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Reviewer: riquitv (Signed) · Date: 08/12/08 10:34 AM · On: Moments with Me and Mine

thanks thanks for the update, this is a great story, until the next and final chapter. I'm gonna miss this fic!!!! :)

Author's Response: Hi there

Thanks for that, I'm gonna miss it too! *evil muse plots next one*

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 08/12/08 06:02 AM · On: Moments with Me and Mine

A lovely chapter,looking forward to the next part.

Author's Response: Thank you kindly!

Cheers Mary xx

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 07/12/08 02:23 PM · On: Brother, Father

This is a brilliant update,chapter ending was beautiful,Dean got to here his little girl call him daddy.



Author's Response: Hi there

I had to do it, had to give him that after all the cr*p I've put him through in this one!.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: riquitv (Signed) · Date: 06/12/08 09:53 PM · On: Brother, Father

buaaaa, it was so sad and beautiful, i'm glad Dean could hear his daughter calling him DADDY, thanks for the update, until the next one :)

Author's Response: Hi there

Glad you liked!, Dean and his little girl. v.sad.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 06/12/08 04:11 PM · On: Brother, Father

Oh boy that was one hell of a chapter as was the previous one. The fact you enjoyed writing it shows big time. Its fast moving, smoothy written and rivetting with twist after twist all ending with Audrey and Jane protecting and help not just Dean but Sam as well.

Now looking forward to the rest even more than I was before.



Author's Response: HI Midge

Lots of little twists to end this one, bit of a rollercoaster ride as it comes into the station.

Thanks the review is awesome, I love it!

Cheers Mary xx

Reviewer: redgriffin (Signed) · Date: 06/12/08 03:29 AM · On: Brother, Father

More Dean pain...REALLY?!?!? But the end *sniff*, she called him Daddy!



Author's Response: HI

I'm sorry, but I want Sam to help him with something in the final chapter and if he ain't hurt he won't let him so...

I liked the daddy bit too!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 05/12/08 08:57 PM · On: Brother, Father

Quick question:  I can't remember, but was their last name Evans?  Am I remembering correctly that Angela, Audrey and Marion have the last name Evans?

If so, that's really funny.  (Sorry, but big George Eliot fan here).



Author's Response: Hi there

It's Smith! Audrey is the name of my best friend and Marion is my sister! (hope she nevers reads this one!)

Who's George Eliot??

Cheers Mary xx

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 05/12/08 06:43 PM · On: Brother, Father

Wonderful chapter, I loved the twist at the end, Jane and Audrey saving Dean's life, a sweet, touching moment. Awesome work Mary, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: HI Oceane

I wanted to have them save them and I needed Dean hurt for the last chapter to work - so two birds, one stone!

Thanks for the review, Mary xx

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 05/12/08 05:54 PM · On: Brother, Father

Fantastic chapter,  Oh God please !!update soon because I really need to find out what is going to happen to Dean and Sam.  Can't wait for the new chapter.  Thanks.....

Author's Response: HI Maureen

I like desperation, it's good for the muse, makes it feel like its doing something right!

Cheers Mary xx

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 05/12/08 05:44 PM · On: Brother, Father

Mary I love the way you wrote this..Great twist..can't wait for more. Thanks for writing.

Author's Response: Hey Mustang

Thanks! I love your reviews!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 05/12/08 04:28 PM · On: Brother, Father

Oh wow!  AWESOME!!!!  I was hoping their ghosts would be the ones to take the Marions down!


Author's Response: Hi there

Thank you. I really like this chapter so I'm glad you do too.

I wanted Audrey and Jane to get a little payback of their own.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 03/12/08 08:21 PM · On: Dance With A Demon

Another evil cliffy. I'm at the edge of my seat waiting to know what'll happen next.

Author's Response: Hi Oceane

Sorry couldn't resist!!

Update is on, hope you like, Mary xx

Reviewer: heraldtalia (Signed) · Date: 03/12/08 03:41 PM · On: Dance With A Demon

Man!  This story is just killing me--totally in a good way of course!  Poor Jane!  Poor Audrey!  Poor Sam!  POOR POOR DEAN!!!!! 

