Reviewer: jennie81 (Signed) · Date: 08/06/10 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 5
good story clap clap
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 02/01/09 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 4
Wow. your imagination is scaring the holly bbbbaaaaaggggggiiiiggggiiieeeessss out of me. Which is could, because most of the other read factor stories I've read. Where good, but not as classic and vivid imagery that scaed me. I think the imagery, i'm glad to state its not like resident evil which my husband and brother inlaw enjoyed like a tandilizing rib or lobster meal; but I can safely state that I was able to feel like I was also apart of this story. My whole entity was their. Thanks for that.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, and for reviewing along as you did. I'm really glad you enjoyed the story despite its somewhat more gruesome imagery.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 02/01/09 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 3
You are welcome, and no I won't tell you; but since you are begginly awaiting for it then I will tell you. You should use that theatrical mind for good not for the goory and vivid images. I love it thanks.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 02/01/09 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 2
Those are good ?'s to ask . . . 1.)how much air is left in the body when someone is accedently in a cofin. 2.) How much room is there? 3.) How long can one survive being in a casket 4.) Is there anyway one can request a wooden one instead of a metal one? Im scared to state that this is a good one, but why so much graphic and vivid image?
Author's Response: Well, I did some research on it (unfortunately only after I started writing this story). Obviously, if the Mythbusters are to be believed, a person can survive in a sealed coffin for about 45 minutes before their air runs out. So I'm claiming a bitof artistic licence on the time frame of this story ;-) And yes, you can absolutely hcose the kind of casket if you're planning a funeral. I know that this story is a bit more traphic conerning the imagery, but it was necessary to convey the angst and feeling of claustrohobia in this story. Thanks a lot for the review!
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 31/12/08 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is a very scary to vivid of a demention to be in and small space is not what I would be handel.
Reviewer: Star (Signed) · Date: 25/11/08 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 5
The portrayal of Sam and dean was excelllent! This story sticks true to the Characters. Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 22/11/08 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 5
I reallyenjoyed this. Thought you handled the emotions pretty well. Dean's panic attack was nicely done.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 21/11/08 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 5
This was as usual so very awesome. But I was just thinking, will this story have a sequel, with the Zombie Hunt. That would be so interesting. Anyways looking for more as usual...... A nice brilliant chapter once again. Keep it up!!!
Pranami :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it. To be honest, I haven't really thought about writing a sequel. The whole plot, which was deliberately kinda neglected throughout the story, was merely the background I needed to get Dean into that casket, lol. That is why it wasn't really well developed. So I don't think there will be a direct sequel, but there will definitely be another story, that I can promise. Thanks so much for the review.
Reviewer: pendays (Signed) · Date: 10/11/08 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 4
very good!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 10/11/08 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 4
Very good. Detailed and emotional. Great work. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, I'm glad you like it. One more chapter still to come. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Themis (Signed) · Date: 10/11/08 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 4
Still great !!! Can't wait for the chapter ;-)
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! The next (and sadly last) chapter should be out soon, glad you liked it.
Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 10/11/08 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 4
Wonderful, this was awesome. So finally Dean is back. This is so great. But Just wish that the guy behind all this gets more than just prison that Sam had hoped for. Anyways, keep posting....and yeah feel bad that the next chapter is going to be the last one.... :(
Pranami :)
Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you like it. Yeah, the guy probably deserves more, but this whole storyline was actually just an excuse to get the Dean in a casket situation, so I didn't really expand on it as much asI probably could have...glad you like it despite that. Thanks a lot for the review.
Reviewer: Barbara_GER (Signed) · Date: 04/11/08 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 3
God, this is nerve-jangling! I'm glad I've discovered this story today, I love it! – Barbara
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, I'm really glad you like the story. The next update won't be far, I promise. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Destra (Signed) · Date: 03/11/08 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 3
That was so good! If you were going for clastrophobic and creepy as hell, you certainly achieved it. Can wait for an update so I can breathe again. Great job.
Author's Response: I was going for claustrophobic with this one. Creepy was an added bonus I hadn't really planned on ;-) Glad you like it so far. Thanks a lot for the review.
Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 03/11/08 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 3
First of all, I would say, please please please dont kill Dean.Well, secondly I loved this chapter. Too intense and well, Sam's feeling for his brother in the beginning and at the end is very well put. I seriously appreciate it. A job well done. Anyways, please post the next chapter soon. Waiting to see if Dean lives or dies. But I have faith in Sam. He would definetly do anything to bring his brother back!!! A brilliant chapter.....
Pranami :)
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the great review. I'm glad the story captured you like this. Now, of course I won't tell you what I'm going to do with the boys, especially Dean ;-) I can only ask you to have a little faith in me too, not only in Sam. The next update won't be too long, I promise. Thanks a lot for the review.
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 02/11/08 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 3
Yah! Sammy to the rescue. I'm reading this simultaneously on two sites but can only review on this one. I just wanted to let you know how awesome it is. Next chapter please!
Author's Response: I'm posting it simultaneously on three sites, which sometimes makes updating a very confusing process, lol. But thanks for the review, I'm really glad you like it so far. I won't wait too long with the next chapter, I promise.
Reviewer: pendays (Signed) · Date: 02/11/08 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 3
oh my god!!! dont wait too long to update have to know what happens!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I promise I won't. Thanks a lot for the review.
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 29/10/08 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 2
AHH! your making me hyperventilate, just trying to breathe for Dean! Just awesome
Author's Response: Sorry. But thanks for the review, I'm really glad you like the story so far.
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 28/10/08 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 2
Brilliant work, I'm down there with Dean gasping for air, please update ASAP, Loving this story so much, Hope Sam comes to the rescue soon.
Author's Response: Sam will be in the next chapter, I promise. And the next chapter isn't too far away. Hope you can keep breathing till then. And hope that Dean can, too ;-) Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 28/10/08 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 2
Gah!!! This makes my skin crawl with icky joy! lol. How morbidly creepifying!
Author's Response: Thanks, I was going for claustrophobic and creepy. I think. Basically I was going for whumping Dean--again, lol.
Reviewer: Renate (Signed) · Date: 28/10/08 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 2
Oh, crap! Hurry up, Sammy!
Author's Response: Sammy will show in the next chapter. No promises on the hurrying, though ;-) Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 28/10/08 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 2
Brilliant chapter, it's not looking good for Dean,hurry up Sam. This story is so good i'm adding it to my favorites.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks a lot. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. I promise a Sam appearance soon. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 27/10/08 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 1
this story is just breath taking. I have to admit I've been reading it over on DeanDamage and it's just awesome. One of the best I've read in a long time
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And I certainly won't complain about you sneaking over to DeanDamage, it is a bit more advanced there in posting after all ;-) But not yet finished. Glad you liked it, thanks a lot for the review.
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 27/10/08 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
Absolutely fantastic, I was beginning to panic, gasping in breaths when reading this, Please write more soon,
Author's Response: Glad it captured you like this. More to come soon, I promise. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: pendays (Signed) · Date: 27/10/08 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 1
loved it!!!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!
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