Reviewer: MeAzrael (Signed) · Date: 07/06/09 10:39 AM · On: Prologue
Hi, this is the first story from you I've read but certainly not the last! I really wanna thank you, I totally loved it. It's so well written, from the first sentence to the last it has everything an outstanding story would need: the thrill, the right pace, the credibility - and such great ideas. I really had to laugh about the exorcism using Bobbys abilities - and I nearly cried about your picture with the boys holding each other while the other brotherly pair behind them fighting a battle as old as mankind. The emotions, the thoughts, the acting of the persons, all so well balanced and true - you have a gift, and I look forward to enjoying more of it (sorry, I'm no native speaker so perhaps I didn't find the right words)
Author's Response: Oh! Thank you so much :D That was awesome of you to say *blush* And don't worry... not a native speaker either ;) I know all about English bumps and stumps.
Reviewer: jp123 (Signed) · Date: 03/01/09 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 9
another great chapter, love it thanks
Author's Response: Thank you! I was afraid that this chapter would be a bit boring because it's mainly just talk, talk, talk.. so I'm glad people liked it :)
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 02/01/09 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 9
That was AWESOME!!!!!!! you have obviously put a great deal of thought into this story. I am dying to know what happens next!!!! Update soon please.
Author's Response: Thank you! I do try to make the plot with some sense, even if I'm making his up as I go along...
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 09/12/08 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 8
GAH!!!! Holy angst and fear and sadness!!!! The very idea of Sam using his powers against Dean turns my stomach with dread, but a tiny part of me just loves it (like watching a train wreck, I can't turn away). Poor Sammy, in his pain and insecurity he's coming to all the wrong conclusions and is walking right into Lilith's trap! Keep these updates coming! I LOVE this story!
Author's Response: Emotion is not a good advisor and Sam will eventually find that out. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 24/11/08 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 7
You've got me completely hooked! This story is pretty dark, but very, very engaging! I love how you describe Dean's reactions to other peoples' thoughts. It's very cleverly done. And I so love how Bobby figured it out and totally narked on him to Missouri. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you! It's not easy to imagine what it would be like to be able to listen to what others are thinking, but I imagine it would be anything but nice. That whole line from 'Spiderman' about 'With great power comes great responsability'? Crap! I think that with great powers comes great pain in the ass... just look at how miserable all super heros are! And Bobby... Bobby's THE man!
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 12/11/08 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 6
nice twist at the end. Just wanted to let you know that you have a lot of typos in this chapter.....perhaps you were rushing to post (not that I'm complaining:)
Author's Response: Thanks for the warning... it's amazing the stuff that escapes even after a dozen spell checks. Hope its better now :)
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 06/11/08 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 5
"It was the smell that made him grab the countertop and break in to a cold, clammy, sweat. That pork-like scent of singed human hairs filled his nose and did a lot more than remind Dean that, after all said and done, we were still nothing more than animals." ----that was incredibly vivid. You are a very good writer!
Author's Response: Wow! You reviewed every single entry! I love you for that! Thank you for your words and I'm mighty glad that you're enjoyin this story.
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 06/11/08 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 3
the "check-out" boy was too funny!
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 06/11/08 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 2
this chap was written extremely well! I was not expecting Sam's journal to be that way. I thought it would be all emo about his time alone. What a nice twist. It took me a second to figure out the picture on the wall moment...then I was like..."Oh!" :)
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 06/11/08 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 1
I thought the same thing...Dean was used to set the whole destiny thing in motion. How cruel is that!
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 06/11/08 06:20 PM · On: Prologue
you suck...now that damn song will be in head every time they mention 66 seals. lol.
Reviewer: madds (Signed) · Date: 18/10/08 04:10 AM · On: Prologue
oh oh i'm so hooked!
Author's Response: Just realized that I skipped yours... sorry for that and thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 12/10/08 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 2
was the last part supposed to say dream?? oh well! another awesome job well done! :) Jess
Author's Response: Lol! Yeah, it was. No idea why it was cut out, but hopefully it's fixed now. Thank you!
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 06/10/08 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is very interesting! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you! Hope to be able to keep it up.
Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 05/10/08 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
I really loved this.....again!! awesome job!! update soon!
Author's Response: Nice! Two scores. Thank you!
Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 04/10/08 02:08 PM · On: Prologue
wow this is awesome!! I really lved this story and the way you eneded it too!! please update soon soo I can read more love it!!! Jess
Author's Response: Thank you! Already hard at work in the second part :D
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