Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/10/09 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very beautiful! My favorite part is the last stanza. Look back in your dreams, everything you ever had, everything you ever lost. Grieve in silence.
Reviewer: RoweenaC (Signed) · Date: 19/10/08 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
YOU ROCK! Cal, that was poetry like I'd love to do it.... hunny, you're a natural. So in awe.... ...speechless... Wonderful formatting, too... Like he is in between things, in a place where he allows himself to think and feel, kinda like limbo, between action and rest... like a moment in time, like the blink of an eye, a green, long lashed, very soulful eye... *takes a breath to steady herself* Jeez, girl, you gotta do more poetry. hugs ya, Ilka
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 17/10/08 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
A very beautiful poem,i really liked this.
Author's Response: thanks!
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 16/10/08 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 1
Grand! As I told you before, you're magic with words and please promise there will be more poems! Wonderful, touching, loved it!
Author's Response: well, after a plea like that... if the muse can find 'em, i'll write 'em! thanks for reviewing, as always, they make the world go round... cal
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 16/10/08 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hi Cal I really liked this. Thanks for posting it! Cheers Mary xx
Author's Response: thanks for reading, and even more for reviewing! great to know people like it - *phew* cal
Reviewer: IrishTwilight (Signed) · Date: 16/10/08 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
Beautiful. Very moving, perfect flow. I love it. I may even put it on my wall, actually.
Author's Response: wow. Really? wow again! thank you so much - that's an amazing review to get! (in fact, it might go up on my wall!) Cal
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 16/10/08 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hey My Poet Laureat friend. Like it very much and as I admitted I am partial to a bit of poetry (don't tell anyone tho!) I like the flow and cadence and the sad but not too desolate nature of the piece. Cool! bev xx
Author's Response: thanks! glad you like it, and thanks for the prodding... (it's that finger again!) (sorry - that probably sounds far more rude than it was meant to!) cal
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