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Reviews For The Memory Remains
Reviewer: bibikftlc (Signed) · Date: 03/02/09 08:10 AM · On: To the rhythm of a time bomb ticking away

Great story, can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response: Thanks so much^_^

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 03/02/09 08:06 AM · On: Like twisted vines that grow

Ahhh...so, all the missing people aren;t missing, they are just different people now....my confusion grows and so does my curosity. I just love this story so far. I like that Dean has a family am intrigued at how you are going to show him as a family man. Moving on to the next chappy!! Bambers;)

Author's Response: ^_^ Yep, they all just think they're someone else. And Dean, poor guy...

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 03/02/09 07:51 AM · On: Here it goes again

lol...I have to admit to my confusion. I have wanted to read this since you started writing it and as I know it is almost complete, I figured I start!! Very cool so far, and I am so interested in seeing what the heck is going on here!! I loved that grey still was wearing Dean's amulet, and yet there was a picture of him with his "family" awesome attention to the details!! moving on to the next chappy!! bambers;)

Author's Response: BAMBERS! ^_^ Thank you so much for reading. :D I love confusing people... mainly because half the time I confuse myself. This is definately my twisted way of writing a family/daughter/son!fic... lol

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 03/02/09 07:24 AM · On: To the rhythm of a time bomb ticking away

Wow, i loved this chapter, had me on the edge of my seat, can't wait for the next part.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Hope you like that rest when it comes!

Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 03/02/09 06:49 AM · On: To the rhythm of a time bomb ticking away

HI Rae

Sorry I've been lurking on this one. *hangs head in shame*

This is a great story as are all your stories, it makes me think of Dean's deal for some reason, Sam is damned if he does get Dean back and all alone if he doesn't. I hope that makes sense!

Now get that bell working boys!

Cheers Mary x :)



Author's Response:

Heya Mary! No problem with the lurking ^_^ Thank you for the great review. It makes perfect sense, lol. ^_^ Poor Sammy, I feel sorry for him in this story.

Thanks again!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 03/02/09 06:08 AM · On: To the rhythm of a time bomb ticking away

Gripping, intense chapter. Even with fuzzy memories, Dean didn't shot Sam, the brotherly bond is the most stronger weapon against supernatural entities. Can't wait to know if the bell'll the end of Morgan.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! ^_^ I love the brotherly bond between Sam and Dean, especially in the earlier seasons. Got most of the next chapter written up in note form so I've just got to translate it now. Thank you again!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 31/01/09 10:36 PM · On: Fall into you...

Come on Sam,  you must find a way to convince Dean that he's really Dean before Morgan figure out that something wrong is going on. Suspenseful, can't wait to read more. Rae, sorry to hear that you're sick, hope you'll feel better soon.

Author's Response:

I'm starting to feel better, lol, my lie in helped and I plan on having many more this week.

Thanks so much for reading, glad you're liking it! :D And now, I have a pretty quick update, for once, lol, so hope you enjoy. 

Reviewer: crazyb (Signed) · Date: 30/01/09 12:36 PM · On: Fall into you...

I love this update

I hope Grey/Dean figures things out quick it's breaking Sam :(

Please update again soon



Author's Response: Thank so much!Hope you enjoy the update ^_^

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 30/01/09 09:54 AM · On: Fall into you...

Great update, i enjoyed this chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! ^_^

Reviewer: black_werewolf_101 (Signed) · Date: 29/01/09 03:50 PM · On: Fall into you...

Aw! Your description of Dean is just PERFECT! That is exactly. Why he should want to be Dean... 



Author's Response: Thank you so much! That's what I believe too, he he. Gotta love Dean just the way he is.

Reviewer: nurple_girl (Signed) · Date: 29/01/09 12:04 PM · On: Fall into you...

Dang...I love this story! Poor Dean. He really would make a good daddy. As always, your writing weaves an awesome tale that's so

believeable. Thank you.



Author's Response: Thank you so much! So glad you're enjoying it. It's so much fun to write so I'm happy people are enjoying reading it as much as I am writing it. ^_^ Thank you!!

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 29/01/09 09:45 AM · On: Fall into you...

I hope you get better soon!

This is a great chapter, poor Dean. I really like the fact that he went to Sam and he's remembering more. Too bad it's painful! I loved Sam's description of Dean, every word is true of course and that last sentence breaks my heart:

"He was arrogant at times, cocky as hell, always getting into trouble with authority. He played classic rock until it made your ears bleed, drove too fast, had the worst table manners Sam had ever seen and then there was the endless flirting. He was a self sacrificing bastard who never thought about himself, always put others first even if it meant he’d end up six feet under. He took too many chances, but never with Sam’s life, only with his own."

I think these lines are hilarious:

"You know this is breaking and entering, right?" - "Haven’t broken anything."

"Right, of course… the door just happened to open by itself and you what, felt like it was an invitation from God himself?"



Author's Response:

I'm starting to feel better. Helps that I got a nice lie in this morning, woo!

Thanks so much! ^_^ I kinda stole that little bit about Dean from a mini speech I wrote recently about Dean, rearranged it a little and voila... he he. So glad you like it and the invitation from God line too, thank you so much for reading!!!

