Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 05/04/09 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 1

Holy crap......

Well, Cal, you invited me into your twisted reality - I think that was the term you used. And this was seriously twisted....

I am completely creeped out by this. The tiny handprints - well, that just finished me off. I think I might just have to go and have a quiet little hysterical scream - like the one Dean's got locked in his throat.

Wow....*shivers*....

Well, all I can say is thank God I read this at work, at lunch-time, with the sun shining outside the office windows and all the overhead lights on.

Creepy, creepy, creepy, creepy, creepy......*shudders*...

Really well done, but creepy.....am I too old for a night-light?

Jules

Author's Response:

Heh. I did warn ya! This fic creeped me out when I wrote it - didn't quite scream hysterically. Must've been a fox or something. That's my story, I'm sticking to it.

Ta! Here. Have a glowing cookie instead.

Cal

Reviewer: Nikocal (Signed) · Date: 13/12/08 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

AH. scary. seriously, this is like lovecraft or something. This is so awesome.... I honestly didn't expect to be scared at all (written stuff hardly ever frightens me) but congrats, you managed it, heh. Captured the whole waking in the middle of the night thing and wondering what that strange noise was, something that happens to me a lot. I know exactly how Dean feels.

Love, love that you used the rats. You've reinvented the rat for me. It's now a swarm.

  It started out rather well, I was giggly at Dean cowering, and then... the giggling stopped. It reminded me alot of Hellsing (I don't know if you know it, anime, but it's a good reminder, because Hellsing is fantastic).  

The imagery is so intense, I can just see everything. ...cries out as his hands sink into a yielding mass...  I love that bit. The chitinous horde is so vivid throughout... just everywhere...

...barely remembering to turn the knife in his hand away in time to avoid cutting his own throat... God, that's horrible, that really captures the panic of it, I think that's the moment that first scared me, made it real, imagine being so scared you might do that...

 And you had Dean wake up, without making it just another deus ex, creating an incredibly creepy ending. I hope Dean can handle it, 'cause if I had a dream like this I'd need lots of padding and pills, I think.  

Author's Response:

have to say, its one of the only things that really, really terrifies me - insects on me, inthe dark... so i thought i'd make him suffer it! glad you found it a little funny to start with - wanted to have that progression, horror always seems scarier when it's a little unexpected.

and the ending was where it all started. cause i had this image of him waking up as sammy came in and then sitting there, terrified, when he sees 'whatever' (at that point) from the dream.

thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 02/11/08 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

That was terrifying, scary creepy, horrifying...

loved it lol

Jacq

Author's Response:

starting to get worried that 'That was scary' is making me smile so much...

Thanks for r&r'ing - glad you liked it!

cal

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 01/11/08 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

A great story very creepy.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 01/11/08 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oooohhhh, I don't want that to be the END!!  The hurt/comfort junkie in me wants to see Dean tell Sam what happened and Sam to offer comfort Dean.

Regardless, it was a great, spooky story.  I loved it.

Author's Response:

Unfortunately, that is the end for that - there's no comfort for the poor boys in this horror story!

but (shameless plug ahead...) i'm working on a 2-parter with LOTS of hurt and LOTS of comfort to keep ya happy!

thanks for reading and reviewing, glad you liked it!

Reviewer: justannanow (Signed) · Date: 31/10/08 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

Holy sh** that was soooo good. I loved the ending, it was all just so awesome.

Author's Response: *chuckles* What a response -thanks!