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Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 30/11/08 08:14 AM · On: FIVE: Knockin' On Heaven's Door

That was soo MEAN! I was sitting here crying getting more and more frustrated with you for killing off such a great character and then----

I hate it when that happens! lol. :)



Author's Response:

Bwa-ha-ha-ha-haaaa!  *rubs hands in evil enjoyment*

You cried? *points at monitor* You girl!  LOL - kidding. Thanks for reading and leaving a comment - and stars!! 

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 30/11/08 06:07 AM · On: FIVE: Knockin' On Heaven's Door

ok, ya got me! great chapter - the action, the angst (oh dear god the angst!)and then a cracker of a punchline... can't wait to see how she explains this one! your characters are fantastic, wonderfully realised, with more than enough grit to take on the winchesters and demons alike, and just enough mystery to keep us guessing...

Author's Response:

Angst? I wrote angst? Whoops - I am sorry, I don't know how it happened, I wasn't even there, no-one saw me do it, you can't prove it was me, even...

Thanks for reading and leaving such an ace comment! Glad you like the OCs....

 

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 30/11/08 03:56 AM · On: FIVE: Knockin' On Heaven's Door

AHHHHH! whats next!

Author's Response: You'd like me to tell you, wouldn't you.... 

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 27/11/08 08:44 AM · On: FOUR: She Brings Me Love

A wonderful chapter. it's nice to see Sam and Dean have some fun, but i'm thinking it's not gonna last lol.

Author's Response: Does it ever? LOL!

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 26/11/08 06:38 PM · On: FOUR: She Brings Me Love

awesome chapter, you have a way of writing your characters that makes them believable and very easy to see. well done  can't wait for more

Author's Response: Thanks! I worried this one was much slower than the others.

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 26/11/08 05:25 PM · On: FOUR: She Brings Me Love

oh oh - someone's in for a world of hurt... can't wait!

Author's Response: Tee-hee - it's all going to come out in the wash...

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 26/11/08 10:29 AM · On: FOUR: She Brings Me Love

ooh, this is getting so exciting, I don't want to wait!  Have to say, love the way you have written Moon. She is a great character, very layered. The way she and Dean interact is fantastic. And her at times reminding him of his little innocent brother while still bringing in some chemistry between her and Dean  must have been challenging to write. I flop back and forth between "she is too young/little sister ish" and "they are wonderfully snarky together".  Its just really nice to see Dean with a friend.

P.S. Bring on the brother war:)



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks. I thought the chapter title might throw a few people - but it was picked for both brothers really. Not every kind of love is 'jump in the sack' love, LOL...

Thanks for your input on Moon - I do worry she's not really one thing and not really another. Glad to know she's being well-received!

I should have the next part ready for weekend... 

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 24/11/08 03:13 AM · On: THREE: Paradise City

please no apologies necesary.Any time you feel the need to include full-frontal nudity, particularly Dean, you go right ahead.

looking forward to Dean's revenge



Author's Response: Is that carte blanche? Woo-hooo!

Reviewer: Renate (Signed) · Date: 23/11/08 11:04 PM · On: THREE: Paradise City

heh heh heh

evil Sam strikes again!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 23/11/08 07:39 AM · On: THREE: Paradise City

 No apologies needed feel free to add as much as you like lol.

Great chapter,very funny.



Author's Response: Thanks! Hope the next ones are as good. :)

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 23/11/08 05:21 AM · On: THREE: Paradise City

that was too funny:)   Moon's comment about "eye's watering" took a moment to get....awesome!

Author's Response: Ta very much! And for the stars! Glad you enjoyed it...

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 23/11/08 03:49 AM · On: ONE: Girls Just Wanna Have Fun

oh dont worry, no apologies necessary! gotta love sammy for that litle prank... but i can't wait for the payback! And i can't wait to find out what her names for the boys mean! i know, i know, wait and see...

Author's Response: ROFL - yup. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 20/11/08 10:35 PM · On: TWO: More Than A Feeling

I love your description of the old lady I hope she shows up again.can't wait to see Sam's revenge.

Author's Response: Thanks! Have to wait and see on that one...

Reviewer: Renate (Signed) · Date: 20/11/08 02:37 PM · On: TWO: More Than A Feeling

Very interesting!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 20/11/08 01:05 PM · On: TWO: More Than A Feeling

Well she was a creepy old lady lol,this story is getting really exciting,i can't wait for the next part.



Author's Response: Thanks! Hope the next bit lives up to expectation... Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 20/11/08 10:55 AM · On: TWO: More Than A Feeling

think maybe dean needs to watch out for sammy's revenge too! it's all getting a tad ominous... great!

Author's Response:

*Rubs hands wickedly*. Oooh, it's worse than you think... 

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 16/11/08 07:26 AM · On: ONE: Girls Just Wanna Have Fun

Interesting start,looking forward to reading this one.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading, hope the next part lives up to expectation, ROFL.

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 16/11/08 05:49 AM · On: ONE: Girls Just Wanna Have Fun

Yah! glad to see you back. the story looks great it's about time Dean met a girl that didn't fall at his feet looking forward to next chapter.

Author's Response:

Hmmm... Didn't fall at his feet? Exactly the words I had in my notes to write this chapter!

Thanks for reading! 

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 16/11/08 04:02 AM · On: ONE: Girls Just Wanna Have Fun

oops - Sammy flaming out and demons drinking whiskey - sounds like it's gonna be fun!

Author's Response:

he he he.... wait for the next instalment, LOL

Thanks for reading! 

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