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Reviewer: downbythebay (Signed) · Date: 08/10/08 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very emotive. Your Papa Winchester is so dichotomous, I love it.

Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 07/10/08 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow - That was amazing!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 28/09/08 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, this was amazing.
John's love for his sons just reaches out to you, outstanding.

Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 24/09/08 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

wow. that's all i can say right now. i absolutely loved your voice and the writing style. it reminded me very much of both Tim O'Brien and Jacqueline Carey, two writers i adore. i think you have captured a very real perspective of John.

Reviewer: ThePasserby (Signed) · Date: 20/09/08 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 1

Well that was really great. Impressed, haven't read such a good John-fic in a long while. Kudos.

Reviewer: Winchester_Warriors (Signed) · Date: 19/09/08 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow! This reminds me a lot of The Things They Carried by O'Brian. Amazing!

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 19/09/08 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 1

OMG!!! Tearful over here...How awesome is this? I couldn't stop reading it. I love how you could give us a piece of John and make it so true. We got to see that even before the boys came, before Mary died on the ceiling, John was already a tortured soul. Scared to pass that on to his sons. There are so many parts in this story that I can't pick them all out, or you'll end up reading your whole story again. lol
He was never one of the soldiers who would throw themselves on top of the grenade to save the others in his unit.
"He knew the quality of his life, and it was high."
“You don’t need a pointless ceremony. We’ll go out for steaks tonight, after the salt and burn.” - that is so John ;)

Dean asked, “Would you have saved me before you saved him, if you did know?” and it’s a question that paralyzes John. Not because he can’t answer it, and not because he knows the answer and that scares him – but, the phrasing. ‘Before’ and not ‘instead’, like John could save them both, it was just a matter of in what order. Soo hard, I couldn't make a choice either cause I love the boys soo much!
I love how I can feel John's struggle to make that decision in his head, and that's awesome!
He would throw himself on that metaphorical grenade, because he knows the value of his life.
It’s nowhere close to the value of theirs.
FANTASTIC! Believe me when I say I loved the whole thing, these lines were just the ones that stuck in my mind. I loved it and I'm glad Jenn convinced you to sign up and post;)
Nice job!
Schelz x

Reviewer: Skysalla (Signed) · Date: 19/09/08 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

Petra, this is amazing.
I absolutely love the whole he didn't want them, but they came anyways and it's just beautiful. I think I might have to kill you
You rock Petra, pure and simple.

Reviewer: Jenn (Signed) · Date: 18/09/08 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

I'm so glad you joined, and I'm so glad you posted this, because you're probably the love of my LIFE for writing this story *puts you in pocket*
There really aren't enough words I can use to describe the sheer amount of GLEE I felt when reading this (again) because it's just so GUT-WRENCHING! I adore this fic to so many pieces, Petra, it hurts!
And hon, you make ME explode w/ joy on a daily basis! *keeps you*

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