Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 30/03/08 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 2

Well, technically you can't have a prologue and epilogue without the creamy filling in between. Sometimes you just have to cut out a few words in a sentence to make it read smoothly. I kind of felt like it needed to be reread and corrected before it got posted. the story itself had potential, tho and I liked your attempt to be humorous. (Altho seriously , a guy would never ask another guy what he was doing in the bathroom!)

Reviewer: maria noel (Signed) · Date: 12/05/07 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

Awwwww as cute as the one for Sammy bday!!! cool!!!

Reviewer: bopeep (Signed) · Date: 06/03/07 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 2

great story! it made me chuckle

 

Author's Response: thanks, again, bopeep!=)

Author's Response: thanks again, bopeep!=) it made me chuckle too..does that make me nuts? lol