Supernaturalville
Reviewer: Jenn (Signed) · Date: 21/10/08 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh good, it WORKED!

Now for a real review.

This was a random click for me, and it was an incredible random click.  What a small story just PACKED-FULL of emotion.  It was killing me, so much, to read through this.  

Dean hallucinating Sammy, trying to pretend he's not there, yet wanting him to come back when he finally did say goodbye...AGH, it was like a knife through my heart.

This line:

“Come back, please.” He whispered to the room.

Good freaking love, I almost had a meltdown when I read that.  It hurt to read.  I think I might have a permanent lump in my throat after this.  THANKS FOR THAT *glares*

Seriously, beautiful job, this was quite a read.  So much is packed into such a small fic.  

And btw, Within Temptation is FABULOUS.

<3 



Author's Response:

Aw thank you so much! It means a lot that you were so determined to leave the review, even when it wasn't working!

I seem to have a thing for writing these angsty ahbl tags, this is my third one!! Haha.

I'm really glad that you enjoyed it, your review put a smile on my face :) , and yes, Within Temptation is so awesome!

Reviewer: Jenn (Signed) · Date: 21/10/08 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 1

I tried  to review this earlier, and it didn't show up...so I'm going to try again...I'm sorry if you get a million reviews from me randomly...So I'm going to post this one and see if it works.

 

THIS STORY IS SO GOOD!

<3 

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 18/10/08 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

I loved this, beautifuly wrttten.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: TozaBoma (Signed) · Date: 15/10/08 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 1

I liked it. I think I've even done this. Once.

Nicely written. Nicely worded. 



Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it :-)

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