Loved your story! I certainly didn't see that the twins father was trying to murder his own boys. They must have shown some evilness as children for a father to do that. I had to hold my breath during the confrontation scene. Very intense! Hopefully, Dean won't have to have rabies shots. Yikes! Hope you write a new story soon!

Author's Response:

Sincere thanks for all your reviews!  It's nice to know what readers think.

Yikes! What a cliff hanger! I hope Sam can get that guy and figure out how to find Dean. Hopefully, Dean and the kids will be ok. I can't wait to see what happens next, I'm biting my nails here!

Holy Crap! Who is coming through the floor or door??? Poor Dean, he thinks he may have contracted rabies (he still has some time for the vaccine, never fear!). Sam is running through a corn field with some dark figure after him that he didn't see. The suspense is killing me, I hope you write the next chapter ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!  Doing a final read-through of Chapter 8 and hope to have it up within a day or two!

Yikes! Doesn't sound good for Dean right now. I guess Sam is wondering what in the world is going on and how he can save his big brother!!! Great story so far!

Hmmmm... very interesting. Seems like the boys are living in different planes of reality right now. Wonder how  that man made that happen? Looking forward to reading where you take us next!

what i think so far? what i said before! Love this story! it's scary, plenty of hurt!Dean (yeah yeah, i know, we're all sick and twisted... lol!) and enough twists and turns to keep us guessing...

enjoy the new epi, you lucky thing!

oops... looks like the hounds are on their way...

you have a real knack for a nasty cliffie, you know that? Can't wait for more! And can't wait to see who's in more touble, 'cause I've got a feeling there's more than a few twists to this tale...

Author's Response: Thank you for still being interested.  I love hearing from readers.  Chapter 6 is on the way.

rapidly running ot of fingernails to gnaw on here...

great stuff! scary, getting darker by the minute with a palpable sense of doom...

Author's Response:

In order to save your nails, I am fine-tweaking Chapter 4 and hope to have it up before the end of the night.  Once again, thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

and again with the scary! love it! keep em coming... (if only cause my pillows can't take much more of me hiding behind them! lol)

Author's Response: I truly hope this little story will live up to your expectations.  Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review!