Reviewer: jennie81 (Signed) · Date: 18/07/10 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 5
good story clap clap
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 10/06/09 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 5
Great story!
Author's Response: Thank you. For the stars and the review.
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 04/06/09 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 5
What? No more sweetness? Mistakenly I was sure there'd be another chapter of happy reunion, celebration and healing brotherly love.
Author's Response: Sorry. Nothing ends that sweet and I just couldn't write the sweetness. Are the guys comfortable with each other now? I think with time but a lot of time and trust. Also, my money is that my ending scene is going to be very close to the ending scene that we'll get on the show. Thanks for reading! I really appreciate you coming back to this story after so much time and waiting. I also appreciate all the reviews. Kim
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 04/06/09 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 5
Oh goodie, goodie, yum yum. A short but very sweet chapter. The boys back together, Lilleth, Ruby and whatever was in Sam gone, I'm happy. And another chapter of sweetness to come.
Author's Response: It was meant to be Azazel in Sam. One of the many theories going round at one time, that Azazel put his "essence" in Sam so that he could live as a human. I then played with the antichrist mythology where it says that the antichrist will be under the influence of a demon. So, in my story Azazel's plan was to have Sam be the antichrist. Happily, Lilith, Ruby and Azazel are now all dead in this story. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 04/06/09 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 4
OMG what are you doing to our boys? Despite being able to read this as a complete story I admit to being confused as to Sam's real intentions. No doubt that is you messing with my head, and I'm still hanging on to the hope that all will be well between the brothers again by the end. Fingers crossed.
Author's Response: I had to go back and read this. That's what I did today at work. Yes, I was trying to express Dean's confusion and Sam's confusion by making the overall thing a bit confusing. There comes a point where trust is breached and that makes working together difficult. I Hope you liked what's to come. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 03/06/09 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 3
Having finally decided that I've seen enough of season 4 to be safe reading this story, I have to say I love it. I'm glad I waited, and I'm glad that Ben and Lisa are involved and that the angels are protecting them whilst working with Dean. I'm not so glad that Sam is with Ruby and at loggerheads with Dean, but am hoping that by the end of the story you will have set that right. Hopefully I will be back tomorrow to enjoy the rest.
Author's Response: Yea! Happy to see you back. I hope you like how this ends. Thanks for the review and all the stars (they're so purdy). Kim
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/03/09 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 5
Halleluia! I was hoping you wouldn't split our boys up. Brilliant plot! I was so sucked in that I couldn't even think. (You know this could be another series.)
Author's Response: Thank you so very much. Sorry for missing all of your reviews. I'm noticing a trend....March must have been a bad month for me. Anyway, I wanted to weave a tangled web and leave everyone guessing while still trying to show that we should be guessing. My way of saying I felt the Shows ending to season 4 was a little contrived since we had no clue that we should suspect that Ruby was working with someone. Part of suspense is wondering who's doing what to whom. ANYWAY, thank you for the reviews. I really appreciate. lostatc
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/03/09 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 4
Another superb chapter! the excitement is driving me crazy! I can't wait to find out who is rerally on the side of good and who is fighting for evil. PLEASE let Sam be playing Ruby so he and Dean can defeat Lilith!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/03/09 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 3
You have me very confused. Not about the story but with trying to figure out who is really betraying whom. Wow! Talk about a tangled web! I've decided to just sit back and read. Brain off. Enjoyment on.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/03/09 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 2
Incredible!! It's been a while since I read the first chapter so I had to get back to it. I'm so glad that Dean has his other family but I wish it didn't come at the price it seems to be exacting. I have a sinking suspicion that this isn't going to end well for Dean.
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 28/12/08 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 5
So glad Sam and Dean worked together to finish Lilith and Ruby..Really liked this story. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thank yo so much. I wanted to show that they could be pulled apart and put back together again - not really doable in the show to this extent but an idea that maybe needs worked on. Thanks for reading and leaving a review. Kim
Reviewer: Aj_17 (Signed) · Date: 18/12/08 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 5
Awesome ending! Are you going to make a sequal, cause that would be awesome as well! great job!
Author's Response: No sequel, sorry. This story was a gut reaction to a couple of episodes that I didn't like very much. I am glad that you liked it. Thank you. Kim
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 17/12/08 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 5
Nice ending. Though I would have liked to have seen more of Ben...but we can't have everything:)
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Not "my" Ben in this story. He and Lisa were used as a means to push Dean into stepping away from Sam and finally allowing/forcing Sam to make his own decisions. So, to the overall story they weren't vital in being there. Plus I was a little worried I'd drop into writing him like my Ben and didn't want that same voice for this kid. If I had placed him in that room with the adults I would have been very tempted to hurt him and I don't think Dean could have forgiven Sam for that one. I needed Sam to have an opportunity to make the correct decisions and Dean to have the ability to fight along side his brother again. Again, thanks.
