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Reviews For hang on
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 02/11/08 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 6 Dessert
Terrific chapter!! You had such a special sentence here, have to quote it, "...it was Dean that secretly stole Bobby's heart" (yeah, exactly and not only Bobby's!). The torture scenes were pure terror, grand - but PLEASE don't kill Dean, it's not a deathfic, right??? Sam couldn't bear to lose his brother, no way!
Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 01/11/08 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 6 Dessert
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 01/11/08 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 6 Dessert
Terrific chapter, I hope you don't plan on killing our lovely Dean? Sam and Bobby must rescue him. Please update ASAP.
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 01/11/08 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 6 Dessert
Oh my, how are Sam and Bobby going to put Dean back together if bits of him are eaten!
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 31/10/08 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 5 Falling soldier
Great chapter, poor Dean, Where's the cavalry? Hope you update soon.
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 31/10/08 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 5 Falling soldier
Reading this chapter an image of a sea of blood and pain came to my mind, impressive pictures! When Yankara told Dean to wash up, it definitely was clear he's really insane and there are no rules at all, just more agony; and Dean forgetting Sam, this one is big way bad, marvellous update!
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 31/10/08 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 4 Giving in.....
Really enjoyed the flashback, with this scary line "not knowing that it was probably the last time he would see his annoying brother in one piece", preparing us for the things to come. Great scary background story Bobby revealed and the torture scenes at the vampire stash were terrifying, very vivid and gory! God, hope Sam and Bobby will make it in time, Dean can't take any more!
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 30/10/08 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 4 Giving in.....
Great chapter, if the brotherhood is going to feed again so soon, I don't think Sam and Bobby are going to make it in time, Does Dean get physically tortured by Yankara? Update soon PLEASE!!!.
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 30/10/08 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 3 a little dark secret
This is getting better and better, what a scary revelation, also very Dean-like witty comments (enjoyed!) and some cliffie at the end! Sam should hurry! Great one!
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 29/10/08 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 3 a little dark secret
Reviewer: pendays (Signed) · Date: 29/10/08 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 3 a little dark secret
very good story so far!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 29/10/08 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 3 a little dark secret
Absolutely brilliant, can't wait for the next chapter to be posted, How is Dean going to get out of this predicament? Post soon Thanks,
Reviewer: Renate (Signed) · Date: 29/10/08 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 29/10/08 12:20 AM · On: Revenge and dispairChapter 2
Like the mad vampire (the chocolate treat - so cool), this is going to be highly dangerous for Dean, you never can evaluate how such a person will react, scary! Looking forward to see more of this fight, but also hope Sam won't need too long to find his brother, good chapter!
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 28/10/08 09:40 PM · On: Revenge and dispairChapter 2
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 28/10/08 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 1
This is definitely a great start (what a wonderful idea Dean was caught when he went out for his favorite goodies!), intriguing plot and a very eerie atmosphere, can't wait to see how Sam will come to the rescue of his brother; really enjoyed this!!
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 28/10/08 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 28/10/08 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 1
Pretty good for a first attempt and I love that you have chosen Dean, because I love him and don't mind it a bit if he gets tortured so long as he survives. I'll certainly keep reading if you keep writing. |
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