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 25/01/09 04:32 AM · On: In the fading light...

You know what I've always wanted to either write or read a SN fic about some nasty fairies! Now one of my favorite authors is writing one. I'm soo excited! This has been an extremely captivating story right from the start even before you introduced fairies. You write Dean/Jonathan, his confusion and suspicions really well. He's very Dean and still he quite isn't, I can't explain it any better, lol. The poor guy who was forced to kill himself... I'm glad Bobby is there for Sam even though he can't be there. And the little girl as a bad-ass Morgan le Fay? Wow! *shudders* It's creepy and clever. In my opinion she's scarier than Lilith.

Keep on writing this and your other stories! It's always a pleasure to read anything you've written.



Author's Response:

What a seriously awesome review! Thank you so much! You made me blush so badly.  I really wasn't sure how everyone would react to the whole fairy thing but I'm so glad that's it's going down well. And Dean/Jonathan - I didn't realise how much a challenge he would be until I sat down to write him, writing a Dean that isn't a Dean... I must be crazy.

But thank you again, so much. It really really means a lot! ^_^

Reviewer: Demonica (Signed) · Date: 14/01/09 09:02 PM · On: In the fading light...

Things don't look to good for Deano. I hope that little brat doesn't make him blow his brains out too.

Please, update soon.

~Demonica~



Author's Response: Things definately aren't gonna be made too easy for him 'cause I love being cruel (I may be a little sadistic). Thank you for reading!! Update hopefully coming before the end of the week.

Reviewer: nurple_girl (Signed) · Date: 13/01/09 11:08 PM · On: In the fading light...

Loving the story. But dang...cliffhange! What will Morgan do? Can't wait to find out.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! ^_^ Working on an update, I swear. Got the plan, need to get it written up.

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 13/01/09 09:17 PM · On: In the fading light...

Terrific chapter Rae. Great!Dean's memories are coming back but I hope that Morgan won't notice what's going on with him. Can't wait to know what'll happen next.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading, glad you liked it! Yep, Dean's getting his memories back, but it's not gonna be that easy for him 'cause I like to be cruel ^_^

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 13/01/09 05:59 PM · On: In the fading light...

Looks like Dean's starting to remember who he really is, great chapter.

Author's Response: Yep, but I've decided not to make it too easy for him. ^_^ Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: gypsywoman1 (Signed) · Date: 13/01/09 04:57 PM · On: In the fading light...

creepy. very good though. But that little girl needs to ugh. Let him go! lol. Nice job. Thanks for the update.

 

Tori :)



Author's Response: Thank you for reading! He he, Morgan won't be so eager to let him go. ^_^

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 01/01/09 06:12 PM · On: Nobody wants to hear you sing about tragedy

Dean is under the spell of Morgan who's playing his daughter, that's not good. OMG!She's trying to convince Dean that Sam is coming for her, knowing him,he'll do anything to save her and she knows it. Riveting story Rae, what's going to happen next, can't wait to know.

Author's Response: The sad thing is that yep,knowing Dean he really would do anything for the one's he loves and as he's convinced Morgan is his daughter and Sam is just a stranger, that's not good. Thanks so much for reading!! :D

Reviewer: black_werewolf_101 (Signed) · Date: 01/01/09 12:13 PM · On: Nobody wants to hear you sing about tragedy

*shakes head* I have never liked little kids...

 I love your stories Rae! Update soon! 



Author's Response:

They can be seriously creepy... little kids that is... *shivers* Especially the really bright polite little girls.

Thank you so much for reading! Glad you're enjoying.

Reviewer: crazyb (Signed) · Date: 31/12/08 06:30 PM · On: Nobody wants to hear you sing about tragedy

Ohhh thisis so good :D

I hope Sam gets to Dean before things get ugly

Please update soon :P

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading! :D

Yep, Sammy's gotta work quickly.

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 31/12/08 08:29 AM · On: Nobody wants to hear you sing about tragedy

Very nice update!

Bring on the next!! 



Author's Response: Thanks so much! :D

Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 31/12/08 08:15 AM · On: Nobody wants to hear you sing about tragedy

Excellent... So my suspicions were true after all. That kid?!? This story really knows how to get me hooked...hehehe.

And the last line left me with more suspicions. 'Dad', what happened to 'daddy'. The little girl is seriously meddling with Dean, Now. Anyways, Waiting eagerly for the next Chappy. Please post it soon. An awesome job once again.

And wish you a very Happy New year!!!

Pranami :)

Author's Response:

Yep, the kid. Damn little girls eh? They're just so tricky. At first, at the end she was supposed to just say that she didn't like the 'tall guy' in the park but when writing it, it ended up turning more sinister... eek. 

Happy belated new year!! :D

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 31/12/08 06:58 AM · On: Nobody wants to hear you sing about tragedy

Wow, fairies great idea,looking forward to more.

Author's Response: He he, so now I get to play with the darker side of fairies :D Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 30/12/08 10:34 PM · On: Nobody wants to hear you sing about tragedy

Great update..looking forward to more. Thanks for updating so quickly..

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I have no idea how I managed to pull off the uber quick update, but I'm glad I did :D

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