Supernaturalville
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 29/12/10 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 15

yeah! congrates to you and thank you all for helping this great writer that i think in point of you better then dean koonts  and stephen king he is up there will william shakespear. :)

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 29/12/10 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 14

this is awesome as hell that is an applause thank you.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 29/12/10 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 13

ahhh me no :(** i want more please :) hmmmm thank you.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 29/12/10 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 12

? why cant or could the father ever do that why have dean do it? john winchester...ugh...iwas wondering if i could get a copof this piece of literature i would like to keep as a favrit of mine ivonne_sammmm69@yahoo.com thank you for this story. i applaude you.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 28/12/10 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 11

now this is a family story thank you for this. I applaude it.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 27/12/10 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 10

man u do do intens workout on your stories and that is fun just fun to read thanks.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 27/12/10 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 9

i am so going to kick his fathers ass JOHN WINCHESTER you screwed up big time.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 27/12/10 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 8

gee no not geek glee... get them to a hospis now!!!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 27/12/10 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 7

lets hope that this will fix the situation. Poor uncle Bobby...wait are u useing the charcter tom wheling from superamn? dud im so up. :)

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 27/12/10 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 6

this is to much fo rme i can feel the wrath they are going threw.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 27/12/10 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 5

damn why cant anyone just tell bobby to always be by them...it sould be so much eaiser.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 27/12/10 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 4

damn this thing how the hell are they going to kill it if they are both screwed.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 27/12/10 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 3

damn i feel like im there and i should help, ? do you do this to all your readers? to seem to be involoved i like it and applaude you for it.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 27/12/10 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 2

this is getting excited and i want more thank you.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 27/12/10 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 1

damn these composititons that you as a writer as well as other im jelous and i love it...i wish that i was famous and be able to publish each one of you aritst of story telling the best i can thank you for this ... but i will say that is brother is some how related to the DONKEEYS finess of being simply jackass's.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/10/09 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 14

Fabulous!  Just enough emotion without being mushy.  I'm glad the gulf between them is being crossed.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/10/09 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 13

With all the recent excitement I forgot that Sam and Dean weren't on the best of terms dealing with their father's death.  Now I'm eager to see how this situation helps them deal.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/10/09 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 12

Dean humming Metallica?  He must have been worried for Sam.

I always think it's odd that people make you open your eyes then tell you it's alright to go back to sleep.  Real life is strange.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/10/09 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 11

Sooo funny!  "...hands patting down his torso, glancing down to see if he was in one piece."  And the fact that he doesn't want Tom to mention the yowie got the jump on them was perfect!   

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/10/09 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 10

"...but Sam stayed focused on the voice he knew, the one that always took care of him, and made everything okay."  What a simple yet eloquent way to sum up what Dean means to Sam.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/10/09 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 9

Very good!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/10/09 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 8

Another great chapter!  You keep the tension high and keep me dying to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/10/09 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 7

Two sick Winchesters, and one Yowie, was way more than he could handle. Amen to that.

Thanks for giving us the background on Tom.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/10/09 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 6

Kind of funny---Bobby sure has his hands full.  I understand Dean wanting to take care of Sam but he's being more trouble to Bobby than if he'd just let the older man do it alone.  It's times like these Bobby probably wonders why he's friends with the Winchesters.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/10/09 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 5

Glory glory!  It's Bobby to the rescue.  Gotta love Bobby!

Oh finally!  I'm exhausted just reading about their laborious traipse through the woods.  Now i just need a hot chocolate and I'll be good.

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