Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 01/11/08 09:42 AM · On: Remembrance
Great chapter, enjoying reading about before and it helping to explain why this happened to Dean. Update soon really looking forward to the next chapter. Glad you have Dean coping.
Author's Response: Hi Maureen Glad you liked, perhaps should have had part of this in the last chapter but it would have been too much I think. Dean is coping for now...need to see if that continues though. Mary x
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 01/11/08 07:57 AM · On: Remembrance
Bobby making Dean peel potatoes was priceless. It was such a practical, "Bobby" idea to keep Dean's hands busy! And it kept making me remember Dean sitting there rubbing the knife up his arms. I kept waiting for Dean to try writing his words but the laptop was a much better idea. I both hate and love that you ended the chapter where you did. It suited the writing but I want to know what Dean remembers:)
Author's Response: Hi GTS I kinda like the idea of the potato peeling and then I couldn't shake it so put it in, glad you think it fits. Bobby practical as ever. I was gonna do the writing way but the laptop just seemed easier and the boys both spend a lot of time over the keyboard...even if Dean is only surfing for certain sites!! Dean's memories up next. Mary x
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 01/11/08 07:05 AM · On: Remembrance
Touch typing will always have its uses. Nice add on to the morse code. Simpe update but great all the same. Keep it up Mary.
Author's Response: Hi Midge I can't touch type to save myself, hence the occasional slip in my stories!! It was take too long for Dean to back story by morse although I'd really liked to have done that. Thanks Mary x
Reviewer: Themis (Signed) · Date: 31/10/08 02:47 PM · On: Heart
Excellent !! Can't wait for more !!!
Author's Response: Hi there Thanks for the review, glad you are still enjoying this. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 30/10/08 09:32 PM · On: Heart
What a riveting, intense chapter. Poor Dean, he thought that Sam was dead. What John said to Dean was so cruel, at least Bobby told him his way of thinking. Loved the end with Dean hugging Sam, so a poignant moment. Mary, you're doing a wonderful work so far, I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Hi Oceane Thanks for the lovely review, glad you like this. I have reasons for this chapter which will (hopefully) be explained later. I like the little brother moment too! Thanks, Mary x
Reviewer: riquitv (Signed) · Date: 30/10/08 07:04 PM · On: Heart
OMG, this chapter was... amazing, really!!!! please please please continue soon, pleaseeeeee :)
Author's Response: Hi there Thanks for the review, glad you are still enjoying this. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 30/10/08 02:58 PM · On: Heart
Great update, I love the image of the heart being given to Dean and presumably the same heart being thrown at Sam. Totally yuck! And thanks for the quick update.
Author's Response: Hi there Always need to stick a yucky bit in! Glad you liked, Mary x
Reviewer: redgriffin (Signed) · Date: 30/10/08 01:11 PM · On: Heart
John...wow. That was harsh and intense, but totally seems like something he would say. Gots to say though...I luvs Bobby!
Author's Response: Hi there I started with John and I almost couldn't stop, not the usual way I write him but I wanted a big contrast between him and Bobby in this. Thanks, Mary x
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 30/10/08 12:41 PM · On: Heart
Hope that this chapter is explained later on because I'm kinda lost, enjoyed it, update soon
Author's Response: Hi there Thanks for the review, it will be don't worry. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: pendays (Signed) · Date: 30/10/08 11:06 AM · On: Heart
great still love it!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hi there Thanks for the review, glad you are still enjoying this. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 30/10/08 06:49 AM · On: Heart
I'm still loving this story, lovely chapter ending with Sam and Dean.
Author's Response: Hi there Thanks for the review, glad you are still enjoying this. I liked the ending too!! Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 29/10/08 01:19 AM · On: Friends, Family, Finds and Feelings
Another awesome update..Glad Sam is on the right trail. Can't wait for more. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Hi Mustang Yep Sam is getting there...finally!! Thanks for the review, glad that you're still enjoying it. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Spook (Signed) · Date: 28/10/08 10:02 PM · On: Friends, Family, Finds and Feelings
Love the story, cant wait for the next chapter Keep it up :D
Author's Response: Hi there Thanks for the review, glad that you're still enjoying it. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 28/10/08 09:43 PM · On: Friends, Family, Finds and Feelings
What a terrific chapter. Who's in the basement, Angela or Audrey, one died and the other sought revenge and did this to Dean. Suspenseful, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Hi there Thanks for the review, glad that you're still enjoying it. Could be what's in the basement not who? Angela or Audrey, did one die, did one seek revenge?? perhaps but then again....?? *evil laugh* Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: moni9576 (Signed) · Date: 28/10/08 03:24 PM · On: Friends, Family, Finds and Feelings
Did he piss off a witch? Because you mentioned a hex. Now I think the woman who tortured Dean is Angela, the girl he couldn`t save. If not, I cannot wait till the next chapter!!!!
