Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 30/12/08 09:47 PM · On: Nobody wants to hear you sing about tragedy

OH NO! that coniving little....fairy....yeah that's what I was gonna say!

UGH! How are they gonna get outta this one?

Still on the edge of my seat ready to fall off!

I knew that little girl was evil!!!!

Author's Response:

He he, I'll believe you this time ^_^

And if SPN has taught me one thing and one thing alone, it's that you should never trust the little girls... not only can they be creepy as hell but sometimes, they may just be evil. :D Thanks again Gen!

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 30/12/08 12:39 PM · On: Deception never sold so well

Okay... things just got stranger...

So Dean/Jonathan is remembering...that's good right??? Loved the scene with joanna when he wakes up...would love to be her in that moment...;)

So, okay...the town doesn't exist...umm very curious indeed!

moving on to the next chappy!

 

Author's Response:

I'm really bad for complicating things... so yeah, gotta love the strangeness :D And is it bad that I'm actually jealous of Joanna? That's gotta be bad at least on some level... lol

Thanks Gen!

Reviewer: Demonica (Signed) · Date: 28/12/08 05:59 PM · On: There's a hole where something was...

Right when I thought I had this story figured out, that Stanley dude blows his brains out. I do have to agree with pranami3, there is something oddly fishy about Grey's "daughter".

I really enjoyed this chapter. It keeps getting better and better. Please update soon.

~Demonica~

Author's Response:

He he, yeah, happens all the time, just when you think you know what's going on someone goes and dies on ya. >:D Innocent little girls are rarely ever so innocent.

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: crazyb (Signed) · Date: 27/12/08 04:34 PM · On: There's a hole where something was...

oh I am so glad you updated

i am so intruged with this story

Pls Ud soon

Author's Response: Thank you! Hoping to work more on it soon! :D

Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 27/12/08 09:10 AM · On: There's a hole where something was...

Wow!!! this was simply wow... Gotta say, Sam is in loads of trouble. I was just thinking, what if when sam told the guy, Stanly that he knew what was wrong with the town, maybe he too might be in danger. Whatever the thing is that is controlling this town (supposedly 'alien' ) might have heard Sam too. Wow, cant wait for the next chappy. An awesome work. Also I dont know, but I have my own doubts on the little girl. Maybe she is the one controlling this? Lilith was a small girl too, so just my vague idea.... Anyways, keep it coming.

Pranami :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Oh yeah, Sam is in looaads of trouble and things aren't gonna get much easier for him. Revelations to come in the next chapter ^_^ Should be fun. As for the little girl, who could suspect a poor innocent little girl, he he, I guess SPN has taught us well. There'll be some information on her in the next chapter too :D Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Demonica (Signed) · Date: 08/12/08 09:47 PM · On: Deception never sold so well

At last, you've finally updated!! Interesting chapter, I can't wait to read the rest.

~Demonica~

 

Author's Response: Lol, yeah, RL kept me away from updates which is typical, lol. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 06/12/08 12:36 PM · On: Deception never sold so well

Well, this was worth the wait. Is this town something like 'Hotel California' or something. Looks like sam is stuck in this town now. Just love the way Dean has started to get his memories back in his dreams. That was just great and more interesting was the impala incident. Anybody would admire her that way!!! Anyways, keep posting. I am already on the edge of my seat and looking forward for more... So, keep posting and have to say, A brilliant chapter there!!!

Pranami :)

Author's Response: Gotta love that gorgeous black car ^_^ Thank you so much for reading! Really glad you're enjoying it so far :D Hope you like the rest when it comes! Thanks again!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 06/12/08 08:15 AM · On: Deception never sold so well

One more mystery,the town is invisible to the outside world. Bobby can't go in, Sam is alone to solve the puzzle. Some cracks're showing in Dean's memories thank to Sam. So intriguing and captivating, I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! ^_^ So glad you're intrigued, hope you enjoy the rest. :D

Reviewer: L4LoveLosser (Signed) · Date: 11/11/08 06:47 PM · On: Like twisted vines that grow

Awwww, Sammy.  It's okay.  You'll figure it out.  You always do!!!  And Bobby will be there to help soon!  I love how all pictures of Dean just seem to disappear, but the memories don't.  Poor Sam's gonna have a hell of a time with this one.  And I think you captured the way Sam would react to having a conversation with 'Grey', very very good!  But, now he has to decide, was finding Dean like this better than not knowing?

I really really like this story!  It's great!  I can't wait for more!  *dangles cookie on fishing wire*  Is that enough motivation?

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading! 

Yeah, it's not gonna be easy for Sam, definately some bad stuff for him to deal with.Thanks so much, my original Sam/Grey convo that was written awhile back didn't exactly look too good, so had to be revised, so I'm really glad you like it! ^_^

Now, as for a cookie on a fishing wire... the only thing better than that is TWO cookies on a fishing wire. Okay... bad joke...but it's true :P Thanks again!

Reviewer: Demonica (Signed) · Date: 07/11/08 05:15 PM · On: Like twisted vines that grow

I knew it!!! From the first time I read the summary of this story I knew there was something Stepfordy about it. I am really enjoying this. PLEASE update soon.

Author's Response: Lol, thanks for reading! Hope you enjoy the rest when it comes. Should have a new chapter towards the end of the month or very early next month. ^_^

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 07/11/08 06:49 AM · On: Like twisted vines that grow

Okay...Intriguing! Had to give this a quick read before work when I saw it up! (see shorter chappies are a good thing!)

So all the kidappees have been relocated to new identities...very interesting...and Dean/Jonathan is remembering Sammy...hmmm

Anxiously awaiting an update now!

 

Author's Response: He he! Thanks Gen! ^_^  Glad you like it... Gah! See! I'm procrastinating from the Nano by review replying.. hehe.. ^_^

Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 06/11/08 01:14 PM · On: Like twisted vines that grow

This is intriquing...I'm hooked

Looking forward to the next chapter

Jacq

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Hope you enjoy the rest when it comes.

Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 01/11/08 09:17 AM · On: Here it goes again

Truly speaking....I am as confused as much as Sam is.......hehehe. Well, A good start I should say.... But still what if it is really dean and is held by some cult and given the role of a cop 'Johnathan Gray'. And also other people who had gone missing in this town...maybe they too are placed somewhere as somebody. Well, its just my Idea!!! Anyways, keep it coming. I am already hooked to this story. Waiting for the next chapter sooooon......

Pranami :)

Author's Response:

Until I got the story planned out properly, I was right there with you, lol. I like your thinking, and as for your theory of the other missing people - there'll be more on them in the next chapter :D

Thanks so much for reading!