a scene I won't forget.

If I could make a wish here, it would be that Grace will have a moment with Dean and the baby to say goodbye and find peace!

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 22/02/09 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 22

No no no no no no!!  It's happening too soon!  I don't want Grace to be gone yet!  :(

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 19/02/09 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 21

Awwww... Yay!  You finally reunited them.

Only, we already know it's temporary (not Permanent).  You're so cruel.  So very, very cruel...

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 19/02/09 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 21

"To be with her 'til the day I die", can't even tell how it felt to see Dean and Grace reunited, it's more than bittersweet, catching the feelings so well, their deep love for each other but also the tragic of hurt souls, masterly written!

About Season of the witch - I patiently wait and think you're doing a very good job with Sam here (meanwhile I love both brothers equally, maybe Dean always a bit more, but you're really doing fine with Sam) and I simply adored your little Sam in Daddy's gone a hunting!

More of everything please!

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 17/02/09 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 20

Hey, still reading here if you maybe wondered, a bit overwhelmed I guess; it really breaks my heart to see Dean and Grace and to know how it will end, never expected it would feel like this. The last sentence in this chapter, "And Castiel touched Dean's cheek and he was overcome with a feeling of great sadness and loss and immediately he knew that he was feeling his Grace" (beautiful!) made me a weeping Wanda but I love the story and simply can't stop reading. Bring Dean at least back to Grace, please!

Author's Response: I was hoping I hadn't run you off. I'd miss you and I promise I'm working on Season of the Witch but it's so hard for me to write Sam. I adore him but not nearly as much as Dean and a loathsome witch is much harder than a character like Grace.

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 16/02/09 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 20

Awwww....  You're breakin' my heart, woman!  Bring our Gracie and Dean back together right now!  Now, I say!  lol.

It would so KILL Dean to have to leave his wife and unborn child, even if it was for their own protection.  He's not much into the emo, but when he loves he loves with all his heart and soul, and he'd die for the ones he loves (as we've already seen).  So I can only imagine what it would take for him to leave a woman he actually gave his heart to and MARRIED, particularly when that woman was carrying his unborn child.

Reunite them, pretty please!?



Author's Response: All you need do is threaten. See next chapter.

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 14/02/09 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 19

GAH!!!!  What?!!?!

This chapter was angst-licious, but so painful at the same time!  Dean's nightmare was horrifying -- and I so KNEW it was Grace he was about to dissect.  And him being violent in his sleep is just horrible!

Please kiss the boo boo soon and make it better!  lol.  I love Grace and Dean (even though I know Grace dies, as per the first chapter).



Author's Response: This is supernatural. Who ever stays dead.

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 12/02/09 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 18

Awwww....  Damn these little snippets are sweet.

Though I think Grace should be getting a Babylonian Queen.  lol.  It's only fair.



Author's Response: Oh, I agree completely.

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 12/02/09 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 17

Awwww.  Now that was just a tease, wasn't it?  A teensy weensy tiny taste?

More please!



Author's Response: Just counting down the months.

Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 17

This story tugs all the heartstrings, at least for me, that the series itself is now doing...

As wonderfully as you're weaving this tale, I find myself wanting to know what happens next here just about as much as I want to when this short little hiatus is ended!

Exquisitely done! 

 



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I read that the powers that be pushed out the next new episode to March 12th.  Boo!

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 10/02/09 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 16

Oh wow, that was an action-packed chapter!

I'm so curious about this spawn thing -- is it Grace the don't want procreating, or is it Dean?  Or is it the both of them together creating something the demons want dead?

And if it gives anything away, ou don't have to answer.  ;)

Awesomeness.  Can't wait for the next installment!



Author's Response: Do you believe in coincidence...or fate?

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 06/02/09 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 15

GAHHHHH!!!!!

That's about all I can say right now.  SUPER EVIL CLIFFIE!!!!

LOVED IT!   Absofreakinglutely LOVED IT!

Ruby is for to be dying painfully and slowly now?  I really do not like her, and I'm so glad you've shown her for the snake I believe her to be.

MORE PLEASE!  PRETTY PLEASE!



Author's Response: Thank you. A demon with a heart of gold? I think not. Lilith is Demon!Barbie and Ruby is most assuredly Demon!Skipper

Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 30/01/09 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 14

"Memories and angels drove Dean and demons pulled Sam but maybe this turn of events would change things for the better." -- Good stuff- Keep it coming :)

Hmmm- & it's getting pretty darn good here -- I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response: Thanks so much. I hope you enjoy. ps. nice work on your Ruby/bitch challenge!

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 29/01/09 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 14

Wedding in Vegas and Elvis, that's simply perfect! Bobby is so right, Dean "went to hell and back" for it.

Author's Response: And now I'm gonna send him back. I guess I'm the bitch.

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 29/01/09 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 14

Ok, all's forgiven for now.  That chapter was positively delightful.  I'm grinning so broadly I might just cry.  Married in Vegas -- that's just perfect for Dean!  lol.

And that intrigue at the very end -- my curiosity's beyond piqued now.

MORE! MORE! MORE!



Author's Response: What can I say. Ruby's a bitch.

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 29/01/09 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 13

I hate you.  I've just decided.  HOW CAN YOU MAKE GRACE SO SWEET AND COOL AND AWESOME AND THEN KILL HER????

You're all kinds of evil.  " I'm permanent." 

Shame on you.  I love this story, but you're tearing my heart into tiny bits.  You should be hanging your head in shame.  You sadist!  lol.

(You realize everything I've said is teasing, except the "I love this story" part, right?)



Author's Response: I realize you're teasing and I'm loving it!

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 29/01/09 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 13

There never was any doubt for me Dean wouldn't just exactly react the way he did, he truly is an amazing guy!! And Grace, it's a miracle she survived, horrifying what Azazel did to her. My favorite line was Grace's "I told him to cover his ears", so caring and lovely.

Author's Response: Fora while I thought maybe I crossed the line with what Grace did to stop Azazel's plan. Hopefully not.

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 28/01/09 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 12

Oh, it's already at this point, I'm not prepared for the baby part yet, still try to brace up for the time Dean will lose Grace (not dealing very good with it so far)! As much as I enjoyed their "talk", and to watch Grace counter Dean's questions with such ease and fast wit was an absolute joy (terrific scene!!), it's very tough for me to read the story, thanks to your brilliant writing I have taken Grace to my heart; okay, deep breath, now we will hear how Azazel hurt her!

Author's Response: Hopefully, after she tells all, Dean will still be there to make it all better because we all know Demon sex is never pretty.

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