Reviewer: jennie81 (Signed) · Date: 13/06/10 09:18 PM · On: A Glimpse Inside
i dont think you ended the story but anyways good story clap clap
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 27/01/09 04:36 PM · On: A Glimpse Inside
A brilliant chapter,phew i think Dean might just explode. Well worth the wait.
Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah, Dean is close to breaking point here...which is total fun :) And I promise the next update won't be as far. Thanks a lot for the review.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 27/12/08 08:30 AM · On: A New Morning
A very worth while in reading a great subject of finding out the truth as to how you allowed our beloved character of Dean out of HELL. Hopefully, it wasn't because of his good looks. This is a great story.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 27/12/08 08:03 AM · On: In the Darkness of the Night.
Thanks for the discriptive words to show an image of the room the boys are in. I also approve the dramatic impact of not only Deans dreams, but also the theraputic way he witness his little brothers gestures of lungs riseing up and down and haveing hi follow that beat. Those are the best discriptive words that has turned me on to this story so thank you.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 27/10/08 10:49 AM · On: Insomnia
Great update, Dean and the mosquitos was very funny. Eloise seems like one scary lady lol.
Author's Response: Oh, Eloise is fun. I like her, lol. I call her my "little Yoda", because at times she seems ot be chanelling the lil' green guy. But you'll see in the next chapter. Glad you liked it, thanks for the review. Laura
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 20/10/08 11:01 AM · On: A New Morning
Another great chapter, i'm looking forward to finding out more about this woman.
Author's Response: Oh, you'll find out all about her in the next two chapters, I promise. At least all you need to know about her for now. It'll be interesting. Thanks a lot for the review, I'm glad you like it.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 06/10/08 05:23 AM · On: In the Darkness of the Night.
Great start, i'm looking forward to reading this sequel.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, it's good to see you came back for the sequel.
Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 05/10/08 10:18 PM · On: In the Darkness of the Night.
yay!! im the first to reveiw!! anyway, aweseom job and I cant wait to see what happens next!! update soon! Jess
Author's Response: Yay, a review! Lol. Glad you like it so far. The story takes a little longer to get into motion than the prequel did, but I have the first 8 chpaters written out already and it shouldn't be too long between updates for now. Thanks for the review, glad you liked the start.
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