Please update right away!  That cliffhanger ending is just going to gnaw at me until you do.  :)



Author's Response: Hi there

No dying amongst the readship...not allowed...I'll sent Dean or Sam (your choice) round for some CPR!!

Update is on, sorry there was a slight delay.

Cheers mary xx

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 02/12/08 05:33 PM · On: Dance With A Demon

Evil muse taking one hell of a bow! love this story, and congrats! now hurry the hell up with the next chappie, cause one more cliffie from you lot and my cushions are sawdust...



Author's Response: Hi Cal

I love my evil muse sometimes - this is one of them!! Cheers for the congrats.

Next chapter is up....sorry about the cushions!

Mary xx

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 02/12/08 01:52 PM · On: Dance With A Demon

Great chapter, silly Dean not like him to make such a basic error.  What will happen next,  can't wait to find out, Update soon .Please.

Author's Response: Hi there

I now, maybe he's just not quite back full on his game?

Hope you like the next part!

Cheers Mary xx

Reviewer: riquitv (Signed) · Date: 02/12/08 01:20 PM · On: Dance With A Demon

wow, thanks for the update, great chapter, hey, are there awards for fanfiction? where can i find them? i'd like to see who are the nominates. Until the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Hi there

Thanks!. The nominations are in the forum above (between Titles and Search) just sign in and they are under news. There are loads of great stories in there including my personal fav. White Room by BJXmas - I love it.

Cheers Mary xx

Reviewer: redgriffin (Signed) · Date: 02/12/08 11:54 AM · On: Dance With A Demon

Congrats on the nomination, you deserve it.  Thanks for the wonderful story!

Author's Response: Hi redgriffin

Thanks, I'm kind thrilled with it!

Glad you like the story...I kinda do too!

Cheers Mary xx

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 02/12/08 11:02 AM · On: Dance With A Demon

Ooh, excellent update!

I thought this was just about wrapped up and here we've got more action and more suspense!



Author's Response: Hi there

Just one more step up a gear and then I'll bring it home.

Thanks, mary xx

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 02/12/08 10:03 AM · On: Dance With A Demon

Oh oh cliff hanger,evil lol i can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Hi there

Yep evil muse is back and there is more to come!

Thanks Mary xx

Reviewer: Andromeda171 (Signed) · Date: 01/12/08 09:45 AM · On: Safe in my brother's arms.

Wow, the way you describe Dean's feelings as a blind, mute & deaf man is perfect

Can't wait for more



Author's Response: Hi there

Thank you so much, I'm glad that you like it sounds true as you read.

Cheers Mary xx

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 29/11/08 05:52 PM · On: Brief Encounter

A wonderful chapter, well worth the wait.

I agree with Sam, Dean would have been a great dad.



Author's Response: HI dh

Thanks, I thought at one point I'd never get this one finished!

Dean would be a great dad, I am sure of it.

Cheers Mary xx

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 28/11/08 10:23 PM · On: Brief Encounter

What a sweet, lovely chapter. Dean meeting Audrey and his daughter and Sam telling to DEan how a great dad he'd have been, poignant moments. I'm looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Hi Oceane

Thank you for the review, glad you liked Dean meeting Jane and Sam's little bit as well!

Cheers Mary xx

Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 28/11/08 03:30 AM · On: Brief Encounter

another great chapter...Sam you jerk don't walk away from Dean when he tells you that he ruins everything he touches...make him believe it...So bittersweet that Dean got to at least meet his daughter once...great update


Author's Response: Hi there

Thanks for the review, bittersweet was the thing I was trying to achieve so I'm glad that you think I managed it!!

Cheers Mary xx

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 28/11/08 03:25 AM · On: Brief Encounter

Great to see this update, I was getting worried, and what a great update it is. Sam is right Dean would have made an incredible father.

 



Author's Response: hi there

Glad people like this 'cos I wasn't 100% happy but I just couldn't hold posting it anymore.

Sam's is always right about things like that.

Cheers Mary xx

Reviewer: redgriffin (Signed) · Date: 28/11/08 01:24 AM · On: Brief Encounter

That was sweet and awesome.  It was a long wait for this chapter, but I think it was worth it!

Author's Response: Hi there

Sorry about the wait RL is a pain sometimes!

Glad you liked

Mary xx

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