Reviewer: buttercup1995 (Signed) · Date: 16/01/10 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 1 Ronald the duck
Omg pmsl. That was amazing. I giggled from beggining 2 end.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 16/11/08 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 1 Ronald the duck
Well, what kind of ducktation would you like me to give you, but that was as funny as Hell!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing , It means a lot when you're work is appreciated , thanks again !
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 13/11/08 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 1 Ronald the duck
I'm really sorry for the bad writhing , I do the best I can . If you want to help me ....how does that work ? I know NOTHING of the computer stuff ! ( I'm a bit of a moron ) Hun, don't for a minute think I'm calling you a bad writer, we all have to start somewhere right? This story has potential it just needs care and attention. Basic grammar, spelling etc will make your writing more pleasurable to read than it already is:) Schelz@hotmail.co.uk is my email, contact me through that and I can teach the basics to you.
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 13/11/08 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 1 Ronald the duck
Awww this was unbelievably cute! Some funny parts too. How old are they in this? But don't you think for one moment that I'm sitting on it !! Dean Winchester is 'NOT' sitting on a rubber duck named Ronald ! Do you understand ! " --- So funny and cute! One thing though, spelling, grammar and puncuation needs help. I understand english is not your first language but I would be willing to help you learn the basics if you like. Good story! FC X
Author's Response: Thanks , I'm really sorry for the bad writhing , I do the best I can . If you want to help me ....how does that work ? I know NOTHING of the computer stuff ! ( I'm a bit of a moron )
Reviewer: naturalbornwinchester (Signed) · Date: 13/11/08 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 1 Ronald the duck
now thats what u call a pain in the ass
Author's Response: Thanks !! This story came from a family epic........( Not mine )
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