:: Supernaturalville

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 21/10/08 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this one, I mean seriously enjoyed....Great job.
My only quibble is with the flashbacks I think you could have used a bit more of an emphasis. Often I was a word or three in before I realized we'd flash'd back. Still a great job and thanks for the read - Kel ;)

Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! For your quibble; I once read a story that used the same method of alteration and for some reason I became attached to it. I'm very sorry for inconveniencing you!
Thank you so much for allowing me to hear your opinion, kwater!
- Sharp

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 13/10/08 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 1

aww this one was awesome and I really enjoyed it! and I really love that you included John in this chappy because John is AWESOME!
:) Jess

Author's Response:
John is pretty awesome! And it was cool writing him before the supernatural came into his life.
Thanks a bunch, impalamedean1!
- Sharp

Reviewer: youthere (Signed) · Date: 06/10/08 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, that was really good! It flowed very naturally and the style was laid back and engaging at the same time. Good 'un :)

Author's Response:
First, I must say I love your use of 'good 'un'! I feel like I'm down south again!
Thank you very much for the compliments, youthere -awesome penname by the way-!
- Sharp

Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 05/10/08 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 1

I liked this, nice intermingling of flashback and present tense, and a new way to look at the Impala--as Dean's babysitter. Sue

Author's Response:
Oh great, now whenever I look at that black beauty of a car, I'm going to see in big bold letters over top of her 'Baddest Babysitter 'Round.' xD
Thanks a lot for the review, Swellison!

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