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Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/11/08 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 10 The end

This is one that I know I can't forget. Thank you!!!

Author's Response: You're the first to give me that much feedback ! so .......thank you , thank you , thank you , thank you , thank you ........

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/11/08 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 9 What's your name ?

I am trully enjoy this.

Author's Response: Me to !!!!!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/11/08 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 8 Believing

A very clever boy. Interesting dialog too.

Author's Response: I think you are unbelievable reviewing every chapter , but that's sooooooo great !

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/11/08 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 7 Sing to me

Oh very espectacular,

Author's Response: This one was a little difficult to come up with .....so thank you

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/11/08 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 6 Dessert

This is a very interesting reading materiale.

Author's Response: What more can I say.........

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/11/08 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 5 Falling soldier

This was good and I could almost place myself in the same spot.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like It , and reading one chapter after an other .......that's to much honor for little me !

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/11/08 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 4 Giving in.....

Its turning out perfectly well, and I like it. Thank you. You are doing better. Thanks!

Author's Response: thank you again , It means a lot !

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/11/08 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 3 a little dark secret

What I would like to know is how in the hell can Dean be screwed to a vampire.

Author's Response: What do you mean by that ?

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/11/08 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 1

I did enjoy the opening very mysterious that is very good and clever I am again enjoying it. Thanks!

Author's Response: thank you very much !

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 11/11/08 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 10 The end

Hi. You said you're from Belgium, right? That's cool, I'm from Finland. I started writing in English because of SN fan fiction too. I would also suggest you to get a beta 'cause you've got a creative mind, it's a shame to let grammar errors take away some of the enjoyment. At least I would be lost without someone (who has English as a mother tongue) correcting my mistakes.

Anyway, I really liked the idea of this story. Yankara was creepy! My favorite part is the ending where the brothers get back to their normal bantering. Keep writing and working on your English :) Believe me, I know it's not always easy but it's so fun, isn't it?



Author's Response: Thanks for the advice , and for reading this story .

Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 09/11/08 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 10 The end

It was a pretty good first effort. I can only suggest that you get a beta who will be able to correct the spelling and syntax because sometimes it detracts from the enjoyment of the whole.

I didn't quite buy into the antagonism between Sam and Bobby because while they may not be as close as Dean and Bobby, I believe that Saam respects Bobby too much to speak to him like that. 

 HOPE YOU STICK WITH WRITING!

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 07/11/08 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 10 The end

Great ending to an excellent first story!! A grand finale and an enormous extra thank you for bringing Dean back!! Looking forward to something new now!

Author's Response: thank you ....for reading It !

Reviewer: Aj_17 (Signed) · Date: 07/11/08 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 10 The end

I know i already commented, but hey, what can i say.  I was gong crazy trying to figure out what happens next.  Very good with the cliff hangers, and good way to end the story.  I'm also a beginner at writing stories, i actually just got my account the other day.  I finnished my first chapter, and posted it, so it's going through review and will probably be posted in December.  I don't even know if i posted it right.  anywho, please take a look when it comes out.  i'd like to know what you think.  Once again, great job!

Author's Response: You're just to kind , I'm sure your story is OK and I promise that I will look into It when it comes out !!!!! Lots off love copycat 666 

Reviewer: Aj_17 (Signed) · Date: 07/11/08 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 10 The end

Really good!  I liked this story alot.  sorry i can't go into much more detail than that... it was very good though.  nice job (come on, i said i liked it 4 times, it was great! oh, 5 times)



Author's Response: Thank you very much !!!!!

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 06/11/08 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 10 The end

Really enjoyed this story got a bit worried there seeing as Dean died but loved how you managed to find a loophole. Hope you keep writing. I'm a huge Dean fan and loved it when he's hurt/tortured etc. so long as he makes it out alive.  Thanks again

Author's Response: I knew you didn't wont him to die but a little drama was needed here , thank you for reading and reviewing every chapter

Reviewer: anniesmom (Signed) · Date: 06/11/08 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

For a first story and in English you did a fabulous job.  I can't wait for another new one.

Author's Response: thank you very much ! lots off love copycat666

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 06/11/08 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 10 The end

nice job for your first time.

and don't worry about not being able to spell some of the words.  i am sure most of us knew what you were trying to write.

again good job

Renee



Author's Response: Thank you , your kind words make me feel better and gives me more confidence . Lots off love copycat666

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 06/11/08 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 10 The end

For whatever reason this chapter is coming up completely blank...  Just FYI.


Author's Response: Are you serious ?

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 06/11/08 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 8 Believing

Heartbeat chapter, grand one, but please -  don't kill Dean!

Author's Response: Hello , read the next one and you will find out because its the last one for this story . Thanks for reviewing and hopefully you like my ending ! Lots off love copycat 666

Reviewer: Aj_17 (Signed) · Date: 06/11/08 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 8 Believing

ahh!! the suspense is killing me!  it's like waiting for the season finale or something like that.  Anyway, good job! keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you very much !!!!! That's to much credit , but it  makes my day ! Final chapter is coming up real soon so stay tuned , lots off love copycat666

Reviewer: Greeneyedangel (Signed) · Date: 05/11/08 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 8 Believing

kwl

Author's Response: I dont now what you mean by that ! Please explaine , lots off love copycat666

Author's Response: (I'm from belgium so ......you know)

Reviewer: impaladreams (Signed) · Date: 05/11/08 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 8 Believing

i love your story, can't wait to read more.thanks for that


Author's Response: your welcome , the final chapter is on its way ! lots off love copycat666

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 05/11/08 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 8 Believing

Fantastic chapter, leaving us on a cliff-edge, waiting for the next one up. please make it soon, I don't think I can wait long.

Author's Response: This one was difficult to put together and so it took a little longer . The next and finale one is coming up soon ! Thanks again for your wonderful reviews lots off love copycat 666

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 03/11/08 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 7 Sing to me

Yankara literally eating Dean alive, these were horrifying images (and you are a real torture queen!) and only the fact, Sam and Bobby found the hideout calmed me a bit. Very anxious now to find out how they will save Dean!

Author's Response: thank you !! I'm still trying to work that out for myself ...will he die or not ....... we will see ! 

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 02/11/08 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sing to me

Another great chapter,   I take it Sam and Bobby are close, can they defeat yankara? will dean be ok after going through this terrible ordeal, Please update soon, can't wait.

Author's Response:

Hi there , thanks for your on going interest !! There's only one more chapter to write and it is going to be ( at last I hope so ) a cliffie . Still thinking about it so just wait and see.......if you dare ( kidding )Lots off love copycat 666

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