Supernaturalville
Reviewer: riquitv (Signed) · Date: 27/11/08 10:56 PM · On: Brief Encounter

thanks for the udpate, i was so happy when i saw there was a new chapter :) Until the next one!

Author's Response: Hi there

Glad you are still enjoying this!

Cheers Mary xx

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 27/11/08 06:53 PM · On: Brief Encounter

Fantastic chapter,  Poor Dean still thinking the worst about himself.   Please update soon and sorry that it could be the last chapter.  Looking forward to it being posted.  Thanks



Author's Response: Hi Maureen

Thanks for the review , glad you are still enjoying this, few more chapters to go yet.

Cheers Mary xx

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 24/11/08 03:32 AM · On: Let Go

Beautiful. Just beautiful.


Author's Response:

Hi Midge

Thank you!

Cheers Mary xx

Reviewer: riquitv (Signed) · Date: 23/11/08 02:01 PM · On: Let Go

thanks for the chapter! I understand why Dean did what he did. I know he really loves his family, but, on the other hand, he knew what was better for his daughter and he just did it, even if that meant a lot of suffering for him. Well, until the next chapter :)

Author's Response: HI there

Dean always wants what is best for everyone else doesn't he?

Thanks for the review, Mary xx

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 22/11/08 09:44 PM · On: Let Go

Dean's story was heartbreaking, I feel so sad for him. Mary, awesome work with this chapter. I'm looking forward to more. 

Author's Response: HI there

Thank you, I am horrid to the boy aren't I.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: tvbatina (Signed) · Date: 22/11/08 09:58 AM · On: Let Go

Awesome update. So sad this story's almost over.

Author's Response: HI there

Thank you very much, one or two chapters still to go.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 22/11/08 08:59 AM · On: Let Go

Awww, this was a beautiful chapter.

Author's Response: HI dh

Thanks for that!

Cheers, Mary x

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 22/11/08 05:56 AM · On: Let Go

That was a beautiful chapter Mary..you give Dean such heart felt emotions..This has been a fantastic story and I can't wait to see how you finish it..even thou i'm sad it's ending..Thanks for writing.


Author's Response: Hi there

Thank you, I love Dean but I love breaking his heart more...I'm sooo bad!

*hugs* Mary xx

Reviewer: redgriffin (Signed) · Date: 22/11/08 01:22 AM · On: Let Go

*Sniff* That was too sweet!  Sooo much angst, the poor boys.  Can't wait for the next one!!



Author's Response: HI RG

Thank you very much, glad you liked, more to come!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 21/11/08 09:30 PM · On: Let Go

Awww...  beautiful like her daddy!

I'm just curious.  Did Chris leave Angela because he figured out that he wasn't her biological father?  Or is that even going to come up?

Sorry, might be spoiling things with my questions!  lol.



Author's Response: Hi there

There was a little bit in one of the previous chapters - Chris died in a car wreck Dec 2005 - there is more mention of it in the next chapter.

Feel free to ask anything you like, I love questions!

CHeers Mary xx

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 21/11/08 09:03 PM · On: Let Go

Brill, Dean being all caring and sharing, that's a new one.  It was so sad hearing him talk. Please update soon can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Hi there

Dean opening up doesn't happen often, that's for sure.

Thanks, Mary xx

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 21/11/08 08:16 PM · On: Dark Day

Dean and Sam killed Marion, after what she did, she deserved to die. Awww...Dean opening the casket and looking at Jane and finding that she was wearing his mom's necklace was so a touching and sad moment. I'm looking forward to more. 

Author's Response: Hi there

She did didn't she, but I still feel kinda sorry for her too somehow. Glad you liked the moment with the necklace.

Thanks for the review, Mary xx

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 20/11/08 02:18 PM · On: Dark Day

I'm not sure what to say about this chapter, its left me feeling quiet and alittle sad. Sad for Dean and his loss, sad that finding his mom's necklace on Jane made him realise his Dad must have loved and been proud of his granddaughter to give it to her.

Certainly sounds as if Audrey or Jane had a hand in jamming his gun when he needed it. Makes me remember the line in one of the shows "my gun doesn't jam."

I'm sorry that Sam feels annoyed that Dean and his Dad kept Jane a secret but I hope that in the final explanations he will find forgiveness and understanding of his families actions.



Author's Response: Hi Midge

Rather a dark chapter for Dean, I agree.

Up to the reader whether or not the gun jam was a little devine help, and that line from BDABR was in my head as I typed so we are on the same lines.

Sam will understand by the end..I hope!

