Luuuuv the epilogue!  It's great to know the next generation! And I'm so glad that Joshua and Eli and Ethan are a firm part of the Winchester's future!

"Right, Ben stepped back, dropping his stupid grin.  "I'm not here to comment, only to stand by in case there's bloodshed and someone needs a doctor."  Hilarious!  I can hear Dean's words through the younger man perfectly!

The commaraderie between the two generations is fabulous!  I think you've captured everyone beautifully!

I love it when a plan falls apart!  Especially when it involves Sam, Dean and Caleb. 

I'm also very curious as to the degree of involvement Sam and Clara have.  And what's this big town secret?

Good tension between Caleb and Dean.  I'm glad they're relaxing in their usual element.  They need a bit of down time.

I can't tell you how much I dug this chapter...catching glimpses of what the future holds was absolutely perfect.  We can now stand anything you throw at our boys simply because we know that there will be a future and that it'll be a bright one.  Thanks for the great story and I look forward to more - Kel ;)

 

Sorry I have been so remiss in reviewing, but I have loved this brotherhood story as always! As for the future glimpse it was perfection. Im so excited to see how things turn out. As you know I totally love Josh, so Im delighted to see that not only is it clear that he is now fully accepted and trusted by our boys, but his son is destined to be a future Knight, and clearly has a wonderful relationship with Dean's son (hey how about in the future him and Mary marry!) Loved that you brought Ben in as the older brother. And the characterisations of Dean's 2 boys. Great to see the brother dynamic continue in the next generation. Oh and Im delighted to see that Josh and Carolyn got together. Hope we get to see that happen in a "present day" fic. Also intrigued to meet Julia! Oh and love the pics of the next generation perfect choices (would love to see pics of Josie and Mary too). Anyway to conclude my squee I am totally blown away by the vast scope of these vivid and powreful brotherhood stories. Can't wait to see how you conclude Dean's deal story.

ow, great chapter!! But they can't stay... Mac, Bobby... Onto the epilogue!

I love the caricatures of characters you've created!  The characters and the boys relaxing in their familial bonds is wonderful!

hm...........Okay so I'm ready for more....lol.  Great update ;) Kel

Enjoyed that chapter even more than the previous ones. Still wondering why the town feels so odd and creepy. Love the fact that Caleb has confessed and that he was so sheepish about it in the beginning. And just love him being used for his mind instead of his body. Dean makes a wonderful guardian, Jim would be so proud. 

great chapter!! Loved Dean and Caleb's late night conversation, perfect mix between a Guardian/Knight and a best friends convo. So these people did it on purpose, and know bout the Brotherhood... The time paradox is interesting also, the hotel is now equiped with every technology possible, and Clara's outfit screams sixties... Next wednesday it'll be for more? What kind of bribe could make you post faster?...

hm...body burnt and the boys are thinking their done???  Don't think so, you'd think these guys would no better by now...lol.  Thanks much for the lovely coffee break ;) Kel

It's like the Stepfords without the hotness factor - hehehe, great line.

How much do I love the boys taking on a hunt together...great setting also, gotta love the 80's....lol