Reviewer: mustang (Signed)
06/06/08 06:45 AM · On:
wow that was awesome...I think you truly captured Dean..Thanks for writing..
Reviewer: birdie (Signed)
03/02/08 12:24 PM · On:
Gee it's sad! But it's well observed and says a lot in a small number of words! Poor Dean sometimes life suck's !
Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed)
22/11/07 02:47 PM · On:
your first one and so well written - i am so pleased i found your writing!
Author's Response: This kind of embarresses me now but it still has a place in my heart. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: SeparateDear (Signed)
07/09/07 06:46 PM · On:
Well, since my reviews are being quite poor, I'll do my best on this one cause I loved the story.
you are one amazing writter and you captured what a lot o fans see when they look at Dean (when they REALLY look)
It is also amazing that such a small text (don't get offende, please!!!) is able to contain such a powerfull meaning...
I think it's all, but if all your stories are as good as thid, I'm afraid Imight become addicted...
Author's Response: That's so nice. This was my first piece and posting it was a heart in the throat step so It's nice to know it wasn't terrible. I hope you like my other stuff, it's kinda dark, but if you're into hurt Dean and twisty endings you might like 'em!
Reviewer: catchme21 (Signed)
18/07/07 07:29 AM · On:
I am so not laughing after that. That was your FIRST? Holy crap woman that was good. :)
I loved it. Dean Winchester has got to be my favorite character, that man is so complex, and Jensen does a wonderful job bringing him to life.
You did an awesome job putting him down on paper so to speak. Great job, and I look forward to catching up on all of your other work! :)
Author's Response: That's so nice of you! Hope you enjoy the rest!
Reviewer: PurpleNurples (Signed)
23/05/07 12:08 PM · On:
Very nice and well-written.
Author's Response: Ta so much. I love your penname!
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed)
29/04/07 01:53 PM · On:
What a portrait..!!!....definitely Dean, in a nutshell, if that's possible.....it scares me and comforts me to know that someone else is so in tune with how he finds his motivation....loved the choice between eating and ammo....not quite certain of the 'being wrong' about his brother's love being unending......is this a hint at future happenings.......so far Dean seems to be dearly loved by Sam.....Though I think Dean's love of Sammy is more a selfless love..........
Author's Response: Actually it refers to Sam leaving for Stanford. But I wrote Chipping Away after this so I don't know if that's why either story ended the way they did.
Reviewer: Armaita (Signed)
28/04/07 07:46 AM · On:
This is very understanding of Dean's personality. (I always thought Sammy was too hard on Dean for obeying their father without question.) Also, really like the line about food versus ammunition, because in this series, it is extremely true!
Author's Response: That's very nice of you, I liked that line to. It was really hard to postthis as my first bit, but I;m so glad I got my nerve up, I would have missed so much!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed)
26/04/07 08:00 PM · On:
Very insightful. A look into the psyche of Dean. I liked this very much.
Author's Response: I'm glad, you'll be getting nto the darker stuff here pretty quick. I'm told you need a box of kleenex for Chipping Away....
Reviewer: kwater (Signed)
12/04/07 07:51 PM · On:
Nice Terry, really Nice. KW
Author's Response: Ta! It was my first piece and it shows, but gotta start somewhere.
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed)
12/04/07 02:29 PM · On:
oh...that was so good!! almost brought me to tears for poor Dean!! you did an excellent job of capturing his soul!! so glad i found this story!! Bambers;)
Author's Response: Hi again! I hope you enjoy the rest of my stuff if you choose to read it! Welcome!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed)
09/04/07 10:48 AM · On:
This just shows exactly where your talent lies, you are at your best describing emotion and character. This is beautiful - hard to believe you started here. I hope youv got a lot more in you.
Author's Response: It took all the nerve i had to post that. Almost a year ago exactly. man, where does the time go....
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed)
11/03/07 07:57 PM · On:
Wow, this was your first piece? No wonder you kept going! As a summary of Dean Winchester this is just brilliant, because you show him as an amazing warrior - but definitely not an unfeeling robot. And that's a fatally attractive combination. Great work, as always.
Author's Response: Man you really are working your way backward. Posting that was the scariest thing I'd ever done. I wasn't sure anyone would read it, let alone comment favorably on it.
Reviewer: jozza (Signed)
28/01/07 10:44 AM · On:
Wow. It was like reading about a member of your own family. You described him perfectly, right down to last signifficant detail.
Author's Response: How nice of you! Ta so much!
Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed)
14/01/07 08:02 PM · On:
"He knew pain. His body bore the scars of countless battles, those won and those lost. The scars that hurt the most, though, didn’t show on his skin."
Loved that line. Great work.
Author's Response: I Liked that line too. Ta so much.
Reviewer: tigriswolf (Signed)
07/01/07 11:40 PM · On:
I love this. Totally, utterly adore this.
Author's Response: Ta! Cosidering that's the first Supernatural I wrote, that's nice of you to say!
Reviewer: irismay42 (Signed)
31/12/06 09:13 AM · On:
Ooh this line: "His brother’s love, which he had thought was unending, but he had been wrong." is just so sad!
Another fabulous 'Someone Hug Dean for Godsake' story!
Author's Response: Ta! You hadn't read this?