Author's Response: Hi there Thanks for the review, glad that you're still enjoying it. A witch?? I did mention a hex but then she didn't use a hex bag?? You think that its Angela? Mmmm?? Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 28/10/08 03:06 PM · On: Friends, Family, Finds and Feelings
ooh, scary stuff! Sammy missed something, and is it going to come back and bite them in the ass? can't wait for the next!
Author's Response: Hi there Thanks for the review, glad that you're still enjoying it. Sam missed something or did he?? Need to wait and see. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 28/10/08 12:29 PM · On: Friends, Family, Finds and Feelings
Oh gosh I hope you're going to have the next installment soon! Just read it all in one go -- LOVED IT! Poor blind Dean, and poor Bobby and Sam trying to help him! Very engaging and gripping!
Author's Response: Hi there Thanks for the review, glad that you're enjoying it. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: redgriffin (Signed) · Date: 28/10/08 12:14 PM · On: Friends, Family, Finds and Feelings
Oh...come on!!! I'm craving more here. I like the Doc and her assessment of Dean.
Author's Response: Hi there Thanks for the review, glad that you're still enjoying it. A little impatience there, that's a good sign!! I like the Doc too, she's nice. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 28/10/08 11:56 AM · On: Friends, Family, Finds and Feelings
Nice update, no evil cliffie for which I think I'm grateful. And still eager for more. Keep writing please.
Author's Response: Hi Midge Thanks for the review, glad that you're still enjoying it. No evil cliffes - it is so unlike me but I can feel one building for later!! Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: riquitv (Signed) · Date: 28/10/08 10:10 AM · On: Friends, Family, Finds and Feelings
oh no! he didn't checked the basement, well, maybe that was good, i don't want Sam hurt too. Thanks for the update, until the next one :)
Author's Response: Hi there Thanks for the review, glad that you're still enjoying it. No Sam didn't check the basement...but that may have not been a bad thing!! lol Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 28/10/08 10:00 AM · On: Friends, Family, Finds and Feelings
Absolutely brilliant, your story has everything in it, suspense, hurt/emo can't wait for the next update, Can Sam save his brother?
Author's Response: Hi Maureen Thanks you very much for the review, glad that you're still enjoying it. Can Sam save Dean..need to read on. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 28/10/08 09:08 AM · On: Silence and Darkness
I am loving this story. It made me very happy to see an update this morning! Good job!
Author's Response: Hi there Thanks for the review, glad that you're still enjoying it. I aim to please! Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 28/10/08 08:44 AM · On: Friends, Family, Finds and Feelings
Great chapter, i can't wait to find out what happens next.
Author's Response: Hi dh Thanks for the review, glad that you're still enjoying it. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 26/10/08 12:14 AM · On: Screw Up
Mary, great story so far this last chapter had me in tears. Poor Dean. Bobby is awesome! i have always loved him on the show. i am sure Sam will find this girl and put a stop to Dean's torment. hope the next chapter will be up soon. Renee
Author's Response: Hi Renee Thank you, I loved that little chapter - funny I actually wasn't to sure though if other would when I posted but the reviews have completely put my mind at rest. Thanks again, Mary xx
Reviewer: riquitv (Signed) · Date: 25/10/08 10:43 PM · On: Something Wicked
thanks for updating, ha ha, i was on youtube too watching Jensen and his unique interpretation of certain song, ha ha really good. Until the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Hi there Thanks glad you like, yep Mr Ackles nearly destroyed my evil muse with his antics and it wouldn't be the first time!! Just need to torture his alter ego some for that I think. Poor Dean. Cheers Mary x
Author's Response: Hi there Thanks glad you like, yep Mr Ackles nearly destroyed my evil muse with his antics and it wouldn't be the first time!! Just need to torture his alter ego some for that I think. Poor Dean. Cheers Mary x
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