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Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 10/06/09 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 14

Well, what the hell go for it. As I've said before, your choice of wording and rythimic thrills of placeing the together is like poetry.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 10/06/09 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 13

This is one beautifull story. Thank you.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 10/06/09 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 12

A very well and carefully placed for daddy Winchester to finaly get their.

Author's Response: WOW, Sam I couldn't believe it when I woke up this morning and saw that you had read 12 chapters....lol.  You're gonna wear yourself out.  Glad you're liking it though ;) Kel

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 10/06/09 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 11

WOW increadable and even scarier then that of RESIDENT EVIL 1 and 2/

Author's Response: LOL, scarier than resident evil huh, well damn that's pretty scary ;) Kel

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 10/06/09 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 10

I do like that chapter ending note very funny and cute. A bit saucy . . . but very true.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 10/06/09 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 9

Well, that is ore then anyone can emagine that at least he is somewhate close.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 10/06/09 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 8

Well, this is a good sign that at least he knows more or less that his dumb nut brother is okay sorta speak.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 10/06/09 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 7

This is what a true family should be almost like the WINCHESTERS all united.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 10/06/09 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 6

Well if this youg lady is curtious enough to help she is good in my book.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 5

He is one deranged annel human being what are we in the dark ages.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 4

This is one freaken stroy that it even reminds me of the Bates Motel. Shivers are running down my back. Or even the hitchhiker movie.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 3

If it wasn't for his marine atribute he'd probably be a nice guy and an outstanding father.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 2

One word is " WOW ".

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is a great story so far and I do applaude your ability of not having the cop monkey keep lag tracking on Dean and the Metalicar.

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 01/02/09 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 14

Sorry I'm late with my review... life - you know? Lol...

Thank you for bringing us "Lovely" - I truly enjoyed it! Once again another great piece of writing. Loved the ending of this final chapter "...toward home. Toward his brother." I guess that says it all!

Looking forward to the next story of yours, I'll be on board for the "Sam's departure for college" story! 

Reviewer: supernaturaldh (Signed) · Date: 26/01/09 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 14

I just finished this story, and I loved it.  Great job!!

Denise



Author's Response: Thanks, Denise, so glad you enjoyed ;) Kel

Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 24/01/09 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 12

Just great. I love that Dean keeps calling Sam "kid."

Laura 

 



Author's Response: Thanks, Laura, glad you enjoyed ;) Kel

Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 24/01/09 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 11

Oh very wonderful chapter!

Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 20/01/09 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 14

Poor Dean -- I like your analogy - he's the small country stuck between 2 superpowers!

Thanks so much



Author's Response: Glad you dug that image, its not hard to imagine...poor Dean. ;)  Kel

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 18/01/09 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 14

Wow!Lot of tension between John and Sam and Dean in the middle trying to calm them down. This last chapter is a prelude to Sam leaving for college, great way to end this story, I can't wait for the sequel . Kel, amazing work!!! 

Author's Response: Yeah was gonna leave it as is, but now I'm just itchin to tackle Sam's leaving.  Glad you dug the story and I'll see you on the next one ;) Kel

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 16/01/09 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 14

Kelly,

great story.  as always!!!

Man Sam and John are so much alike.

Dean was always stuck in the middle.

Renee



Author's Response: Thanks Renee, glad you enjoyed and thanks as always for all the lovely reviews. ;)  Kel

Reviewer: pendays (Signed) · Date: 16/01/09 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 14

will be waiting for your next story loved this one!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, nice to know you're interested in what comes next.  Thanks for the reviews - kel ;)

Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 16/01/09 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 14

This was a very entertaining story-- Had all the right elements to make it an excellent read - Good Job!

Author's Response: Thanks Catz, glad you enjoyed. - kel ;)

Reviewer: supernaturalfan (Signed) · Date: 16/01/09 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 14

Thanks for another great story!! I hope you continue with another one in the some setting and time. I love the way you give Sam strength and endurance, but yet when it comes to Dean he still has that little brother attitude going on. I look forward to your next one. Hope it's soon!!

Author's Response: Thanks, fan, don't know about a sequel soon as I've got a bunch of irons in the fire, but I'll get back to it for sure.  ;) Kel

Reviewer: blackcatswhiskers (Signed) · Date: 16/01/09 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 14

Ah Kel - such a great story, but so sad at the end. I'm not looking forward to the battles leading up to Sam's departure. Poor Dean being piggy in the middle, such a horrible place to be! Feel like I should knock Sam and John's heads together.

Author's Response:

I"m right there with you Cat, I have to admit, a true fan moment for me would be to see Kripke tackle that Winchester moment...catch you on the next one - Kel ;)

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