Thanks for the review, Mary xx

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 20/11/08 01:56 PM · On: Discovered In A Graveyard

I can't believe I missed this chapter. How did you sneak it past my addictive checking of the updates page?

And what an amazing chapter to miss. Dean back in trouble, scarcely two minutes after being fixed and in trouble in the past too, though John is being more reasonable than usual. Amazing. 

Off to read chapter 20 now.



Author's Response: HI there

It 'cos I have no schedule when it comes to updating, just whenever I can get on the internet!

Glad you caught up though, Dean never really escapes trouble in this story somehow.

Thanks, Mary xx

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 20/11/08 09:51 AM · On: Dark Day

Great update,i'll be sorry to see this story end.

Author's Response: Hi DH

So will I, I've really enjoyed writing this one, just a few bits drove me crazy!

Cheers Mary xx

Reviewer: riquitv (Signed) · Date: 20/11/08 08:57 AM · On: Dark Day

thanks for the update! Every day i check if there is a new chapter, i was so happy when i read "20 chapters". Until the next one :)

Author's Response: Hi there

Thanks for the review, will update again shortly.

Cheers Mary xx

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 20/11/08 04:34 AM · On: Dark Day

aw... kleenex alert! and more coming up, i think.. can't wait!

Author's Response: HI there

More kleenex needed soon I think too!

Cheers Mary xx

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 20/11/08 03:18 AM · On: Dark Day

I feel so bad for Dean right now. I can't imagine the pain he must be feeling. I liked Marion's end..Hell truly is worth than death. Excellent chapter. Thanks for writing.

Author's Response: HI Mustang

Glad you like Marion getting hers! Poor Dean this story really never gets better for him.

Cheers, Mary x

Reviewer: redgriffin (Signed) · Date: 20/11/08 12:28 AM · On: Dark Day

Poor Dean it broke my heart when he found his Mom's necklace. I will admit to a moment of panic at the pills and the whiskey grr!! ;P

Author's Response: Hi there

I was a little sneaky with the pills, wanted you to jump to the conclusion that you did! Sorry, couldn't resist!!

Thanks, Mary xx

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 19/11/08 08:07 PM · On: Dark Day

Excellent chapter, looking forward to the next one update soon please.

Author's Response: Hi Maureen

Thanks, glad you liked!

Cheers Mary xx

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 19/11/08 07:29 PM · On: Dark Day

Ding dong the *@!$ is dead!  WOO HOO!

Poor, poor Dean, realizing that his daughter is dead -- and poor Sam, learning that he was the odd man out on this secret!



Author's Response: Hi there

Funny, I was gonna call this chapter DIng, Dong but it gave away that Marion got hers in it!!

There is kinda a reason Sam was the odd one out, revealed in the next chapter.

Thanks, Mary x

Reviewer: moni9576 (Signed) · Date: 19/11/08 07:05 PM · On: Dark Day

You know, I didn´t wirte that I was glad that Dean is able to see, hear and talk but he is still suffering. I feel sorry for all the Winchesters. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hi there

I'm glad Dean is back too, easier to write when he can talk!

Thanks for the review, Mary xx

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 17/11/08 10:11 PM · On: Discovered In A Graveyard

John knew about Dean's daughter and he told himabout her. OMG!Marion killed her daughter and her granddaughter, shocking!!!Sam, Bobby, hurry the hell up, time is running out for Dean. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Hi there

Yep, John and Dean both knew and didn't tell Sam..oops!

Boys are on their way and next chapter up as I type.

Thanks, Mary xx

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 17/11/08 01:08 PM · On: Discovered In A Graveyard

knew i shoulda waited when i saw that cliffie warning...

great as ever - that last little paragraph, so perfectly Dean! and so perfectly heartbreaking...



Author's Response:

Hi there

I'm sorry and I'm sorry for the delay as well (god I sound like Dean with all these sorrys)

Thanks for the kind words, glad you liked that bit...poor Dean.

Mary xx

Reviewer: Themis (Signed) · Date: 17/11/08 12:24 PM · On: Discovered In A Graveyard

Aaaaah !!! Don't shoot !!!  No, no, no !!! Stop playing with my nerves !!!  Anyway, I know she won't....because Bobby and sam will show up !!! if they don't I'll kick their asses !!!  So, Dean knew, huh ? Still soooo great, thanx :-)))


Author's Response:

HI there

Will she shoot....?

Sorry like playing with folks nerves, do it again a bit in the next chapter!!

Bobby and Sam are on their way but will they get there??? Might now that you are on the case. lol

Yep Dean knew!

Cheers Mary x

 

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