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Reviewer: RoweenaC (Signed) · Date: 01/10/08 04:03 PM · On: Prologue: Only Child

Oh boy. Cal, that sounds like a bad injury. And an awesome story. I thought I started reviewing with your latest piece. So, here goes the quoting:
I absolutely love that you write from Dean's POV. And in the present. Makes it even worse and more real to witness the action unfold from the POV of an active participant. Very good. And all these deep thoughts. I must say, I always suspected Dean to be a deep thinker. Just doesn't want to be caught at it. Out of fear of seeming soft...
"Boy, you got ‘look out for Sammy' tattooed into your damn brain" .... Love this Cal. That sentence is so like Bobby. An as usual the wise, battle-proven hunter sums up what Dean's feelings and innermost purpose are. Great idea.
...kid goat I'm holding... I wrap myself around it, trying to protect us... awh, ain't he just a big ole softie? And how he tries to protect the innocent baby goat. Cute. Always the saviour, even for animals. He should join Greenpeace. I wonder what he would do with my 4 guinea pigs. He'd coddle them to death, I bet ya! Maybe that is a topic for yer next story, heehee. Dean and pets, demonic pets, scratching and biting him... leaving behind cuts, bites and all sorts of injuries...
shoulder dislocating... Ouch! Love it when he hurts his shoulder. Enough mobility to keep fighting and at the same time flinch with every movement. Pain painted on his handsome features. And Bev's most favourite injury. Well chosen for a birthday story!
Great start to a new story, already hooked in and trying to read the next 2 chapters now...
Hugs ya, Ilka

Author's Response:
wow, thanks! you always do review with a vengeance - and i just had to get a dislocation in there somewhere for her. but dean in greenpeace? and those guineapigs'd just walk all over him...
ta!
cal

Reviewer: cheri (Signed) · Date: 01/10/08 03:52 PM · On: Tortued Emo Rock Crap

Still loving it!!"What the hell's a goat doing in my car?"--had me laughing out loud! Great job with the dialogue between the boys. I can so see the teary eyed Sam looking back at his brother---it puts a lump in my throat!

Author's Response:
aw, great! glad you're still liking it, and that line made m chuckle too!
ta
cal

Reviewer: alena (Signed) · Date: 28/09/08 04:11 PM · On: Clucking at goats.

Great story Cal!
The mixture of angst, damage, pathos and humour works so well and I like the way you tease out the story and rack up the tension.

Author's Response:
i wanted to see if i could do funny and tense, and this one just kept on throwing up thrills and spills at every damn opportunity!
glad you like it so far alison, thanks for reviewing!
(next chapter up mid-week!)

Reviewer: alena (Signed) · Date: 28/09/08 03:41 PM · On: Prologue: Only Child

Cal this is Oh so spot on for Bev!
Loved the description of flying Dean still clutching the goat and just the odd injury or several to keep him going

Author's Response:
well, what's a birthday fic without a bit of DeanDamage? and oh, wouldn't you just love to be that goat...?
hmm.
freudian slip?
blame it on too many late nights! (i'm too old for this... ;) )

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 24/09/08 12:28 PM · On: Clucking at goats.

Great story.
Loved Rambo Sammy lol and Dean saving the baby goat was so sweet.

Author's Response:
hmm - what does it say that both the bits you picked out were other peoples inspiration...?
but thanks! its been good fun writing this one - you know what they say, never work with animals... poor boys!
glad you liked it, as always!
cal

Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 24/09/08 09:19 AM · On: Prologue: Only Child

Ok, Dean being licked by a baby goat is an image I'll keep for a while...very cute.
Laura

Author's Response:
licked as in slobbered? or licked as in got his ass kicked? i guess either is a good'n! glad you liked it!
cal

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/09/08 04:35 PM · On: Prologue: Only Child

Cal.
God that's lovely! I adore the goat-baby and you dislocated Dean's shoulder for me? You are so sweet!
I am gonna make you the bestest tin foil hat at Halloween!
Snogs baby! Bev xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Reviewer: cheri (Signed) · Date: 21/09/08 11:26 AM · On: Prologue: Only Child

Nice start--I like!!Dean trying to save a goat---now that's something I didn't think I would ever picture in my head---and the line about Jack, Jim, and Jose--great!

Author's Response: thanks! glad you liked it - can you see him, baby goat tucked under one arm...? all together now - awww.

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 20/09/08 02:58 PM · On: Prologue: Only Child

A great, intriguing start so far. Looking forward to more. I love the idea of Dean holding, and trying to save, a baby goat. :-)

Author's Response:
well, bev asked for goats, she got 'em! even if it was only a little one...
thanks for reviewing - broke rule number one with this fic - 'never post when the season premiere is on' !
*sigh* - 101 reasons to move to the US, and all of them with the initials DW...
ta!

Reviewer: supernaturaldh (Signed) · Date: 19/09/08 04:28 PM · On: Prologue: Only Child

Okay, this was too cute. Waiting for next part patiently.

Author's Response: glad you liked it - next chappie up next thurs! (ish...)

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 19/09/08 05:32 AM · On: Prologue: Only Child

Interesting start to this story.
Looking forward to more.

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