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Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 02/11/08 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 6 Dessert

Terrific chapter!! You had such a special sentence here, have to quote it, "...it was Dean that secretly stole Bobby's heart" (yeah, exactly and not only Bobby's!). The torture scenes were pure terror, grand - but PLEASE don't kill Dean, it's not a deathfic, right??? Sam couldn't bear to lose his brother, no way!

Author's Response: Hello , thanks for your response on this chapter , don't be afraid I wont kill him ........but maybe Yankara will ( just a little joke ) I'm working on the last two chapters so ....keep on your .....well you know what I mean . Lots off love copycat666

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 01/11/08 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 6 Dessert

omg this was awesome cant wait for more!!!!! update sooon please!!!

this story is now on my favs list!

 

:)Jess

(p.s i say this alot, but this really does deserve nore than a 10)



Author's Response:

Thank you sooooo much ! I try to do the best I can ! Thanks for your kind review and for putting it on you're favorite list !!!! You are the first to do that !!!  Thank you , thank you , thank you !!!!  I'm working on the last two chapters so stay tuned , lots off love copycat666

 

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 01/11/08 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 6 Dessert

Terrific chapter, I hope you don't plan on killing our lovely Dean? Sam and Bobby must rescue him. Please update ASAP.

Author's Response: Don't worry , I love him to much for that ....rescue is on its way

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 01/11/08 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 6 Dessert

Oh my, how are Sam and Bobby going to put Dean back together if bits of him are eaten!

Author's Response: hello there , thanks for reviewing ....I just love that ! In belgium we have a saying , it go's like this ..... once you've broken you can't be fixed ! To bad for Dean........ keep looking out for more , lots off love copycat 666

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 31/10/08 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 5 Falling soldier

Great chapter, poor Dean, Where's the cavalry?  Hope you update soon.

Author's Response:

Thank you !!!!!! (AGAIN !!!!!)

I'm working on it .......every second off the day so stay tuned!!! Copycat666

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 31/10/08 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 5 Falling soldier

Reading this chapter an image of a sea of blood and pain came to my mind, impressive pictures! When Yankara told Dean to wash up, it definitely was clear he's really insane and there are no rules at all, just more agony; and Dean forgetting Sam, this one is big way bad, marvellous update!

Author's Response: thank you very much , its great to hear this story  is getting true as i intended it to be , happy Halloween , lots off love copycat666

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 31/10/08 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 4 Giving in.....

Really enjoyed the flashback, with this scary line "not knowing that it was probably the last time he would see his annoying brother in one piece", preparing us for the things to come. Great scary background story Bobby revealed and the torture scenes at the vampire stash were terrifying, very vivid and gory! God, hope Sam and Bobby will make it in time, Dean can't take any more!

Author's Response:

Thank you but there's more coming up real soon ! Dean is a true soldier so.......stay tuned for more......

Happy Halloween , copycat 666

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 30/10/08 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 4 Giving in.....

Great chapter, if the brotherhood is going to feed again so soon, I don't think Sam and Bobby are going to make it in time,  Does Dean get physically tortured by Yankara? Update soon PLEASE!!!.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing , and off course there's coming a lot more hurt for Dean! My next chapter is all about that so stay tuned ........keep giving me your opinion its great ! see you later alligator , lots off love copycat 666

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 30/10/08 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 3 a little dark secret

This is getting better and better, what a scary revelation, also very Dean-like witty comments (enjoyed!) and some cliffie at the end! Sam should hurry! Great one!

Author's Response: Thanks , I really tried my best to keep every one's attention on this one , more coming up ! Greetings from copycat666

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 29/10/08 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 3 a little dark secret

great chapter!  best one so far.

this story is very interesting.

hope next chapter will be soon.

Renee



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing , I will do my best to keep it going! Lots off love , copycat666

Reviewer: pendays (Signed) · Date: 29/10/08 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 3 a little dark secret

very good story so far!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much !! I love that you are loving it to , that makes my day complete !!! Lots off love copycat666

Author's Response: Great you send a review , that's always fun to receive ! I hope you keep on reading because there's lots more to come ! Lots off love , copycat 666

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 29/10/08 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 3 a little dark secret

Absolutely brilliant, can't wait for the next chapter to be posted, How is Dean going to get out of this predicament?    Post soon Thanks,

Author's Response: I like that you liked it , there's surtenly more coming soon. Thanks for reviewing ( again )

Reviewer: Renate (Signed) · Date: 29/10/08 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 1

Spelling goofs- but if you're just learning English, it's got lots of tangles!

Are the parenthesis supposed to be Dean's thoughts or yours?



Author's Response: i know my spellings off , and I'm sorry for that , but if you could read beyond them you will understand what i mean . Thanks for reacting and the parenthesis are the thoughts of Dean . Please keep reading and reacting. Lots of love from copycat 666 

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 29/10/08 12:20 AM · On: Revenge and dispairChapter 2

Like the mad vampire (the chocolate treat - so cool), this is going to be highly dangerous for Dean, you never can evaluate how such a person will react, scary! Looking forward to see more of this fight, but also hope Sam won't need too long to find his brother, good chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot , i will surly try to keep you're interest in the story so please keep on reading my stuff.

lots off love copycat 666

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 28/10/08 09:40 PM · On: Revenge and dispairChapter 2

Great chapter, when will Dean learn to keep his mouth shut, Oh well if he did, he wouldn't be the Dean Winchester we all know and love, Please write another chapter I need more Dean torture,  update soon. thanks.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for you're second review . I get the feeling we are on the same level regarding Dean .

So stay tuned for more .......hurt.

Lots off love , copycat 666

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 28/10/08 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is definitely a great start (what a wonderful idea Dean was caught when he went out for his favorite goodies!), intriguing plot and a very eerie atmosphere, can't wait to see how Sam will come to the rescue of his brother; really enjoyed this!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much , I've never dreamed i would receive a response so quickly !

Author's Response: Thanks for the tip , that was indeed very foolish of me . I'm from Belgium so my English isn't that perfect ! ( Keep reading thou )

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 28/10/08 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is really interesting.  Looking forward to seeing where it goes.

You want to replace "wood" with "would" though.  :)



Author's Response: Dean's my favorite to , he is just so...... well you know. Thanks for responding and i hope you like the next chapter to ..... there's more hurt Dean.

Author's Response: Hey , sorry for the wrong response on your review . What i wanted to say to you was : I know my English is bad but I'm Dutch and writhing in a different languish is hard ...very hard . But thanks to you i know now that  wood means something very different . I will do my best to improve my writing .... please keep reading . Lots off love , copycat 666

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 28/10/08 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 1

Pretty good for a first attempt and I love that you have chosen Dean, because I love him and don't mind it a bit if he gets tortured so long as he survives.  I'll certainly keep reading if you keep writing.

Author's Response:

Deans my favorite to , he is just so adorable . There is no better hunter as him and surtenly no sexier man on the hole planet . Please keep reviewing and sharing you're thoughts.

Lots off love , copycat 666

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