Supernaturalville
Reviewer: Cali Winchester (Signed) · Date: 24/02/09 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow. What can I really say other than I really loved this story. I'm speechless.

Don't stop writing.

 

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/01/09 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

Stupendous!  You had my emotions roaring---sorrow, grief, joy.  You really put me through it this time!  What an amazing talent you have for giving your reader the gift of becoming the character.  I was John without knowing I'd become him.  Kudos!!

I always had a love/hate thing for John.  I thought he was an ass for not responding when his boys needed him the most yet I always hoped he had a good reason.  Thanks for giving me that reason.

Reviewer: rozzy (Signed) · Date: 02/12/08 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 1

Amazing story telling.    Seeing things from John's POV - 'hearing' his silent lament for failing both his boys was heartbreaking to absorb without wanting to cry with him, for him.   His salvation at the end truly was a blessing. 

Look forward to reading more from your pen in the future.

Reviewer: Xanetia (Signed) · Date: 25/11/08 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was beautiful!

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 24/11/08 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow!!   Incredible ride through so many painful Winchester moments!  Loved John's POV.  We get to see so much through the eyes of the boys....it was great to follow along through John's eyes.  Excellent job!

Author's Response:

Thank you. 

I always wanted at least ONE flashback episode of John on a hunt. This was my homage to that desire.

Reviewer: turch (Signed) · Date: 24/11/08 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 1

OMG! That was amazingly beautiful. Those Winchesters and their pent up angst!! Excellent job!

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 24/11/08 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh, good one!  Definitely a hellish punishment for poor John. 

Author's Response: Thanks! I hate to torment him, but John just lends himself to suffering so well.

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