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 10/12/08 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 4
Great couple of chapters but I really don't like what you've done to Sam and Dean's relationship, It's terrible that they don't trust each other anymore, And it's just wrong that Dean is going to have a family. Please update soon.
Author's Response: I don't think there is a lot of trust going on in the show at this point and that's where I drew from. But unlike the show I would like to see Sam as an active participant in his own story rather than just an observer. I will never agree with anyone that believes these two characters can only have each other in their lives so we'll have to agree to disagree. Last chapter will be up next week. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Aj_17 (Signed) · Date: 10/12/08 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 4
and the plot thickens! I hope Dean will be able to hold up, he can really kick butt! go Dean! i'm interested to see where Sam's story is going, i can't decide whether i really believe he is on one side or the other. Great Job so Far!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. This was meant to confuse and to be challenging. Hope it doesn't disapoint (suddenly I can't remember how to spell disappoint...the brain must be going). Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Aj_17 (Signed) · Date: 04/12/08 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 3
hm, very interesting. Great Great Job! i can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: Thank you. Working on the update.
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 03/12/08 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 3
great chapter..Dean's getting good at the exorcisims..Sam is being a jerk..The argument was intense..Looking forward to more. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really appreciate it. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 03/12/08 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 3
Sam is such a jerk in this story. I'm finding him extremely unlikeable.
Author's Response: I hope that you will stick through to the end. This story was an exercise in what I think they are not doing in the show. Sam's balndness in the show irritates me. They say that he's going evil but they never show it. So, I decided to let it show through his actions not just words said. That being said, please read to end. Sometimes things have to be bad before they can be good again. Thanks for leaving a review. I appreciate you reading my story and taking the time to comment.
Reviewer: Aj_17 (Signed) · Date: 29/11/08 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 2
What?! thats it so far?! (flips the pages) no! i don't wanna wait! (folds arms and pouts) fine, i'll wait, but only because it's awesomely worth it!
Author's Response: It's coming. patience is a virtue. Thanks!
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 26/11/08 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 2
Fantastic story so far a very long chapter, Don't like what you're doing to Sam, I'm a Dean fan but I know that you making Sam act this way is hurting him. Is it just jealousy? Are they going to be ok again? Update soon looking forward to it.
Author's Response: Just a warning, things are going to get a lot worse. I never intended this to be a pretty story. I happen to think they play Sam to nice and straight on the show. This is my take on what would happen if Sam were to ever actually dip into the darkness within. This story is completely written (wow, what a ncie feeling) and will be updated weekly. It's only five chapters. Please stick with it through the end, even if you hate me before it's over.
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 26/11/08 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 2
Great chapter..I like Uriel better in your story. Can't wait to read more. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: I love Uriel in the show. He's the moral straight man. Takes things very literally and will always do as he's told. I love how hard he is. I know a lot of people don't like how aggressive he is toward Dean but I think that angels would see Dean as sinful and hedonistic - not very virtuous traits. Don't get me wrong, love Dean! But, he is rather the bad boy. Thanks for reading and for leaving a review.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/11/08 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
Another excellent beginning! You have the same talent that Kripke has to make me angry at the angels because they seem to lack any compassion or humanity. I'm certain you have a good reason for all this and I can't wait to read it!
Author's Response: Thank you! My answer to you would be one that I am sure that you are aware of but - angels have no humanity. We were designed specifically to have free will and they don't. I love that about this representation of Castiel and Uriel. Castiel is curious and Uriel could care less. As long as he does what he supposed to do that's all he cares about. Where Castiel is heading toward Anna's route in his curiousity of humans, Uriel is heading in the opposite direction, almost blasphemous in his disregard for who he's dealing with. I love it. I'm almost more interested in their story at this point. So, that being said. This was not ever meant to be a happy story. That's why the disclaimer, please read through to the end. Kim
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 20/11/08 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 1
Very interesting start..I just have one question. Are you going to tie this into your other Ben stories? Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: This Ben has nothing to do with my Ben. I needed something that would be profound enough in Dean's life to prompt him to remember. Actually Ben doesn't figure too prominently in this story. Thanks for reading and for the review.
Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 20/11/08 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 1
interesting really enjoyed it...most likely what you wrote here is similar to what Dean will reveal tonight...great job
Author's Response: I really hope so. It fits with the Hero's Journey and makes sense but the show isn't always know for fitting and making sense. I just hope that I come away from tonights episode feeling a little of the hope I completely lost after the last episode (and what prompted this story). Thanks for reading and for leaving a review! I appreciate it.
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