Supernaturalville
Reviewer: Silvertayl (Signed) · Date: 24/01/10 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 5

I hope you haven't given up on this story. I was so enjoying it. Please update it soon, I wanna' know what happens, please.

Author's Response: Nope I haven't given up on this story yet.  In fact I have several chapters not yet typed up that I need to work on.  My life's just been a bit crazy.  Sorry for the major delays!  Thanks for continuing to check back too :)

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 02/02/09 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 5

This is awsome and your imagery is fantastic as well as the setting. The tunnels reminded me of London, England.

thanks.

Rating:) 200+++

Great action of brotherhood along with family. Not that Castieal did anything to help Dean, but he was there instead of Bobby.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 02/02/09 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 4

I am sorry to say this . . . I do love your story, but the character of Castiel is not welcoed fan of mine.

He plays with mystic and mysterious crap that at this tie the boys can't be involved with.

Thank you for suppling the news of Jane Doe. All the effects you have placed in this story has e mezmorised by the images that keep playing in my mind. Thanks.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/02/09 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 3

I do believe they "DEMONS" they are punching under the belt. There should there not have been a flag.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/02/09 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is one freak story and I'm approving it.

Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 18/12/08 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 5

great chapter as usual ! This story no belongs to one of my favorite and is going on to the list !

Author's Response: Thank you for continuing to read and review.  It's very much appreciated!  Take care!

Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 18/12/08 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 4

O this is so beautifully written and poor Dean , at least he has Sammy stepping up to the plate and taking care of him . great chapter !

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I love Dean and Sam's connection to one another and love writing it.  I'm glad they have each other.  : )

Take care!

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 24/11/08 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 4

I'm really hooked on your story! This first chapter was nailbiting, wondering if they were going to catch Dean or not, did they get to Sam? What will they do if they do catch Dean? Seeing Dean so mentally and physcally on the brink of exhaustion was so sad to see. I loved the tender moments where Sam was taking care of Dean. I like the thought that Casteil is Dean's guardian angel. I'm worried thought that the angels think Dean will deliver them from this war. I can''t wait to read the next chapter!!

Author's Response:

*blushes*

Wow!  Thank you so much!  : )

I'm so glad you're enjoying the story and you'll soon be getting some of those answers. : )

Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 24/11/08 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 4

Great chapter. I like the use of the name Samuel!


Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah Samuel just seems the appropriate way that Castiel would address him instead of the nickname.  I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far and thanks for taking the time to comment and review.  It's much appreciated!

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 16/11/08 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 3

this story just keep's getting better and better.  

Sam can sense being watched and Dean not leaving until the job is done.

can't wait for the next chapter.

Renee



Author's Response: Thank you for continuing to read!  Take care.

Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 16/11/08 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 3

Love the last two sentences ! original find !

Author's Response:

: )

Thank you and thanks so much for taking the time to both read and review.  It's much appreciated!

Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 16/11/08 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 2

Yep a real bulls -eye !!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story thus far!

Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 16/11/08 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

This seems like a bulls-eye to me ! Great !!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  : )

Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 09/11/08 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 2

Great start. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 08/11/08 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 2

wow intense story so far.

chapter 1 was intense; had me wanting to jump in a rescue Dean.

liked how you included Castiel in chapter 2.

can't wait to see where the story goes.

Renee 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! 

Castiel...yeah he keeps appearing in my stories.  Usually his arrival is unplanned and he just sort of stumbles in wanting to be included.  : )

I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far.  Take care!

Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 04/11/08 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

wow - great start to this story.

Any story that starts with Dean in pain is tops -- plus I like that it's well written.

Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review.  It's much appreciated! 

Hope you enjoy the rest of the story too! 

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