Interesting but I'm not sure the demon's POV is necessary.  That is, we all know demons are tricksy liars. And, ouch, I think Amy's more screwed in the head than Dean!

Author's Response:

We're curious as to why you think the demon's POV is unnecessary, we could do with a little bit more information.

Thanks for the honest review, we know our story isn't perfect and for once we get some constructive stuff that we can work on.

Emma and Ashley