Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 02/03/07 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 4

And here it is -- the chapter with the best 'tingly' moment I've read in a long time. I absolutely love that you had Dean and Sam fighting earlier about going to Palo Alto, and then the scene when Dean was looking up his symptoms on the computer... and still trying to push Sam away... and then he turns... and collapses, reaching out for Sam... GUH. My head spins just thinking about it.

Fabulous job!! I can't wait to get to read this again!

Author's Response:

So glad you found a tingly moment in this chapter. I believe my work is done then! :-)

 

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 02/03/07 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 5

Really edge of seat stuff, this story. The brothers' distance from each other is so painful. You've captured that very well.

I hope you update this soon - and save Dean.

Love the use of the old Hollies song as the title.

Author's Response:

So happy you're enjoying the story so far. I'm glad you could feel their distance - they felt that way to me right after John died, so it's good to know that came across. 

I would never hurt Dean - well, not mortally... :-)

I love that old Hollies song too - and always think of it when I think of the boys...

Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed) · Date: 02/03/07 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

Yea! You made it! Just read your new one! great job!

Author's Response: Thanks for the welcome. It's nice to be here.