Well...I'm not sure this story is a Supernatural fiction.  The only similarities to the show are the names and the Impala but the characters just don't follow the story lines. 

Its not easy posting a story for all to read and tear apart, so I give you kudos for making that giant leap.  Keep practicing and improving.  The story was a very hard read with all the missing words and choppy sentences.  Makes me wonder if English is your first language.  I hope I'm not offending you, but it helps to hear the critisizm if you want to learn from your mistakes.  I prefer bad reviews over no reviews at all. 

 As a fanfiction of Supernatural, I did not like this story.  As a story in general it was very sad.  I realize not every childhood is happy and that if we pretend bad things don't happen to children then child abuse will never end.  But it was still sad; which was an emotion you evoked thru your story.  So feel accomplished in the knowledge that you were able to influence my emotions thru your writing.  Perfect your grammar and your stories will earn stars. 

Keep practicing!

....i don´t like anybody now...including Dean...

no more awwww....and Jacob???? and you just kill Mary????? wow!!! you are a drama fan girl!

I´m start hating John...why OH why he´s so mean with little chubby Sammy?

ah! more awwwwwwww 

AWWWWW that was so sweety and warmy....that is a very AU fic....