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Reviews For Mondo Utah
Reviewer: Freedom (Signed) · Date: 13/10/07 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 3

Good, good. I really like Nick by the way, can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Freedom (Signed) · Date: 13/10/07 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 2

Intresting, monti this well written and I'm now going on to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Freedom (Signed) · Date: 13/10/07 06:09 AM · On: Come Come Ye Saints

Really pulling 1st chapter, keep it up.

Reviewer: Evergreen (Signed) · Date: 09/04/07 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 3

Wow, keep going!

Reviewer: Kakyd (Signed) · Date: 15/03/07 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 2

Excellent start. Well written and interesting. Can't wait to see where it's going.

Author's Response: Oh, more nice words.  I'm a big fan of nice words.  Thanks kakyd!

Reviewer: bopeep (Signed) · Date: 14/03/07 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 2

wow, awesome chapter! i totally thought nick was gonna be like one of "deans" girls too, so im glad someone went another direction with the chicks dean knows, so thank you! anyway, great chapter, update soon!!

Author's Response: And I was nervous about poor little Nick!  Really was terrified that she would get ridiculed for falling for Dean.  But, hey, who wouldn't?

Reviewer: clynn345 (Signed) · Date: 03/03/07 07:25 PM · On: Come Come Ye Saints

Great stuff

Author's Response: Thanks so much -- I love getting nice reviews.  Criticism is okay if its helpful but it always puts a spring in my step with nice words.

Reviewer: bopeep (Signed) · Date: 03/03/07 04:01 PM · On: Come Come Ye Saints

awesome story! please update ASAP!! i gotta know what the deal is with that freaky flame! lol anywho, you are doing a great job, PLEASE update!!! :)

Author's Response: Thanks bopeep, I appreciate the encouragement.  Oh, and that little flame -- <evil laugh>  I do enjoy writing that little flame.

Reviewer: Phx (Signed) · Date: 03/03/07 02:15 PM · On: Come Come Ye Saints

Interesting start and very well written. It captured my interest - I have to ask though so I know whether or not I want to continue to read, is this a Mormon bashing story?

I am Mormon and would appreciate a heads up so I can stop reading if that is what this is about.



Author's Response:

Its not a Mormon bashing story.  I grew up Mormon, my parents and my in-laws are Mormon, so there's no chance I would bash them.  I will tell you that I talk a bit about Mormon history, including its ties to masonry, and also about Mormon folklore.

So there's no Mormon bashing but there's plenty of other stuff that Mormons shouldn't be reading about.  ;-)  

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